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Posted: 15 years ago
PREM WAS WALKING OUTSIDE HIS MOTHER'S ROOM.ITS BEEN MORE THAN HALF AN HOUR THAT THEY ARE INSIDE.HE DON'T KNOW WHAT THEY ARE TALKING.

PREM: PATA NAHIN MAA HEER SE KYA BAAT KAR RAHI HONGI.KYA HEER MAA KO CONVINCE KAR PAYEGI? AUR AGAR NAHIN KAR PAYI TO.WO KITNI ZYADA NERVOUS THI.AGAR USNE MAA KO SACH BATA DIYA TO? MAA IS RISHTE KE LIYE PHIR KABHI NAHIN MANENGI.(HE WAS TALKING WITH HIMSELF)

SUDDENLY THE DOOR OPENED AND GAYATRI CAME OUT OF THE ROOM.PREM RAN TO HER.HE WAS EAGERLY WAITING FOR HER DECISION.

PREM: APNE KYA FAISLA KIYA MAA?

GAYATRI: PREM KYA SACH MAIN TU ISE PASAND KARTA HAI?

PREM: HAAN MAA. HE SAID LOOKING AT THE GROUND.

GAYATRI: KYA YAHI TERI PASAND HAI PREM? HE NODDED.

GAYATRI: MUJHE KEHNA PADEGA PREM KI TERI PASAND BAHUT ACHI HAI.MUJHE HEER BAHUT PASAND AYI PREM.TUNE THEEK KAHA THA YE SACH MEIN BAHUT ACHI HAI.

PREM SMILED.

PREM: HEER KAHAN HAI MAA?

GAYATRI: ANDAR HAI JA JAKAR MIL LE.

HE ENTERED IN THE ROOM.HEER WAS SITTING ON THE BED.PREM NOTICED THAT SHE WAS STILL NERVOUS.

PREM: TUMNE AISA KYUN KIYA HEER?

HEER: KYUN PREM MAA NE KYA KAHA?

PREM: MAIN TUMHE KAISE BATAUN HEER.

HEER: BOLO NA PREM MAA NE KYA KAHA?

SHE SAID EXPRESSING THE FEAR AND NERVOUSNESS,

PREM: TUMNE AISA KYA KEH DIYA HEER KI MAA NE IS RISHTE KE LIYE....

HEER: MAA NE KYA PREM?

PREM: MAA NE IS RISHTE KE LIYE HAAN KEH DI!

AND HE STARTED LAUGHING.

HEER: TUM TUM MERE SAATH AISA MAZAK KAISE KAR SAKTE HO?

PREM: JAISE TUMNE MERE SAATH KIYA THA?

HE WAS CONTINUOUSLY LAUGHING.

HEER: AAJ MAIN TUMHE NAHIN CHOUNGI Mr. PREM JUNEJA.

AND SHE STARTS RUNNING BEHIND HIM.

PREM: ACCHA CHODOGI TO TAB NA JAB PAKDOGI.

PREM STARTS RUNNING FIRST IN THE ROOM AND THEN IN HIS HOUSE AND HEER WAS CHASING HIM.BOTH OF THEM WERE LAUGHING GAYATRI HEARD THIS AND SHE FELT RELIEVED AS SHE HEARD PREM LAUGHING LIKE THIS AFTER VERY LONG TIME.


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Posted: 15 years ago

nice part dear😊. u r doing great job.this is from my side👏

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awesomeeeeeee too good very nice part
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsum update prem nervous....hehehehe....
prem made heer a fool.... :P
nywyaz luved ya update do update asap..plz..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update, finally g3 mom agreed for marriage, too good continue soon.
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it ws jst superb!!!!!
lovd the way hw prem teased heer while telling abt gayatri's decision!!!!
too good yaar!!!
nw watng for premeer marriage!!!
bt b4 that wud definitely want some love scenes to be updated between premeer......
so nw all i can do is wait for the nxt update....n wll do it wid grt pleasure!!!!
thnx for such a wonderful update!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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nice part..
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GONNA UPDATE IN NEXT HALF AN HOUR..................
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FIRST OF ALL A BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THANKS TO ALL OF YOU FOR APPRECIATING MY POSTS.IT REALLY FEELS NICE WHEN SOMEONE APPRECIATES U.HERE IS THE NEXT PART.ENJOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


PREM WAS RUNNING AND HEER WAS CHASING HIM.THEY BOTH WERE ENJOYING THIS.THEY ARE IN THE HALL OF PREM'S HOUSE.SUDDENLY GAYATRI COMES AND CALLS OUT FOR HEER.

GAYATRI: HEER IDHAR AAO.


AFTER HEER HEARD HER NAME SHE REALISED THAT SHE SHOULD NOT HAVE BEHAVED LIKE THIS.SHE IS GOING TO BE PREM'S WIFE AND SHE IS THERE FOR THE FIRST TIME.PREM'S MOTHER MUST NOT HAVE LIKED HER BEHAVIOUR.


HEER: JEE AUNTY.


GAYATRI: TUM ITNI DARI HUI KYUN LAG RAHI HO?


HEER: SORRY AUNTY.MUJHE PATA HAI MUJHE IS TARAH BEHAVE NAHIN KARNA CHAHIYE.AAPKO BURA LAGA HOGA NA I AM REALLY SORRY.


GAYATRI: BACHON KI KHUSHI PE KYA KABHI KISI MAA KO BURA LAGTA HAI?MUJHE BILKUL BURA NAHIN LAGA.


HEER: THANKS AUNTY.


GAYATRI: BETA AB TUM JALDI SE APNE GHAR PHONE KARKE APNE PARENTS KO YAHAN BULA LO.MAIN JALD SE JALD TUM DONO KI SHADI KARWANA CHAHTI HOON.


HEER: WO NAHIN A SAKTE AUNTY.


GAYATRI: PAR KYUN BETA?


HEER: WO AB IS DUNIYA MEIN NAHIN HAI.


HEER'S EYES BECAME WET AND PREM CAN FEEL THE PAIN OF HEER WHO WAS STANDING BEHIND HIS MOTHER.


HEER: MERE GHAR MEIN KOI BHI NAHIN HAI AUNTY.


GAYATRI PLACED HER HAND ON HEER'S SHOULDER.


GAYATRI: BETA AAJ SE MAIN TUMHARI BHI MAA HOON.ACHA YE BATA TUJHE NEG MEIN KYA CHAHIYE?


SHE SAID TO CHANGE THE TOPIC.


HEER: JO MAIN MANGUNGI AAP MUJHE DENGI AUNTY.


GAYATRI: HAAN BETA TU BOL TO SAHI.


PREM DON'T KNOW THAT WHAT HEER WILL ASK AND WHEN HE KNEW HER WISH HE FELT PROUD FOR CHOSING HEER AS HIS LIFE PARTNER.


HEER: AUNTY AP MEHER KO JANTI HAI?



GAYATRI: MEHER......HAAN PREET KI SECRETARY RIGHT.


HEER: HAAN AUNTY WAHI.WO APKO KAISI LAGTI HAI?


GAYATRI: BAHUT ACHI LADKI HAI.BAHUT ACHE SANSKAR HAI USKE.


HEER: AUNTY MEHER AUR PREET EK DUSRE SE PYAR KARTE HAIN.


GAYATRI: KYA? PAR PREET NE TO KABHI MUJHE NAHIN BATAYA.


HEER: WO DARTA HAI AUNTY KI APNE AGAR NA KEH DIYA TO?


GAYATRI: TUM YE BAAT KAISE JANTI HO?


HEER: MUJHE PRREM NE BATAYI.AUNTY MEHER KE GHARWALE USKI SHADI KARWANA CHAHTE HAI WO IS RISHTE KE LIYE TABHI HAAN KAHENGE AGAR AAP UNSE BAAT KARENGI.


GAYATRI: PREET AUR PREM JO BAAT MUJHAE NAHIN KEH SAKE WO TUMNE KEH DI TUMHE DAR NAHIN LAGA?


HEER: LAGA AUNTY PAR PREM BAHUT PARESHAN THA IS BAAT KO LEKAR AUR MAIN PREM KO PARESHAN NAHIN DEKH SAKTI.


GAYATRI: PREET KAHAN HAI?USE ABHI GHAR BULAO. SHE SAID LOOKING AT PREM. HEER: APNE APNA JAWAB NAHIN DIYA AUNTY.PLEASE IS RISHTE KE LIYE MAAN JAIYE WO DONO EK DUSRE SE BAHUT PYAR KARTE HAI NAHIN JEE PAYENGE EK DUSRE KE BINA.PLEASE HAAN KAR DIJIYE.



GAYATRI: THEEK HAI PAR PEHLE MERI EK SHART HAI KYA TUM USE MANOGI? HEER: AP JO KAHENGI MAIN KARNE KE LIYE TAIYAR HOON AUNTY.


GAYATRI: AAJ SE TUM MUJHE AUNTY NAHIN KAHOGI.MAA KAHOGI.BOLO MANZOOR HAI?


SHE SAID SMILING.PREM AND HEER ALSO SMILED.


HEER: JEE AUNTY.


HEER SAID SMILING.


GAYATRI: ARE...PHIR AUNTY.


HEER: SORRRY MAA.


GAYATRI: YE HUI NA BAAT.PREM PREET KO ABHI PHONE KARKE GHAR BULA MAIN AAJ HI MEHER KE GHAR JANA CHAHTI HOON.MUJHE BAHUT SARI TAIYARIYAN KARNI HAI.TERE BAUJI KO BHI TO YE KHUSHKHABRI DOON KI UNKE DONO BETON NE BAHUT PYARI BAHUEIN PASAND KAR LI HAIN.


AND SHE LEFT THE HALL AND WENT TO THE KITCHEM TO PREPARE THE SHAGUN.PREM AND HEER WERE ALONE IN THE HALL.PREM WAS JUST LOOKING AT HEER SMILING.



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