New SS: Nafrat Chapter 3 Oct.24 pg.25 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

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update soooooooon plezzzzzzzzzz



I will soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice update..


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i will!!


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nice update..


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadhz

nice SS..............loved it.................update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Thanks alot!
Glad u liked it!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for the pm
lovely update
oh my god they hate each other so much well cant wait for the next update
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thanks for the pm
lovely update
oh my god they hate each other so much well cant wait for the next update
update soon



SUre will thanks!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hay guys sorry didn't update!! But i was really busy i had this update ready but didn;t have the time to post!!

Chapter 2

The whole room was full of silence and here Prem and Heer were looking at eachother with angry looks!! "Yes we will see" said Prem "now get away from my face" said Prem "my face is better than urs and besides i was here before u!!" said Heer "so its my room" said Prem "its mine too now" said Heer and went and laid down on the bed. "Hay get off the bed" said Prem "no i get to sleep on the bed since im the girl" said Heer "i dont give a shit u get off my bed and dont u dare sleep on my couch but u can sleep on the floor" said Prem

"Ohh really well make me" said Heer " i dont make trash i throw it" said Prem and Heer was soo mad so she got up when to the washroom got the trash can and?????? threw it at Prem. "See now ur the trash so throw urselfe outtt" said Heer pointing at the door and was going to the bed when Prem grabbed Heer's wrist and pulled her towards him and she hit his chest.
"Tume hai dar nahi lagta?" asked Prem looking straight into Heer's eyes and letting go of her "muje ko dar var nahi lagta pata hai kyu???" asked Heer circling Prem "cause they wrost u can do is rape me and if u do than u will go straight to jail and i will fufill my revenge when u come out" said Heer "and than u can hit me which will cause me to do this" said Heer.
She came infornt of Prem and opened up three of Prem's shirt buttons "what the hell are u doing?" asked Prem "this" said Heer and put her fingers in the middle of Prem's chest and took them as far down as possible "ahh" screamed Prem "now these will prove that u did rape me or even when hit me u will get this too" said Heer "and if u do that than i will do this" said Prem and pulled Heer's hair from the back
"owwwwww" screamed Heer "u know this counts as abuse" said Heer "i could care less" said Prem than Heer pushed Prem back and he fell on the bed and Heer went on him "muje neecha lejana bhaut mushkil hai" said Heer and got off Prem "now u can sleep on the bed,couch.or floor doesn't effect me one bit" said Heer "but if u come to my side on the bed than u will get it" said Heer.
"ya like i would love to come to ur side and touch a b***h like uu" said Prem "speaking of b***hes ur name will come up" said Heer and laid down on the bed and Prem laid down beside her and before going to sleep Prem pulled Heer's hair back and her face came back too "good night" said Prem and let go than Heer pulled Prem's hair hard "ahhh" screamed Prem "good night to u to sweetyy" said Heer and went to sleep!
The next morning Heer woke up and saw Prem sleeping peacfully and thought "aww sleeping beauty" thought Heer "but not for longgggg" thought Heer and got up and went to the washroom took a quick bath and got changed into a red sari that looked like this :
Than she went to the washroom and filled a bucket up with hot hot hot water put some bleach in it and than she saw a big spider on the ground "although im scared of bugs i will do anything to hurt suprise or scare Prem" thought Heer and picked up the spider and held it in her hand than she came to Prem and put the spider in Prem's shirt and threw the water on Prem "AH HOTTTTT HOTTTTTTTTT" yelled Prem and Heer was laughing looking at Prem screaming like a girl!!! "U B***** HOW DARE UUUU!!!!!!!!" yelled Prem and Heer was shocked cause this was the madest that Heer had seen Prem!!!
SO how was it???
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Harpreet *** waves ***. I'm back 😃
Wow, what an update. I can't believe Prem and Heer this to each other. I have feeling it is going to only get worse.
I hope we will find out what made them hate each other soon.
Thank you for the PM. Looking forward to your next update.

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