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Posted: 15 years ago
great


thanx 4 the pm


update soon


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Posted: 15 years ago
prem mariired sanjana and has son too .. why r u giving me so many shocks ..do u want die gettinga heart attack it's not good to give shocks lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
okay friends
i have given enough pain for you all.
so i'm thinking of giving medicine to your pain.
just a pain killer. hope it cures.
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Posted: 15 years ago
yes
because you have given a 3 line comment this time.
for the first time.
really i got surprised and re checked whether it is really from you.
i'm happy for the first time my writing impressed you.
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Posted: 15 years ago
thnku so much selvy...luv u....
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Shot 13

Heer entered her house with anger. She threw her hand bag on the couch and rushed to her room. Teji and Balraj confused. Chahat walked to couch and took her teddy. She sat on the couch 'nanu open.' She handed a chocolate to him. Balraj 'who gave this beta?' Chahat 'papa.' she restlessly waited until he opened the cover of the chocolate. She started biting the chocolate happily hugging her teddy.

Teji looked at Chahat and understood today Heer met Prem. She walked into Heer room. She is lying on the bed. She is crying holding a pillow tightly. Teji 'Heer, why are you crying now?' Heer angrily got up. She shouted angrily 'he married that Sanjana. How can' Teji cut in calmly 'who?' Heer 'Prem'

Teji 'you don't have any rights on him. You divorced him. You wanted him to marry Sanjana right? Then what is your problem now.' Heer threw pillow down angrily 'he is inviting me to his house for pooja. He is instructing me to bring Chahat daily to office. who is he to order me?' Teji 'he is your boss you have to obey to him.' Heer 'I'm going to resign the job.' Teji 'okay do that. That better. You have given pain earlier. Its better you stay away from him.' Heer looked at her with tears of confusion. Teji several times advised her to return to Prem. Now her same mother advises her to stay away from Prem. Heer couldn't believe her own ears.

Teji ' I'll tell bapuji to find a job for him.' Heer 'why?' Teji 'we need to live until you get new job.' Heer angrily 'why should I leave the job. I'm not scared to face him.'

Teji 'then go to pooja t'row morning.' Heer 'he invited all the family members.' Teji 'what time?' Heer 'morning 6.' Teji 'okay wash your face. before Rajveer comes stay calm.' Heer washed her face and went out of the room. She saw Chahat happily eating the chocolate and giving report about her papa to nanu,

Chahat happily 'papa will get a new teddy t'row.' Balraj 'is it?' Chahat eating her chocolate shook her head 'ha. He kissed me here.' she pointed her cheek 'here'. 'I kissed him.' Heer unable to control her tears closed her mouth and cried silently 'how she will understand he is not her father?' Entire night she struggled without sleep. Chahat slept hugging her teddy happily. In her sleep she called 'papa.' many times with a smile.

Next morning, Heer got ready. She wore her favorite color green saree. Except mangalsutra around her neck she didn't put any jewels. She kept sindoor in her maang with tears. 'I'm still keeping this in your name but you forgot me Prem.'

Heer dressed Chahat. Chahat is so excited to go to her papa. 'mamma fast. Papa will be waiting for Chahat.' she is continuously blabbering about her papa. Heer hiding her tears 'Chahat beta. There will be many big people. So you should be quiet. Don't talk much. Don't disturb papa.' Chahat gave 'why?' expression face to her. keeping her palm on her chest 'my papa.' Heer wanted to say 'no he is not.' But she is too small to understand that. Heer feared 'what Sanjana will think if Chahat calls Prem her papa.'

With many confusion Heer entered the Juneja Mansion with Chahat, Teji and Balraj. The house looked exactly like the Delhi house. Actually the structure is different but the interior are similar to Delhi house. Pooja preparations are in full swing. Gaya3 and Veena are instructing servants. Lalit is talking to someone in the phone. They are the first to arrive. Chahat holding Heer hand looked around. Suddenly releasing her hand from Heer's she ran towards Lalit shouting 'dadu.'

Lalit looked at Chahat coming towards him. 'arrey my Chahat.' he grabbed her in his hand and kissed her. 'Gaya3 see Chahat.' Gaya3 and Veena rushed to Lalit. Both hugged her kissed her. Gay3 turned and looked at Heer who is still standing in the entrance door. Veena 'come in beta. Why are you standing there?' Heer fearfully stepped in. Heer touched Lalit, Gaya3 and Veena feet for blessing. She stood silently looking around. Lalit, Gaya and Veena greeted Teji and Balraj.

Veena asked Heer to help in arrangements. Heer started helping her. Gaya3 came to her with a dress 'Heer, you keep this in Prem's room.' Heer confusingly looked at Gaya3 'ma.' Gay3 smiled 'this house is similar to our Delhi house.' Heer nodded and kept one step towards the staircase and stopped 'ma.' Gay3 smiled 'Prem is not in the room. He went to nearby mandir with his family.' Gay3 walked away.

Heer fearfully pushed the door. She stepped in. she placed the dress on the bed. She looked around. The room is exactly decorated in the way similar to their bedroom in Delhi house. There are no pictures of Chahat or hers. Few paintings hanging that too select by her for Delhi house. Even the color of the wall and curtains are her choice. A big teddy is sitting on the bed. She thought 'must be he bought this for his son.'

She turned and looked at the bedside with the hope to see his family picture. She saw Prem's picture in the bed side. She picked up it in his hand. Tears started rolling down on her cheek. She remembered the days she spent with Prem. Her fingers touched his face. She whispered 'I love you Prem.' She pressed her lips on his in the picture. She cried pressing hard. Not wanted to lift her lips from the picture she stayed closing her eyes remembering his love.

Suddenly she heard foot steps. She placed the picture back on its place. She wiped her tears and turned to leave. She bumped on to someone and lost her balance. Two hands saved her from hitting the ground. One hand went around her waist another cupped her head from the back. She held his shirt. Without looking up his face she can clearly sense he is Prem.

Prem pulled her closer and kissed her forehead. He nuzzled his lips on her cheek 'where are you running?' without able to answer she held his shirt tight. His lips on her face made her weak. He moved down to her chin. He brushed his lips with hers. She closed her eyes. Her lips parted giving invitation to him. He kissed the edge of her lips and moved down to her throat. She moaned.

He whispered into her years 'I love you Heer. I want to hear the same from you.' Heer hands slipped around his chest. He moved his lips to her shoulder. He kissed in the crook of her neck. She tightened her hand around him pressing more on to him. She whispered 'I love you. I love you Prem.' As his hands roamed on to her back to pull her dori knot, she jerked and pulled herself away.

He didn't leave her 'Heer, why are you hiding your love to me?' Heer 'Prem, this is not right? Sanjana will get angry.' Prem looked at her face with a smile 'why are you thinking about Sanjana now?' Heer looked at him confusingly 'she is you wife.' Prem pushed strand of hair from her face and tucked behind the ears.

Prem 'Heer, answer me do you love me or not?' Heer looked down. He lifted her head 'look at my eyes.' Now she can't lie to him. Heer with tears shook her head. Prem 'I want you to hear form you.' Heer 'I love you Prem.' Prem cupped her face 'then why you left me alone?' Heer looked away 'i'm not a perfect match for you. I'm unfit to be your wife.' Prem leaned closer. 'who said?' Heer 'Chahat is someone's daughter.' She cried 'I don't even know the person who' Prem covered her mouth 'Heer, Chahat is my daughter. I never saw her in different way. Then why are you putting boundary around you.' Heer 'now its not the time to talk about that. Its all over. You have son. I don't want to interfere in your life. Please stay away from Chahat. that is good for you, Sanjana and Son.'

Heer tried to move away from him but Prem didn't allow her to escape 'no one will come here now.' Heer 'Prem, even then its wrong.' Prem 'no today I want you.' Heer shocked and looked at him. she pushed him away 'no Prem. Please.' Prem tightening his grip around her 'no I want you now.' Heer 'get ready for pooja before Sanjana comes.'

Prem 'I'm talking about you but you are bringing her again and again.' Heer 'she is your wife.' Prem 'I love you.' Heer 'you have a son.' Prem 'I want a son from you.' Heer 'Prem' she struggled inside his grip as he started kissing her again on her shoulder. He pushed her backwards and fell on the bed along with her. He is lying on the top of her. His hands pulled the dori knot and started kissing her hungrily. His hands caressing her waist, he pressed his lips on hers. Heer turned her face left and right to avoid his lip contact with hers but he is too strong for him. 'I won't leave you today Heer.' Heer 'Prem, please' she begged. Prem 'no way Heer.' even though she begged him to stop, she is struggling to control herself.

Heer opened her mouth for him. Both went for a deep kiss until they needed air. She started breathing heavily. Prem smiled 'do you want to talk to Sanjana?' Heer got tensed and tried to get up. But Prem still on her top, took his mobile and did something. 'you have to wait for a minute.' Heer looked at him confusingly.

Mobile rang. He showed the mobile to her 'Sanjana calling.' He teasingly smiled. Heer don't know how to react.

Its alarm. Prem pressed the stop button and answered 'ha Sanjana. Where are you?' he looked at Heer 'do you want to talk to Sanjana.' Heer with fake angry started hitting him with her palm with tears 'you cheat. you did this to make me jealous.' Prem laughed 'yes. I enjoyed when you bite your lips to hide your tears.'

Prem rolled on the bed pulling her over him and teasingly smiled. 'How can I get a son when you are staying away from me?' Heer like a kid snuggled into his arms hitting his chest lovingly 'Premm.' Prem laughed 'only my wife can deliver my son.' He started kissing her.

Heer 'Prem. You' Prem covered her mouth with his palm and shook his head 'no one can take your place in my heart Heer. Only you are my wife. are you happy?' Heer 'so you lied to me.' Prem shook his head like a kid with a smile.

Heer 'why you lied?' Prem 'to get my Heer and Chahat back.' tears ran down her cheek understanding his love for them. 'Prem.' She hugged him tightly. Prem 'I struggled without you both Heer. not only me. Dad, Ma and Bua cried a lot.' Heer 'I'm sorry Prem.'

~~FLASHBACK~~

Prem 'I'm going to start a new life.' Sanjana is happy. Prem started climbing the stairs. Sanjana followed him. Prem stopped in his pace 'Sanjana, you leave this house.' Sanjana 'Prem, what are you saying?' Prem 'listen Sanjana I'll give you 30 minutes before that leave this house. I don't want to see your face.' Sanjana 'why? You loved me.' Prem cut in 'its my fault. I can never love anyone the way I loved my Heer.' Sanjana 'she left you but.' Prem interrupted 'because of you. I know she didn't take this decision on her own. Because of you she left me alone.' Sanjana 'Prem, you' Prem cut in 'I don't want to argue with you. just leave.' Sanjana tried to argue. Prem 'if you didn't leave now I'll call the police.'

Sanjana left cursing him. Prem went to his room and sat on the bed picking up their family picture. Lalit, Gaya3 and Veena entered his room. Gaya3 sat next to him 'Prem' Prem wiping his tears 'ma, Heer can't live away from me too long. She will come back to me.' Elders surprised to see his confidence on his love. Prem 'give her a month time then I'll meet her. By that time she will also understand my love. I'll make her fall for me again.' Elders too felt the same.

Heer left the mansion and went to the house which she already looked for them. Teji and Balraj didn't talk anything about Prem. They stayed quiet. Heer 'bapuji ma, promise me you won't give any news to Prem. You both should not conduct him in future.' They are shocked. But they promised for Heer's happiness.

Heer tried for job. After 10 days she got a job in Mumbai. So along with Balraj and Teji left to Mumbai. She looked a piece of paper with Prem mobile number in Balraj shirt. She threw that outside. As uneducated parent Balraj and Teji don't know how to inform their shifting to Prem.

Prem after a month went to the house where Heer was living in Delhi. He is shocked to hear that she vacated the house 15 days back. He is shattered. As he know Heer is an architect, he searched each and every architect office in Delhi. But there is no news about Heer.

After 10 months, Prem phone rang. Prem lost in Heer's thought attended the call is in very sad tone. Karan jumped on the other side 'Prem, we got Heer's address.' Prem sat on the bed 'where?' Karan 'in Mumbai.' Prem surprised 'are you sure?'

Karan 'yes. y'day we came to kirtika's mother house. when Kirtika went to terrace to dry cloth, she saw Heer in the neighborhood. She told me about Heer. Then we asked about that to her mother. She too confirmed that she is Heer.'

Prem 'give me the address. I want to see my Heer.' Karan 'Prem, wait. There is a guy staying with them.' Prem got shocked. Karan sensing his shcok 'Prem, don't get upset. But Chahat is calling him uncle. Even then we don't know much about Heer's current life. Just wait for one day. I'll give you full detail.' Prem agreed. He is happy to get news about Heer. but 'who is that guy?' he decided to wait until Karna gives more information.

Karan and Kirtika went to Heer house next day after Heer went to office. Balraj and Teji are playing with Chahat. Karan and Kirtika introduce themselves as neighbor. Teji greeted them. Karan casually 'are you staying alone here?' Balraj 'my daughter is with us.' He pointed Chahat 'her daughter.' Karan 'your SIL?' Balraj 'no. he is not with us.' Kirtika doubtfully 'then the person who is staying with you.' Teji 'he is a guest but gives money for food.' Karan understood he is a paying guest here.

Karan slowly but with confusion 'I'm your SIL Prem's friend.' Balraj and Teji face showed up some happiness that gave Karan and Kirtika some hope. Balraj 'how is Prem?' Teji with tears 'he is a nice man. Heer' she wiped her tears. Kirtika 'do you want your daughter to go back to Prem?' Balraj 'will Prem accept her?' Karan 'he is searching for Heer for the past 10 months.'

Balraj and Teji got surprised. Teji 'but, Heer won't accept to go back to him.' Kirtika 'for that we have a plan.' Karan 'where is she working?' Balraj and Teji shook their head 'don't know. She is working with Rajveer. That's all we know.'

Kirtika 'where is her room? we may get something if we search her things.' Teji got up 'come with me.' While Karan sat with Barlaj to discuss, Teji took Kirtika to Heer's room. Kirtika started searching the room. she opened a small table and took one album. She opened it and saw Chahat picture in the front. She placed that on the bed and continued searching.

Chahat who followed them into the room saw the album. Standing near the bed and Placing album on the bed she started telling 'Chahat, nanu nani.' Suddenly Kirtika turned and looked at Chahat when she heard 'papa dadu dadi.' Chahat placing index finger on each and every ones face 'papa mamma' Kirtika rushed to her. She asked pointing few more pictures. Chahat identified them correctly. Kirtika 'who taught you all this?' Chahat 'mamma' she gone back to point the members. She kissed Prem picture telling 'papa'.

Kirtika understood Heer is teaching her with the help of this album. She is happy Heer still have love on Prem. With that happiness she searched and found out a visit card in Heer's name. Kirtika smiled 'Aunti, we got it.' She ran out 'Karan, we got it. here is the address.' She also told about Chahat pointing each member in photo album. Karan looked at the card and thought for a while. He pulled out his mobile and dialed the number.

Karan 'Is this Mukti builder.' Lady 'yes sir.' Karan 'can I speak to Mrs. Heer.' Lady 'please hold on sir.' His line transferred. Heer 'yes' Karan disconnected the line. 'yes she is working in this.' Karan got up 'uncle don't tell about us to Heer. We have to plan carefully. Teji and Balraj agreed.

Prem received a call from Karan. 'Prem, we got the details, Heer is living with your memories.' As he told what they saw in Heer's house, Prem started crying on the other side 'then why she left me.' Karan 'Prem, don't get emotional. We have to move carefully.'

In another 6 hours, Prem landed in Mumbai. Before that Karan collected all the details about Heer and his workplace. Karan met Prem in his Mumbai hotel 'Prem, Mukti builder owner is selling his office. He has some financial problem' Prem 'its good. I'm ready to buy it for any cost.'

Next one month, Prem and Karan worked out carefully and bought that office. Prem strictly ordered Mehta not to disclose his name to his staff.

~~END~~

Heer cried 'I'm sorry Prem. Without knowing your love I gave you pain.' Prem wiped her tears and kissed her cheek. Heer 'I love you.' Prem cupped her face 'tell me one more time.' Heer shyly smiled 'I love you.' she buried her face into his chest. Prem hugged her 'I love you too.' He brushed her lips on her shoulder kissing in between. Heer tightened her grip around him.

They jerked apart when they heard 'papa' Prem 'our daughter has come.' Heer rushed to washroom. He opened the door and picked her up in his hands and kissed her. he closed the door behind and went to bed. Chahat looked at the big teddy on the bed. 'papa' she pointed the teddy.

Prem placed her on the bed 'ha for Chahat.' Chahat hugged the teddy 'its big papa.' Prem 'ha like Chahat its also big.' Chahat hugged Prem and kissed his cheek. Prem kissed her 'you play with teddy.' Chahat sat on the bed pulling teddy on to her. He got up and went to his closet and pulled out a red saree. He knocked the washroom. Heer peeped out through the door. Prem handed the saree 'Heer, you change this.' She nodded.

Prem played with Chahat until Heer returned from the washroom. Then he took Chahat dress and handed to Heer Heer sat on the bed with Chahat. She changed her dress. Prem went to washroom to change into sherwani.

Heer stood in front of the mirror. Prem took a pinch of sindoor and filled her maang. He kissed her forehead. He also handed her few jewels. After they got ready, Prem picked up Chahat 'come beta. You play after pooja.' Chahat 'papa, can I take this to home.' Prem shook his head negatively. Chahat sad. Prem rubbed his nose on hers 'Chahat will stay here with papa. so papa and teddy will be with you always.' Chahat looked at Heer 'mamma'. Heer shook her head 'ha papa will always with mamma and Chahat.' Chahat happily kissed Prem. Prem held Heer hand and walked out of the room.

Downstairs, already guest arrived. Entire staff families are also present. They all got confused to see Prem coming down holding Heer's hand and Chahat in his hand. Veena who is standing near the stairs looked at Prem and Heer with tears. Veena blessed them when they bent down to touch her feet. Lalit, Gaya3, Teji and Balraj too gave their blessings.

Pandit 'tell the couple to come and sit here.' Prem handed Chahat to Teji. He went to sit in front of the fire with Heer. Panidt 'is she your daughter?' Prem smiled looking at Heer 'ha our daughter.' Pandit 'bring her also here.' Chahat came and sat on Prem's lap. They performed pooja together. Through out the pooja staff members are confused. Relatives know that Prem is already married to Heer but separated due to misunderstanding. So they are happy to see them together again.

One elderly relative 'Lalit, we are happy to see Heer bahu again.' Lalit smiled 'its all your blessings that brought them together again.'

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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part loved it waitingggggg for next asap.

Edited by sweta2005 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
me... awsum yar...ssly luved it.....u brought dem bck n threw sanjana out yepi...
wa8in for nxt update....thx for da pm..
Edited by shahrukh_divya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved it. What a plan to get Heer back in Prem's life.
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Posted: 15 years ago
fabulous! glad Premeer are together....

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