SS - HIDDEN TREASURE ~ COMPLETED!! - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
awesome start selvy.....i'm glad you started writing again!
great first part.....
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
nice update dear....
even though it was a shocker ...i loved it...
so prem is a person least intrested in social service..!
loved g3 for her compassionate soul...but how could she compel prem to act ashusband to a pregnant and violent patient ...and heer what trauma caused her to be in such a pathetic situation...
really wish sanjana was not there at all....hmm..prem loving her ...!sounds more shocking than any other thing....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
nice start!
continue soon!
plzzz pm me next time!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
awesome ss
how heer got pregnent? i belive u will give a surprising twist and turn in this ss also
when u are writing ss u just forget to pm pls pm me dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
hey nice part.....................⭐️ loved it................ pm me when u r goin 2 update. waitinggggg for nxt part..................................................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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waitinggggggg for next part asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shot 2

Prem struggled several hours without sleep thinking the unknown girl. 'is it correct to act as her husband? I don't know anything about her character. Is she going to be a disturbance to my love with Sanjana?' he fell asleep without getting answer for any questions.

Morning, before going to hospital Gaya3 took promise from Prem. 'Prem, promise me that you won't step back from this at any moment.' Prem who is a obedient son gave promise to his mother 'ma, i love you. i'll not do anything to put you in shame.'

Gaya3 and Prem went to hospital. First they met the doctor. Doctor clearly said about Heer's condition to Prem. 'Mr. Prem, its your talent to make her believe that you are his husband. We cannot keep her under sleeping bills for too long because she is pregnant. I agreed when your mother came with this idea. So you have to be careful. Never give any shocking news to her. She should not come to know about this drama until she understands on her own.' Prem agreed. Doctor continued with few more advises. Except the doctor, Gaya3, Lalit and Prem no one knows about this drama.

Gaya3 and Prem walked into Heer's room with the doctor. Before entereing the room Gaya3 stopped Prem. 'Prem, remember that you are the guardian for her until she regains her memory. Don't do anything that harms her life.' Prem nodded. Gaya3 walked in Prem followed her silently.

Heer is sitting on the bed hugging her knees. Doctor signed the nurse to move out. Heer looked up and stared at the new faces entering into her room. Gaya3 is the first one to react. Gaya3 took care of Heer when she is in unconscious state. Heer didn't see Gay3 after gaining conscious so she didn't find anything odd when Gaya3 introduced herself as Heer's MIL. She sat in front of her on the bed. Gaya3 pulled Prem near to the bed.

Gaya3 'Prem, why she is looking at us like this? We searched you for all these days.' Prem is simply staring at Heer. Gaya3 pointing Prem 'Heer, can't you identify even your own husband.' Heer eyes widened in surprise. 'husband?' Prem opened his mouth 'ha Heer I'm your husband. Prem Juneja. You are my wife Heer Prem Juneja.' Gaya3 is happy that Prem acting nicely.

Heer threw herself onto Prem and hugged him tightly without any second thought. Doctors and Gaya3 are happy. Prem is confused and don't know how to react to her move. Gaya3 signed him to hug her back. He slowly moved his hands around her to hug her. Heer pulling herself away 'doctor, I want to go home now.' Doctor agreed. Prem is confused 'how she believed this story so soon?'

In another one hour all the formalities are over and Heer reached Juneja mansion. Gaya3 walked ahead 'come Heer.' Prem is walking behind Gaya3 into the mansion not giving any attention to Heer. He stopped when he felt a hand holding his hand. He turned and looked at Heer who is holding his hand with a smile. He got angry for stopping him but managed to release a smile thinking his character in this drama.

Heer stopped near the door. Prem 'come in Heer.' Heer shook her head negatively 'no. ma will bring arti.' Gaya3 too forgot. Prem confused thinking 'she remembers this ritual but forgot other things.' But he is happy that she also belongs to his religion. Prem called out 'ma, how long you will take to bring arti.' Gaya3 got the point and rushed out with arti. After finishing arti, Gaya3 told a servant to show Heer's room. Heer 'Prem where is our room?' Prem is shocked. He understood that its not easy to handle her.

Gaya3 'Heer, you are not feeling well so you stay.' Heer cut in 'no Ma. I want to be with Prem. He will feel bad.' Prem grinned. Gaya3 with her eyes ordered Prem to obey to Heer's words. Heer held his hand 'come Prem.' Prem walked silently towards his room. Heer entered the room holding Prem hand. She looked around the room.

Prem pointing the bed 'you take rest.' He sat in the couch. Heer sat next to him. She tucked her hand into his and leaned on to his shoulder. Prem wanted to push her aside but feared that may disturb her health. He gently got up and guided her to bed. He made her lay down on the bed 'Heer, you take rest.' He covered her with blanket. 'I have important work and meeting with client. So I'll be late in the night.' Heer nodded. She didn't leave his hand.

He turned and looked at her with a questioning face. She pointed her forehead with her index finger. Prem got confused. Heer 'Premmm.' Like a kid 'I'm back after a month. Are you not happy?' He sat next to her on the bed with a smile 'I'm happy Heer. what do you want?' Heer keeping his index finger on her forehead said like a kid 'can't you feel like kissing me? Give me a kiss on my forehead.' He leaned forward and kissed her forehead. 'okay take care.' Heer smiled.

Prem rushed out. He held his chest leaning on the wal 'OMG. I don't know how I'm going to manage this girl.' He went downstairs. Gaya3 'Prem' he rushed outside 'ma, tonight I'll be late. I'm going out to dinner with Sanju.' Gaya3 'okay. Come fast.'

Gaya3 went to Prem room and saw Heer sleeping on his bed. She quickly asked a servant to dumb some dresses for Heer into Prem's closet. She silently went outside and gave clear instruction to Ramu kaka, who is the very loyal servant from Prem's childhood days. Ramu agreed to manage the situation after knowing the truth about Heer. He told other servants 'Heer is Prem's wife. They had some misunderstanding now they are together forgetting their past fight.' Other servants believed Ramu's words because he is very close to Juneja's and know evey little thing about this family. Gaya3 and Lalit too went to a party.

After finishing his work in the office, Prem made all the arrangement for a romantic dinner with Sanjana. He stepped in with Sanajana to the hotel he made arrangements. Tucking her hand passively into Prem's hand Sanjana enjoyed the decoration Prem has done for her. she kissed Prem cheek 'thanks Prem its really wonderful.' Prem kissed her back on her cheek 'I'll do anything for you Sanju.'

They walked to the middle of the room where one table is neatly decorated for a couple to dine. The room full of balloons and flowers. Curtains are in red and white. Prem made Sanju to sit on a chair. He took a red flower out of his pocket and handed to her 'I love you Sanju.' Sanju got excited by Prem's behavior jumped up and hugged him tigtly 'I love you too Prem.' They stayed for few seconds. Prem pulling himself away from her moved to the music system. He switched on the system to fill the room with a song. He asked Sanju's hand for dance.
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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
me..

awsum selvy.....

heer is too romantic...

luved prem n heer scenes...
Edited by shahrukh_divya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
nice story yaar
premeer scenes are nice
i dont like sanjana
because i dont imagine any other girl in premeer's life whether she is good or bad
anyways thanks for another beautiful story from u my frnd
THANKS A LOT
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
hey i just both the shots in one go
loved premeer scenes
thanks for pm
hope u will update early

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