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just loved it!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Everyone!

It's been forever since I've updated, over 3 months I know! And I realized I don't think I'll ever be as motivated to actually go through and finish this FF. But as a reader, I know how annoying it is when the writer doesn't update and leaves you hanging. And this story also means a lot to me as it was my very first FF, only after which I wrote the many other ones.

And so I'm posting the outlines for the next so many chapters that I had written up a loooong time ago. And they pretty much count as the updates 😆😆

There are still about 5-6 more chapters left even after these outlines, and I'll post those outlines very soon too.

I hope you enjoy what I had planned out for the story!

And for those of you who read My Boss and Me, I'm going to do the same thing, update the outlines in about a week or so.

Thanks!

~Naina


Tied Together:


Recap:


Heer finds out that she's supposed to be getting married to her dad's best friend's son, and she gets mad and doesn't agree. When the Juneja family comes to India from Canada, Balraj and Teji go to receive them from the airport and tell them how Heer is unwilling to marry Prem. They decide to lie to Heer and tell her that Prem, Harman, and Preet did not come to India and it was just Lalit and Gayatri.


The three brothers hang out elsewhere while Lalit and Gayatri go with the Maan's. Heer bumps into Prem numerous times, while all the siblings are trying to find ways to get Premeer together.


Chapter 8:

Prem introduces Harman/Preet to Heer, while she introduces Meher/Ashlesha. They then say their goodbyes and head their own separate ways. Heer's car breaks down, and the three of them are stuck in the middle of the road. Phones don't work due to lack of signal. A car is coming from the other side, and they see that it is Prem's Car, with Harman and Preet. Prem stops the car. All of them discuss the problem, and decide that Heer and Prem should stay and wait for the mechanic, while Preet Harman Ash and Meher go back to the Maan Mansion and wait there. Prem calls a mechanic and meanwhile Prem/Heer talk. Heer tells Prem about how her parents decided that she should get married to some Prem Juneja, while she wants to be independent. She would never get married to him. Prem feels sad, and doesn't understand then if he's doing the right thing. She holds his hand, and tells him that whatever he's doing, if it's for the betterment of another individual, it wouldn't be a problem.


Chapter 9:

Car is fixed. Prem Heer head home, to the Maan Mansion. At the Maan Mansion, everyone is excitedly talking about Prem and Heer being alone together. Preet and Harman hug their parents. Gayatri and Teji notice the glances between Harman and Ashlesha. Preet and Meher nonstop bantering. Heer comes home and is shocked to see everyone getting on so well. "Do you all know each other?" Of course not, but everyone has great time. Heer likes how easily everyone gets along with Prem. As they are leaving, Prem suggests they all meet up once again. Harman and Ashlesha excited. Preet Meher happy!


Chapter 10:

All decide to go to visit places. Coffee afterwards, and each couple in their own world as they get to know each other better. Heer slowly discovering her feelings for Prem, Prem Sharma not realizing that he's Prem Juneja.

Chapter 11:

Heer gets flowers the next day morning, Meher/Ash make fun of her. Everyone decides to go clubbing that night. Heer dressed in a pair of black skinny jeans, and a nice clubby outfit. Preet notices Meher for the first time. Prem meets all of Heer's friends, who want Prem to dance with them. Heer becomes jealous, and so she herself ends up asking Prem for the dance.

Chapter 12:

Songs/Dancing/Drunk Heer. Prem takes care of her. Each in their own worlds. Next day morning, she wakes up and sees a whole bouquet of flowers and Prem calls her right then, asking her out on a dinner date. She tells her parents, who say NO on the assumption that Heer is supposed to get married to Prem JUNEJA.

Chapter 13:

Heer tells her parents that she is sick and that she won't be leaving the room the entire day. And so no one comes to check on her and she leaves the house . Everyone has a good laugh once she leaves, and Balraj and Teji completely shocked by her actions, but also happy to see Heer falling for Prem. Prem/Heer date. He takes her to a nice restaurant, and then they go for a walk on the beach. They both talk about each other's lives, future dreams, aspirations. First Kiss!

Chapter 15:

Heer sneaks back into her room, and everyone pretends they didn't even notice that she was gone. Prem calls her and they talk into the night. Meher and Ash come in asking how she was feeling, then tell Heer that they knew she was gone and that she actually ended up going on the date with Prem and that they covered for her.

Chapter 16:

Heer feeling fine the next day. And she goes to visit Prem, Preet, and Harman. Along with Meher and Ash. They spend time in the apartment, with Heer making food for all of them, and all three women receiving compliments. Prem begins teasing her about them getting married.

Chapter 17:

A few days later, Prem and Heer decide to go on their second date. He's tells her he loves her and is about to kiss her when both of their phones start ringing simultaneously. Call from the hospital. Balraj had a heart attack. They both rush to the hospital. Balraj tells them that it's his last wish to see his daughter married off to his best friend's oldest son, Prem Juneja. Heer reluctantly agrees and is about to tell Prem that she can't marry him as she will have to marry Prem Juneja. But Balraj and Lalit tell her the truth while Prem stands on the side watching

Chapter 18:

Heer shocked. She starts screaming at everyone, screaming that they all betrayed her. That they're all playing with ehr heart. And that they were simply wrong. Runs out of the hospital crying. Prem wants to follow her, but everyone holds him back, telling him that she needs time to sort things out by herself and that she will be back. She will understand why they all did this. They wait for her to come back the whole day. She doesn't return.

Chapter 19:

The next morning, she walks into the hospital, looking tired, as pale as a ghost and just says. Yes I'll marry him. Everyone is overjoyed. No one realizes how serious she is. Prem hugs her and is really happy, but even he doesn't understand how stiff Heer remains in his arms, not bothering to hug him back. Balraj says he wants the marriage as soon as possible, so fixed for the next day.

Chapter 20:

Everyone rushes home that day and its the mehndi ceremony and the sangeet, with just the Maan and Juneja families of course. Songs and dancing. Harman/Ashlesha closer and dancing together as are Meher and Preet. Prem tries to get Heer to dance but she refuses to get up. Gayatri and Teji just simply brush it off saying that Heer is feeling shy, but Prem understands that something else is going on, and decides to talk to her later that night. And he continues to dance alone, with Heer just sitting there, not bothering to talk to anyone or smile even once.

Chapter 21:

Everyone done with the celebrations and heads off to their respective rooms. (Preet and Harman and Prem have moved into the Maan Mansion). Prem sneaks out of his room at the middle of the night and steps outside, climbing pipes to get to Heer's window. He knocks on the window, calling out Heer's name. But it ends up being Meher and Ashlesha who open the window! They tease him and then tell him that he can't meet their sister. Prem tells them that he has to ask her something important, but the sisters still don't agree. Heer just stands in the background glumly, not saying anything. Prem leaves disappointed. Next day: Wedding!

Edited by Naina2127 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok so i'm confused.. is the an outline or the update? i mean are you going to continue from part 21 or elaborate on each part... i'm just happy u're going to continue:D!

i really like what u had planned.. i wonder what happened to heer... why is she like this.. i hope nothing happened to her when she went out...

continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

ok so i'm confused.. is the an outline or the update? i mean are you going to continue from part 21 or elaborate on each part... i'm just happy u're going to continue:D!


i really like what u had planned.. i wonder what happened to heer... why is she like this.. i hope nothing happened to her when she went out...

continue soon!



haha I'm not going to update...sorry about it being unclear...these i guess are the updates for these chapters😆😆

i'll come back with the outlines for the rest of the chapters soon, where everything will be solved :)

Cheers!
~Naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
luved it naina..!! whts botherin heer...wa8in for it...!! update soon....thx for da pm..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nyc 1 dear
update it soon nw
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Naina,
Luved ur FF.
Continue soon nd do pm me when u do.

X--Preeti--X
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Posted: 14 years ago
Outline was awesome
but its really cheating
Yes only u told me that, u ll complete ur ffs before my exams
& now u updated only ouline of it.................too bad😡
Ped na hai toh amm hi sahi.........................😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finallly I was waiting impateintly for this update! Thankkks aloot for updating!:D nd not leavn it hanging :P reallly glad u continued :D its a amazing ff nd to leave it hanging wasntr gud amazzzinnnng ff! Thanks for the pm do update asap :)

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