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Posted: 14 years ago

omg!Kavya u r back.yahooo.its a party time.

i know that how can u stay away from this forum.Thank God u r back,i m so happy.
i m a big fan of all ur FF's keep writing, wish u best of luck.
please add me in ur mp list
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Posted: 14 years ago
kavya di congrats fr ur new ss
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Posted: 13 years ago
kavya di updating 2dy right???
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Posted: 13 years ago
Helooo I know I should be updating something else but then I couldn't stop myself from writing this one... so here's a oneshot

LOVE MAKES LIFE BEAUTIFUL

When he woke up, he felt happy. He returned home from the trip late at night and hit the bed. No matter wherever he went, its' always better being back at home. He freshened himself a little and walked down the stairs. He settled on the couch picking up the newspaper.

As he engaged himself in reading the paper, he felt someone's gaze on him. He never understood how it happened but he could just feel it. He pretended to be busy reading the paper. After feeling satisfied about the attention he was getting, he just folded the paper a little so that his face was visible and winked at her. While she looked at him completely shocked, he resumed reading the paper.


He felt a tug on his kurta and diverted his attention from the paper towards his little four year old son who was getting on to his lap. He put the paper aside and pulled him towards him.


"Papa you're back. Why didn't you wake me up when you came?" His son uttered still half sleepy.


"It was quite late and you were fast asleep." He said ruffling his hair.


"I've been a very good boy. I didn't trouble mamma and I even fed her food last night." His son explained animatedly, all sleep wandering away.


Before leaving for his trip, he took a promise from his son that he would be a good boy and in return he would get him a lot of toys and chocolates. He smiled at his son's way of asking for toys.


"Good that's like my boy. Pappa will keep his promise too. I'll give you toys after we have breakfast." He said as he pulled his chubby cheeks and in return his son hugged him.


As he sat there with his son in his lap hugging him, he felt wonderful. He was the best gift ever his wife has given him. There was no wonderful feeling in this world than holding your own blood in your hands.


His eyes automatically searched for her and there she was instructing the workers about the decoration. It was Gungun's first birthday. His little brother was blessed with a beautiful daughter a year ago. He smiled as he recalled how nervous Preet was then.


He came out of his thought as he felt she turned to see him. He wondered how both of them could just feel about each other even without any communication. Well that's what true love is about.

~~

She woke up early in the morning as she realized they were a lot of things to be done. It was Meher's daughters' first birthday and she took the responsibility of organizing everything. She still felt Meher as her young little sister and couldn't believe she's a mother of a child now. Time just flies away. There were lucky to get married in the same family.


She felt someone's presence beside her and was shocked to see him sleeping on his stomach. Time flies but some habits never change regardless of how old we grew. She smiled and got up.


As much as she wanted to wake him up and spend the whole day in his arms, she was aware of her responsibilities too. She decided to deal with him later and went to get ready for the day.


She had called him up in the evening yesterday, to ask him about his arrival but he told her it would take time and she just cut the call.


Last night she was so tired that she slept as soon as she hit the bed. She thought he would have come late in the night.


She was instructing the servants when she saw him walk down the stairs. He sat down to read the paper. She couldn't turn away her eyes from him. One long week passed away, she was elated to see him back but then he didn't acknowledge her presence and got busy reading the paper.


All of a sudden, she saw him removing the paper which was acting as a barrier for her to see his face and winked at her. She realized all along he was playing with her. She got little miffed and focused on her work.


Later, she felt his gaze on her and turned to see him holding their son and communicating his pleasure through his eyes. She stared at them and wondered who looked the best but then as usual was not able to decide. Although their son inherited the set of eyes from her, the rest of the charms were definitely from him of which he was really proud.

~~

She was done with her instructions. She saw the couch empty. She thought probably they were in their room. She went there but it was empty. She heard noises coming from her son's room. She walked in through the connecting door.


She saw him sitting on the floor with their son in his lap, showing him all the toys he got for him. As she walked up to them and settled down they suddenly kissed her, one on left cheek and the other on right cheek wishing "Good morning mamma"


She looked at her husband in shock. He was trying to hide his smile and got back to explain his son about some toy. She forgot that at times she had to deal with two kids one her son, the other- the father of her son.


"You should've given him the toys after the breakfast. Now, he'll not move from here." She said arranging the bed.


"Well Pratham promised to have good breakfast if I show him the toys early. You'll have your breakfast with papa won't you?" He asked his son.


"Yes" His son agreed.


"Okay, now go get ready. You'll not get breakfast until you take bath." She reprimanded them.


"In ten minutes mamma" They got up and he left to their room while Pratham ran to her. She gave him a bath and made him ready. As soon as he got ready, he zoomed off into the hall.


She walked into their room to see him dressed in jeans, searching the cupboard for his shirt. She shook her head and handed him a shirt. He mouthed a quick thank you and took it. She turned to leave when she felt a tug on her hand and before she knew, she was in his arms.


"Put on the buttons please" He requested with a childish pout on his face.


"You know what, as your son is growing older you are more behaving like a kid" She said as she buttoned his shirt.


"Well, I can't help it if you keep looking sexier each day." He winked at her.


She tried to hit him while he caught hold off her hand. She saw him looking at her with eyes full of love and she melted. She rested her head on his chest and hugged him.


"Heeerrr" Her name felt musical from his mouth.


"Premmm" It was all she was able to say.


"I missed you" He said pulling her even closer, closing all the distance between them. They stayed like that for some time feeling each other's heartbeat.


As he bent his head down close to hers, she heard a voice calling for her. She pushed him and ran away.


He fell on the bed running his hand through his hair. He got ready and went down. She was there arranging the table for breakfast. Everyone felt happy on seeing him. He took Gungun from Preet's arms and kissed her wishing "Happy Birthday". She smiled as if in acknowledgement.


"Papa even I want to hold her" Pratham tugged his jeans.


"You'll not be able to hold her beta" Preet picked him up in his hands.


"Then how will I wish her happy birthday?" He questioned him.


"Hmm" Preet and Prem pretended to think for a while.


Preet lowered Pratham a little and Prem raised his arms a little. Pratham kissed her cheek and wished her. "Happy birthday my little sister"


Everyone smiled.


Preet put him down. Prem handed Gungun back to Preet and they settled for breakfast. Pratham sat on his lap while Heer sat beside him.


She was feeding Pratham while listening to what Gayatri, her mother-in-law of telling her. She didn't notice that Pratham ran away so as usual she took a piece of roti and replying to Gayatri held it to side. Prem smiled and ate it. He signaled others to keep quite.


Heer concentrated her focus on Gayatri and was telling her about the arrangements while tearing the pieces of roti and feeding. Suddenly she shrieked and saw that Prem bit her finger.


"Ouch"


"Where's Pratham?" She realized all of a sudden.


"Bhabhi pratham ran away long ago and you were feeding bhaiya all along. What a pretty sight it was!!" He teased as Heer turned deep red.


"Maa even you didn't tell me" She asked her embarrassed.


"Well didn't want to rob my son of this opportunity after all he's been away for a week." Gayatri said.


"Maa" She ran into the kitchen.


"I'll find Pratham" He too left from there picking up the plate as Gayatri and Preet looked at him. He found his son in the garden. He was helping the gardener to plant some trees and as he was involved in work, Prem fed him.


He went to the kitchen to put the plate and she was there checking preparing something.


"Pratham finished his breakfast." He said washing his hands.


"Good." She said without facing him.


The servants went out to get something and grabbing the chance he pulled her into his arms.


"Prem what are you doing?" She scolded as she held on to him to balance herself.


"Angry??" He asked caressing her hair.


"No" She said trying not to look at him.


"Hmm" He sighed.


"I'm sorry, you know it's' been a week and only I know how much I missed eating from your hand." He pouted.


"Aww" She held his face.


"Don't try to act smart." She hit him on cheek lightly and moved away.


He walked over to her and hugged her from back.


"Prem wasn't the teasing at the table enough… anyone can walk into the kitchen now." She tried to pull away but he tightened his grip.


"But then everyone knows how much I love you so they would understand." He winked at her.


"Are you leaving now?" She asked.


"Okay I will but then it would cost you. Are you willing to pay?" He smirked.


"I would rather negotiate it for these" She said showing him the bowl of rasgullas.


"Wowww you made them" He said getting excited extending his hand to take one.


She hit on his hand and said "Not until you leave me."


"Ok" He left Heer and took the bowl. He dumped one into his mouth.


"Food..food…food" She picked one and stuffed it into his mouth in anger "Eat this too". He ate with a smile and then licked her fingers too. She gave him an angry look and turned to arrange something on the slab.


"Well I thought you wanted me to leave and when I left, you're angry. That's not fair. I just obeyed you" He said hugging her from back. She didn't speak.


"So my wifey doesn't want to talk to me" He said nuzzling her neck with his lips.


"Prem" She said turning to face him.


"The sweet you made was sweet enough but then I want to add extra sweetness to it" He said sealing her lips with his.


"Oops wrong time" Meher said turning back as she saw them enclosed in each other's arms.


They left each other and he walked out immediately. Meher gave a quizzical look of Heer and she too left saying she had some work. Meher let out of a laugh.


~~~


The party was on full swing and the house was full with kids running here and there. The elders were enjoying themselves engaged in discussions while kids were playing games.


Prem tried to search for Heer among the crowd but she wasn't there anywhere. He couldn't meet her after their encounter in kitchen. He had to get ready early and leave with Preet to get the cake and by the time they returned, the house was flooding with people.


He had to attend to all the relatives and guests coming in. He felt bored among all the senior citizens cribbing about politics.


"Papa" Pratham called out to him. He left relieved and walked away from there.


"Yes Pratham" He said picking him up.


"When will Gungun cut the cake? I want to eat it." He asked.


"Ten more minutes beta… Till then why don't you play with your friends?" He tried to put him down.


"I played... now I'm tired I just want to eat." He said resting his head on Prem's shoulder.


Prem smiled and held him.


"Where's mamma?" Prem asked him.


Pratham raised his head from his shoulder and searched here and there and then pointed to the stairs. She was walking down holding Gungun in her arms. Prem sighed and thought how was she still able to knock him down.


He whispered something into Prathams' ears.


As Heer was playing with Gungun, Pratham tugged on her pallu. She handed Gungun to Meher, and picked him up


"Yes beta" She smiled.


He just kissed on her cheek and whispered "from Papa"


Prem walked to them and took Pratham from her arms.


"What was that?" Heer asked raising her eyebrow.


"I can't do it in front of everyone" He winked at her whispering.


"You're crazy" She walked to the center table where the cake was while he stood looking at her.


"Papa cakeee"


He came out of trance and joined her. Preet held Pratham and Meher Gungun and they cut the cake. The cake was cut and the pieces were passed. Pratham got a big piece and he went to his parents. He held it to Prem and Heer to take a bite. When Prem and Heer bent down to come close to take a bite, he grabbed it back and ran away. Heer quickly kissed Prem on cheek"Nothing is impossible in love" She whispered and walked away.


Prem was completely shocked. He wasn't expecting that at all…. Unbelievable but still the teasing looks on her face made him believe that it happened.


They were teasing each other with eyes as they stood far away in two corners attending to the guests. He was signaling her to move to a corner but she was denying.


She went to get a plate for her when she felt someone pulling her, holding her by waist. She knew it was him so kept silent. Once they were out of crowd, she was backed to the wall and he leaned on her.


"Hmm finally I get a chance. Everyone is busy. No one will disturb us now" Prem said pulling her close in his arms.


"Premm" She hit his shoulder.


"What?? Pretending to be all innocent now… What did you do few minutes back?" He questioned.


"Well that was a challenge for you" She winked.


"So now I'm ready to answer back" He said and before she could speak silenced her with his lips on hers.


They stood in the dark, celebrating the feeling of being together again.


One shot after a very very long time... Waiting eagerly for your comments 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
ress...
omg.. kavya.. how are you??? its been ages since we've talked! =/
Miss you!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sharmila-

ress...

omg.. kavya.. how are you??? its been ages since we've talked! =/
Miss you!


Hii..i m fyn..how ru? lets catch up in telugu chat thread..
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Posted: 13 years ago
its was very nice os...
prem and heer romance was so cute and sweet also❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey very nice os...you have been a fabulous writer..

pliz update love of my life too...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kavya di.!!! its lyk ages u hv update sum OS n i luved it! Premeer has a son n even meet has a daughter dats cho chweet! luved premeer romance!
thnku so much for writin dis OS!
n thnx for d pm di!
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Posted: 13 years ago
haye..!!!...that was awesome...😃
write more...

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