Dil Ko Choo Liya ...note pg 72!! - Page 11

Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya

awsum update......

preet luv u........

wa8in for the nxt update..........///

thank you divs...!!!!

Originally posted by: heer193

lovely update

sorry couldn't reply before but i read each update on my cell(net)

sorry wont get tym to reply for all

but as uasual they were too gud

i hope ab ye dev ka suspence khatam ho

thanks for the pm

and do cont sending them

will be waiting for next update

tc

heer193

thank you heer193..!!!! its okay dear ...do comment when u hav enough time.... dev ka suspense kahtam hote hi i'll be pulling the curtains down for dkcl... be patient...😃

Originally posted by: sinak

Loved the update

thank you dear...!!!!

Originally posted by: munam_13

Yay u updated😆... seriously surya you dont have any idea how badly I want to see ur story in celluloid... I mean u write each expressions so vividly I can literally see those things happening.

To start with... Mr. Preet getting a good thrashing from Meher.. I actually expected a teeny weeny emotional scene between the two... ya I loved the whole family scene but u know.. they r departing and they r so much in love atleast we can expect a scene later what say? Like the one we got between Premeer when Heer was to stay away from him for work???

Then Premeer scene was 😳 I loved how you did one samajhdaro ko ishara hi kafi hai wala part😆... still I want to know.. did he dress her up?? really? you have no idea how much I am blushing while typing it😳😳😳

This Dev.. the maha devdas...!!! I mean the highest form of devdas....he is one stage ahead.. he dopes himself.. ya he's a gud man no doubt.. but please send him to rehab pretty please.. addicts are dangerous u know!!!! I have no idea how u r going to shape his character..

Ok one more pt... this Heer will be chupaing this whole doping thing from Prem na! I hope this does not create any misunderstanding... Heer being the mahan soul will comfort Dev for sure and our Premu being a possesive lad can take it in other ways na..He can become insecure thinking what is my wifey always khusar phusar with Dev!!!!

Well .. I should stop now... otherwise next time comment k liye kam par jayega😆


Luv
Priyo😃

thank you priyo......!!!! loved this lamba comment .. and abt the dressingup...i myself skipped the part fearing fainting !😛 and it is not advisable for kids to spent time imagining things like that....😆.. and you hav pretty good idea what heer and prem are going to do eh? well my prem was insecure earlier ....its not insecurity that i am planning😈 do continue to give lamba comments....😉

Originally posted by: blufate.14

i am hating this dev day by day...😡
the premeer part was...😍haha naughty prem....kitna accha hai woh...😳
cant wait for their camp...⭐️

thank you su...!!!!

Originally posted by: --Mehak--

res

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

ohh god premerr bathromm n all so cute huff ths ff is mking me fall in luv wth prem more n moree
nd this dev is otc addicive my godd he needs some psychiatrist m afraid for heer

thank you aishu.....!!!! expert advice taken into account....!😛

Originally posted by: suryavni

thank you priyo......!!!! loved this lamba comment ..😳 and abt the dressingup...i myself skipped the part fearing fainting !😛 and it is not advisable for kids to spent time imagining things like that....😆.. and you hav pretty good idea what heer and prem are going to do eh? well my prem was insecure earlier ....its not insecurity that i am planning😈 do continue to give lamba comments....😉

Now I am dreading.. is your shaitani brain churning kya??? I love Premeer romance too much in this ff.. dont do something for which I have to sing " Jab Dil hi toot gaya..."😕

Originally posted by: 0577jj

Surya - an exquisite update''⭐️ 👏

Again u begin with a new & different scene from the cliff-hanger where u stopped. Meher with her childish nature can't control the parting from her soulmate for a while....Sneha & Ash little matured in their outlook but no one can hide their inner pain for seperation from their lovers'.Preet& his consoling words , Adi start to show his care for Ash 'even in front of his future BIL'bubbly Preet know how to enligten the gloomy face & party place '.very nice that he not forget the most & inevitable couple for romantic eve''.😉 😍

Prem with his lively thoughts ..that too naughty to remember the romantic times in office 'no words for his moments with his love'he really enjoys & tries each chance to spend valuable times with Heer'..Dear - each description u given in an adorable & drowning way for readers to that situation'..i think u added that for sharpening pulse of dkcl lovers'😛.very good & thanks for Helen to retrieving prem from sweet memories to earning points'..

Dev with his in & out suffering'.the physical pain he going through was u described in a realistic manner'now I got little bit know-how abt the addicted persons struggle..& here u termed the mental suffocation of Dev as well '..its the lack of good sense that rules- due to high use of drugs, Dev fails to keep away his nasty thoughts on Heer & on the contrary side - i really admires this Heer on her true bonding & care towards Dev.. she treats him in a way- by making jealous in readers mind on such kind of friendship.😉 😊

Again u making Prem more loveable human ,he who cares his friend like a sibling & by sending him back home ,that Dev's health will be well cared by his Heer'

Surya'the shattered Heer with unanswered questions & searching how to solve the misery' she came to encounter abt her own sonu'the interaction b/w these buddies. They really spoke with their heart 'both knew the heaviness of other '.as she know its harmfull 'she can't get backward by without offer the sedation to Dev for relieve himself from the pain'heart wrenching words from Heer..its superb'👍🏼.Heer narrates the throns Dev giving to the loved ones who cares & treats him like their own family'.she stayed with him till he came back to his normal phase & Heer found out the best ever solution to tackle Dev back in his old charm' Mother's love 😊'the best trap Heer can place & save Dev 'the promise he given to both ' hope he will keep his promise '.😕

Heer taking some assurance before leaving Dev alone in home & Dev recollecting the depth of Heer's painful words.Now me too so confused. Is Heer completely unaware abt her Sonu's mind '.. & Wht u r storing for the couple's party 'wants more Premeer ....😍 😍

Thanks for this fabulous update & eagerly waiting for next ''👏 ⭐️ 👏

Continue soon'..😊 ❤️

thank you jais...!!!! yes ..heer considers dev as her best friend and is aware of his dependance upon her emotionally... and she is unaware of his feelings coz she is not thinking that aspect at all!!! more premeer....😆 its already too much...!!!

Originally posted by: sankita

nice part par dev ke liye koi aur ladki dhoondo

thank you dear..😊...!!!!