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I got this Concept long back. i kept this to write it as a longer FF. Now i thought of posting it as SS in One shot.

PROMISE
Shot - 1

Prem, big business man Lalit Juneja and Gaya3's son. Heer is a daughter of a middle class parents Balraj and Teji. They are caring and loving parents. Prem and Heer are studying in same college in London. But they are not in same course. Prem is doing his MBA. Heer is doing Fashion designing. Both are in their final years of studies.

From the day Heer entered the college, she is seen only with Prem. Megher is her close friend. Preet and Megher are lovers. Since Prem is Preet's childhood friend, all four are always seen together in the campus. Prem and Preet's fathers are close friends. So Prem and Preet are staying in Juneja Mansion, London. Their families are in Canada. Heer is staying with her parents in London.

While Preet and Megher are busy in romancing Prem and Heer will be busy teasing them. They like to tease other. They will be fighting like cats and dogs. In the next second they will be holding hands roaming around the campus licking a single cone ice-cream. Prem and Heer are well known friends in the campus. Prem always picks Heer up from her house to college and drops her in the evening. Balraj and Teji also know him very well. Prem and Heer shared their thoughts, interest and food. They are always seen sitting on a wall eating from same tiffin box during lunch time.

As soon as their class gets over they run to a tree in one corner of the campus. The tree is named Premeer tree by their friends. Prem and Heer never allowed anyone to sit under that tree when they are inside the campus. They chase them like dogs. During exams they are always seen studying under that tree, leaning on their back.

During Cultural programmes everyone will be cheering and jumping inside the auditorium but Prem and Heer are seen sitting under that tree and talking about various things. When Prem plays football, Heer cheers for him. When she plays volley ball he is seen shouting for her.

Exams are over, Heer ran to the tree to meet Prem. Prem too ran to that place. Both reached that place at the same. Heer 'how did you wrote the exams?' Prem 'fine. You.' Heer 'fine.' Prem 'come we'll go and celebrate.' Heer agreed.

Preet and Megher came there. Prem 'come we'll go and celebrate.' Preet 'not a bad idea.' A group passed them 'from t'row no one will be under this tree. So it is ours.' They sat under the tree. Preet sensed they are starting the fight. 'come we'll go.' He dragged Prem. One guy 'I'm sad I won't be able to see this romancing couple here again. Really they are hot.' Prem clenched his fist.

Another 'they will find another place for romance. ' Prem turned to him with anger. He gave a tight blow on his face. guy nose started bleeding. Another 'how dare you hit him.' Heer and Preet and tried to control him. Prem pushed them away 'she is my friend.' Guy 'don't lie. You both don't look like just friends more than that.'

Another 'accept the truth man.' Prem shouted holding his collar 'she is my friend JUST friend.' Heer with tears 'Prem, come.' She dragged him away. Preet and Prem are walking ahead of Heer and Megher. Preet stopped when they reached the place where there is no one around them. 'Prem, you both are friends we all know that. Why are you getting angry when they telling like that? Many are talking like in this campus.' Prem looked at him with anger 'how come they talk like this Preet? ' he turned to Heer 'Heer, do I told you like that? Did I ever cross my limit of friendship.' Heer shook her head 'no.' she looked down. Tears came out of her eyes.

One more person crossing them 'may be their parents didn't accept for their marriage. That is why she is crying? He is a rich man. she is poor girl. so its normal.' Prem kicked his leg in the ground in anger. He shouted 'i'm leaving Canada tonight. I won't comeback here again.' Heer looked at him with shock. Preet 'do you want to break your friendship for these stupid fellows.' Prem 'I have no option Preet. I cannot spoil her future. If I stay here they will develop a story about us.' Without waiting for their response he walked away. Preet ran behind him.

Heer leaned on the nearby tree for support. Megher touched her shoulder. Heer tried hard to control her tears. Megher didn't understand why she is struggling like this. She doubted 'may be she loves Prem.' Megher 'Heer, come we'll go home.' Megher literally dragged her to the car. Heer is silent. Megher got scared about that silent.

Preet 'Prem, why are you reacting like this? Ignore them. Leaving Heer like this not good. You both spend 3 three years of sweet friendship. This is not the correct way to go away from her.' Prem angrily 'Preet, friendship always stays in a limit. Our days are over. Now I have to move ahead in my career. I don't want to spoil her career. I was never friendly with girls. But I did the mistake now. This world always gives ugly name to opposite sex friendships. For me Heer is a friend. JUST Friend. Friends cannot stay together through out the life.'

When Heer and Megher entered the house Teji 'why are you crying Heer?' Heer ran to her room. Megher 'Prem is leaving today. So she became emotional.' Teji 'he will come back later Heer don't cry. He has to help his father in business.' Heer cried thinking her mother's confidence on Prem. Megher 'Heer, I'll call Preet. He will ask Prem to talk to you.' Heer 'he won't talk. He not even considered me as his friend. If he thought me atleast a friend then he won't leave just like that. Not even bothered to see my face. his prestige is important for him.' She cried like a kid.

Preet tried to explain because he too wants them to be together as life partners. His phone rang 'Preet, she is not speaking. She crying.' Preet 'she will be alright after few hours don't worry.' Megher 'tell Prem to come and talk to her. May be she will come back to normal in case he talks to her.' Preet 'Prem please talk to Heer and say normal good bye to her.' Megher kept the phone in speaker mode thinking Heer will be normal if she hears his sound. Without knowing that Prem shouted 'Preet, don't compel me to talk to her. I don't want to see her anymore.' Preet shouted 'it's a simple matter but you are taking that as serious and talking like a stupid.' Prem cut in 'i'm not bothered if you call me stupid. My decision is final. I'll never meet her again.'

Heer closed her mouth and ran to bathroom. She closed the door and leaned on the door. She cried her heart out. After half an hour she gathered her courage to open the door to give respect Megher who is knocking the door with concern.

Heer came out wiping her face 'Megher I'm okay. You go home.' Megher picked up her bag to leave. They heard Teji shouting Heer name in fear. Heer and Megher rushed to Balraj room. They saw he is struggling holding his chest.

Next four hours Heer and Megher were literally running behind the doctors. Megher's parents came to help Teji and Heer. Megher's father called a leading specialist in the city. After few hours Balraj breathed his last. Teji fainted. Heer cried like a mad. Megher don't know what to do.

Preet is coming out of Airport after dropping Prem. Megher called Preet 'Preet, please bring Prem here. Heer needs him now.' Hearing the news from Megher, he rushed inside to stop Prem. He tried his cell but its switched off. The flight took off. Preet fell in a chair and cried. 'Prem you did the mistake. I don't know how Heer is going to live without you?'

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Shot - 2

One year Later

Ash entered a fashion designer shop. She gave the order for her bridal dress. She is busy looking through various designs. Prem came there to pick her up. He freezed, when he saw the girl who is talking to Ash. Prem slolwly walked towards them. Ash happily turned when she saw him standing near her. 'Prem, see its really amazing.'

Hearing the name girl lifted her head from the book and went numb for a second. Prem smiled. His heart felt a joyful jump. She didn't smile back. He felt bad. 'why she is looking at me like as if seeing me for the first time?' Ash tucked her hand into his hand which is in his pocket 'Heer, he is my fiance Prem Juneja. We are getting married next week.' Heer said a cold 'hai' to him. she quickly looked away to hide her tears. Prem replied a 'hai'. Heer 'madam, your order will be ready in two days. You can collect that on Wednesday morning.'

Ash 'don't you have door delivery system?' Heer 'ya we have. Please give me your address.' Prem thought 'she even forgot my address.' Heer noted down the address. Through out the conversation, Heer never looked at Prem for once. Prem is just staring at her face. 'she is not my friend Heer.'

Heer 'thanks madam.' Ash started walking out of the door 'don't dealy.' Prem still standing there. Heer 'sir, its closing time.' Prem went numb 'sir? She is calling me sir.' She gathered her bag and a file waited for him to walk out of the shop. Heer again 'sir.' Prem came out of shock and walked out of the shop. As soon as he moved out she closed the door. Prem is standing infornt of the shop and watching her closing the door thinking she will ask him something. She didn't give any attention to him. She just walked away.

Prem felt a pain when she crossed him. Her ignorance made him sad. He is about to call her but Ash dragged him to car which is in opposite direction.

In the car Ash is talking about their marriage dress and something other. Prem didn't pay any attention to her. His mind recollecting the sweet days he spend with Heer. He smiled. Ash thought he is smiling in response to her talk. but he is smiling thinking his days with Heer.

He is not able to believe that she is the same Heer who was bubbly and made fun of others. He thought 'why she is silent? She didn't talk to me. Did she forgot my face? she smiled but there is no life in it. Her eyes showed only pain.' With several question in his eyes searched for her in the street.

His eyes fell on Heer who is walking in the road side hugging the file. His heart felt some unknown pain. He watched her image in the mirror. 'why she is so sad?'

Heer stepped into her house. Teji welcomed her with a smile. Heer straight away went to her room took a shower to wash out all her pain. After one year she is getting the same pain again. 'why he came here again?' she changed and pasting a fake smile on her face to meet her mother.

Teji started her regular song of Heer's marriage. For the past one year she is signing the same song but Heer never agreed for the marriage. Today Teji is surprised when Heer 'Ma, I'm ready for marriage but one condition.' Teji happy that she agreed 'what condition?' Heer 'I got a big order. I'll finish that in a month then I'll get the amount for you operation. then you can see a guy for me. Until then you should not talk about this.' Teji agreed.

Teji has malignant tumour in her breast. Doctors suggested for operation before it spreads to become a danger to her life. Already she is under radiation treatment. Heer is working hard to earn money for her mother's surgery. Teji wants finish Heer's marraige before her life ends. she feared about Heer's future after her death.

Prem and Ash entered the Juneja Mansion. Prem walked to his room without meeting anyone. Gaya3 and DJ are surprised. DJ 'what happened to Prem? Did you fight' Ash cut in 'no Ma, I think some work tension. He was shouting to someone in the phone.' She heard Prem shouting to someone in the phone. Actually he shouted at him without reason in his tension.

Lalit who got the same message from the person got confused. 'what happened? Why he is reacting like this?'

Megher came to Heer house. Heer is busy in the computer with some design. Megher after a long silence 'Heer Prem is here.' Heer without any expression. 'I know. I saw him today.' Megher excited 'did you talke' Heer cut in 'he came with his fianc to order bridal dress.' Megher shocked. She know Prem and his family is coming here for new business. But Preet didn't tell anything about his marriage.

Megher on the way home called Preet and asked about Prem's marriage. Preet is totally not aware of that. Actually Juneja's came here for opening a new hotel. Ash proposal came. Lalit and Gaya3 liked the girl. Prem too agreed after looking at Ash.

Preet came to Juneja Mansion . He bumped on Ash while running towards Prem room. Ash shouted 'stupid. Don't you have eyes.' Hearing the shout Gaya3 came and understood the situation. 'Ash they are friends. He won't look at anyone when he goes to meet Prem. See he is not even bothered about me.' Ash went away with a smile.

Prem is looking out through window. Only Heer face came in his front. Her silence and sadness in her face gave him pain. His mind raced back to Heer.

~~FLASHBACK~~

Prem searching his car key. 'OMG where is it? Heer will be waiting for me.' He went to see his parents after his first year exams. This is the first time after meeting Heer he is away from her for one week. He badly missed her. he wanted to meet her as soon as possible. He got the keys. He turned to leave. He saw Heer opening the door.

Prem is happy. He ran to her and hugged her. both hugged tightly. He lifted her from ground and circled with her. Heer 'Prem I missed you.' Prem 'me too.' Both laughed. Even though they chatted online both missed each other badly. They found hard to push their time.

Prem Pressed his forehead on hers 'OMG really I'm happy now.' Heer 'me too.' She giggled. Playing with his shirt button 'Prem, we won't be able to see each other after two years.' Prem cupped her face 'can.' Heer 'how?' Prem 'from next time I'll take you with me wherever I go. I don't want to spend even a second of my life without you.' Heer gave a surprised unbelievable look. Prem 'its my promise Heer.' Heer 'let see.' Prem confidently 'Prem Juneja never breaks promises.'

~~END~~

Prem 'I broke my promise.' Prem 'ya. You broke your promise.' Prem got shocked. 'Preet,' Preet cut in 'Prem how can you do like this?' Prem confused 'what happened?' Preet 'how can you marry this girl? You said you are coming here for business.' Prem 'ya we came here to open a new hotel. Two days back got this proposal. My parents likes her.' He turned away.

Preet 'don't you love Heer?' Prem 'no' Preet 'don't you think about her even once in your past one year?' Prem firmly 'no.' he turned to Preet 'no Preet. Only today I saw her. I think she is leading her life happily with her own business. I don't want to disturb her again.'

Preet is about to open his mouth. Prem stopped him 'Preet, I never thought about Heer in the past one year.' Preet 'it's a lie Prem.' Prem 'I cannot disrespect my parents.' Preet in anger 'you are the worst friend ever I have seen in my life.' He stormed out of the room.

Prem sat in the bed with confusion. 'I never forgot Heer. My days always started and end with her memory.' He wiped his tears 'I'll never get a friend like her again in my life.'
Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Two days later

Prem is about to move out of the house. A man cam with a cover 'sir, your order from Chahat creations.' Prem took the cover. The name made him race back.

~~FLASH BACK~~

Prem busy preparing for his project. Heer is scribbling something on the paper leaning on his back. Prem 'Heer why are you scribbling like this?' Heer with a fake angry turned to him 'what you said? Scribbling?' Prem nodded his head with a teasing smile. Heer 'I'm putting design for a wedding dress.' Prem 'Heer' he turned to her with a serious face 'what are you going to do after this course?'

Heer 'I'll open a shop and stich designer dresses. If you want to stich bridal dress for your bride come to me.' Prem 'oh sure. But what name you will give to your shop? Heer fashions?' seriously 'You do one thing keep my name.' he auctioned with his hand spreading his hand in air 'Prem creations.' Like dreaming he looked up leaning his head on hers 'looks nice. Isn't it? Every one will like the name also.' He turned to look at Heer face. Heer shook her head.'no. it won't.'

Prem face sad 'you are not a true friend. Not even ready to keep my name for your shop.' Heer pulled his cheeks 'you are my life. So I'll keep my shop name as Chahat Creations. That will stand in this city as our symbol of loving friendship.'

~~END~~

Prem eyes threw out tears. 'she still remembers me.' Ash came there 'Prem,' she got excited when she saw the pack in his hand. 'ma, my dress is ready.' She took the pack and ran in.

Prem walked out with a sad face thinking 'as she said she stitched my brides wedding dress. Heer kept her promise but I didn't.' He fell in car seat. Clutching the steering he cried hard without making sound.

Heer took her mother to hospital. Doctor checked Teji. Dr took Heer away 'Heer, its too late. If we operate her now.' She paused for a second 'I cannot guarantee her life. She didn't come for last few radiation dose. Now.' She shook her head 'only miracle can save her.' Heer is shocked. Dr 'you better take her home and give her happiness.' Heer with heavy heart left the hospital with Teji.

As soon as they reached the home, Teji 'Heer, see this guy. Hope you will like him.' She showed a picture to her. Heer not interested in seeing any ones face now but don't want to give sadness to Teji. 'Ma, your wish is mine.' Teji is happy about Heer's confidence on her selection. Heer got up and went to her room.

~~FLASH BACK~~

Heer is biting a chocolate looking around. Prem sat next to him. He pulled her hand and took a bit from her chocolate. 'Heer, why are you looking around like searching something?' Heer 'I'm trying to find a handsome guy. Prem 'don't you have eyes. I'm here.' Heer teasingly 'you are thinking you are the most handsome in this college.' Heer 'you?' she shook her head 'no. you are not.'

Prem 'okay. Then I'm going. Continue your search for a handsome guy.' He got up. Heer pulled his hand. He fell near her. leaning on her 'what happened?' Heer tucked her hand into his 'you are the handsome in this college.' She shook her head. Prem confused 'in entire city.' Prem smiled.

Heer seriously 'do you know why?' Prem listened carefully with a expression 'why?' Heer 'you are with me.' Prem laughed 'it's a nice joke. So because of you I'm handsome.' She nodded her head like a kid 'yes.' Prem 'Heer, because of me you are beautiful. Do you know that?' he turned her face holding his chin 'otherwise no one will look at you.' he pointed a gang of girls who are looking at them. 'see they are looking at me not you.' Heer with anger threw a small stone towards the gang.

Prem laughed. Heer 'I won't allow anyone to look at you. you are mine.' She increased her grip around his hand and leaned on to him. Prem smiled 'then I won't allow any one to look at you.' Heer 'okay. Only you and me.'

~~END~~

Heer wiped her tears. 'now my mother's happiness is important to me. He has chosen to live his life and I have to forget him for my mother.'

Four Days later

Prem came out of the washroom. Today is Ash mehendi and their sangeet. He took the dress. He felt unknown sadness in his heart. He felt someone close to his heart is crying in pain. 'Where is Preet? I asked him to come in the morning.' He confused 'is he still angry on me?' he decided to call Preet. He kept his new dress aside and put his kurta. He sat on the bed picking up the phone. Prem didn't meet Preet for past one week. He is in anger. Only y'day night somehow Prem convinced him to be with him during his marriage. Prem doesn't know that because of Heer, Preet agreed to be with him.

Prem called Preet. Preet voice showed some sadness. Prem 'Preet where are you?' Preet 'I'm sorry Prem I cannot come there now.' Prem 'y'day you promised me to with me.' Preet cut in 'Prem I told you I cannot come now. Heer needs us.' He is about to cut the line. His words did something in his heart. Prem confused. He calmly 'Preet, what happened to Heer?' Preet didn't reply. Prem shouted 'tell me damn it. what happened to Heer?'

Gaya3 came in heard Prem shouting at some one. Preet 'Her mother passed away this morning. she don't have anyone in this world now.' Prem shocked 'her father?' Preet started crying 'he died on the day you left her.' Prem shocked 'why you didn't tell that to me before?' Preet angrily 'did you ever listened when I opened about Heer.'

He is true. Prem never allowed Preet to talk about Heer whenever he tried to tell something about her. Prem shouted 'Preet, tell me the address.' When Preet delayed to manage himself, Prem shouted again. 'Preeeeet.' Preet 'it's the same house'. Disconnecting the line Prem got up to leave.

He saw Gaya3 staring at her with confusion 'Prem, who is Heer?' Prem 'ma she is my friend. Her mother passed away.' Gaya3 stopped him 'you are not go to death house today.' Prem 'she don't have anyone. She needs me.' Gaya3 shocked the last statement confused her. 'is she important than Ash?' Prem didn't give any answer. He ran out of the house. DJ and Ash standing with guest in the downstairs just stared at the way he is running out of the house.

Lalit saw Gay3 coming down the stairs. 'Gaya3, where is he running?' Gaya3 'his friends mother expired.' DJ 'but he should not go to death house now.' Gaya3 'his friend don't have anyone other than Prem.' Lalit 'okay He is not necessary for today's function.' Gaya3 felt some fear. DJ and Ash went back to guest. Guest whispered 'is that friend is important than his marriage with Ash?'

Gaya3 felt something fishy. She heard Prem talking about Heer when he came for first year holiday but after finishing his studies he never mentioned her name. But she noticed him staring at some one in his college pictures sometime. She has seen him touching the spot on the picture with his index finger with pain in his eyes. But he never showed the picture to anyone.

Prem sat in the car with tears. He cursed himself for leaving Heer to struggle alone. 'I did the mistake of leaving Heer on that day.' As he drove the car towards Heer house he remembered how he went without even telling Heer. How much she cried. 'what a stupid I'm? I was not with her when she needed me most.'

Prem entered Heer house and saw Heer's mother lifeless body. Heer is sitting without any movement staring at her mother body. Megher and her mother are trying to break her silence. Preet is standing behind them. Prem stepped near Heer. Preet looked at Prem and cried. He pointed Heer with tears 'she sitting like this from the time she heard the news. She is not responding.' Megher got up and gave space to Prem. He silently sat next to Heer. He put his one hand around her shoulder and pulled her closer. He touched her shoulder with other hand 'Heer.' His one word made her turn and look at his face. Megher and Preet got surprised.

Heer pointed her mother and let out a loud cry. 'ma left me alone.' The entire house shook in her sorrow. He pat her cheek and pulled her into his chest. She cried into his chest like a baby. When the time came for her mothers final rites, Heer fainted in Prem's arms. He carried her to the room. He went to the final rites for her mother as Preet insisted him to do the rites.

Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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When Prem and others returned home after funeral, Heer is sitting still on the bed refusing to eat anything. Prem took the plate from megher. He sat next to Heer on the bed. 'Heer eat' he took handful of food and kept near her mouth. She thought the days they spend together in the college. She opened her mouth. Prem started feeding her. she ate quietly.

After feeding her he pulled her into his arms. Keeping her head on his chest he drifted into sleep. Prem didn't know that she is sleeping peacefully after a year. He looked at her face. He gently stroked her hair. She clutched his shirt tight not want to leave him.

The same passiveness.

She never allowed any one to touch him when they were in college. She used to fight with them like a mad. She always tucked her hand into his possessively 'you are my Prem.' Prem always loved this word from her.

He smiled. Soon he too drifted into peaceful sleep.

Morning, Heer opened her eyes. She felt herself on someones arms. She saw Prem sitting on the bed leaning on the board. His hand is protectively around her. Her head is on his chest. She tried to get up. Prem opened his eyes. He smiled. Heer looked away 'I'm sorry.' She moved out of his hand. 'you go. Today is your marriage.' She went to washroom because she doesn't have strength to see him moving away again. She closed the door and cried.

She came out of the washroom. She expected Prem even though she know it is not correct. Her heart went weak when she didn't find him. She managed herself and went out of the room thinking 'he is not related to me anymore. He is not Heer's Prem anymore'.

Megher parents stayed in Heer's house. Megher mother came to Heer. Heer with tears moved to the picture of her mother and father. Megher's mother asked her to lit the lamp in front of the picture. Megher too came. Preet stepped in the house.

Heer lit the lamp and stood joining her hands in front of her chest and stared at her parents picture. With tears she is remembering her days with her parents. Her vision blurred. She saw an image on the picture. Unknowingly with jump she turned and looked back. Others also confused by her sudden movement turned. She whispered 'Prem'. For the first time after a year Preet and Megher are hearing his name from her mouth.

Actually, Prem called his parents after Heer went to washroom. He asked him to come to the nearby mandir. Prem went to meet them. Lalit and Gaya3 confused 'Prem why you called us here? Today evening you have to marry Ash but you are sitting in that house.' Gaya3 'you didn't come home in the night. Why are you behaving like this.'

Prem calmly 'ma dad I can't marry Ash.' Lalit and Gaya3 shocked. Prem 'ma. I love Heer.' Gay3 'why you didn't tell that when we came to you with Ash proposal?' Prem told about Heer and his friendship. 'I got angry and came home. But I never passed one second without thinking Heer. I thought she must have settled in her life. But she is struggling with my memories. She lost everyone. She needs me now. If I ignore her even in this situation, I won't be able to forgive myself. I realized my love for her late but I don't want to make that too late.'

Lalit and Gaya3 looked at each other. Lalit 'we want to see Heer.' Prem confused 'she is beautiful Dad.' Gaya3 pat his cheek 'I want to see my bahu.' Prem happy.

Prem stepped into the house. Heer without wasting a second ran to him and hugged him tightly. He hugged her back. hug expressed him 'how much she wanted him?' Heer came to conscious and pulled herself away from Prem 'I'm sorry.'

Gay3 came from behind Prem. teasingly 'you don't have to say sorry for hugging your Prem.' Heer looked at her with confusion. Prem 'my mother.' Heer wished her folding his hand. Gay3 'don't you touch your MIL's feet for blessing.' Heer confused and looked at Prem. Prem smiled and gently nodded his head.

Heer bent down and touched her feet. Lalit 'I'm your FIL.' Heer touched his feet. Preet hugged Megher. Lalit 'I know Heer your mother expired y'day. So we can't keep the marriage immediately. I'll meet the pandit to fix the date.' Gay3 'Prem you stay here with Heer. I'll send your dresses.' Prem agreed. Lalit and Gaya3 went back to Mansion after spending few hours with Prem and Heer.

Preet 'What a mother? Permission to stay with his sweet heart even before the marriage.' Megher, now we have to move.' Prem gave a fake angry look to Preet. Megher's mother 'world will talk badly if we leave them alone in this house before marriage. So we have to stay here until they get married.'

Mother 'Heer, we'll come in the night to stay with you.' Heer nodded.

Preet 'can I' Megher hit his stomach with her elbow. Megher father 'no problem. You can stay if Prem and Heer agrees.' Preet curved his lips 'very bad.' Prem 'you can. Because of you we are together now.' He pulled Heer into his hug.

Megher parents 'okay. We'll be back in the evening.' Father 'Prem I trust you that you won't cross the limits.' Prem nodded obediently. They moved out of the house. Preet and Megher to give Prem and Heer privacy went out saying some excuse.

As soon as they left them alone. Prem hugged Heer tightly 'I'm sorry Heer. I hurt your feelings.' Heer hugging him back 'no Prem. Its not your fault. Please Prem don't talk about the past. I want to be happy with you.' Prem cupped her face 'as you wish.' He kissed her forehead 'I love you.' she showed a disappointed face. Prem confused. Heer 'unromantic.' Prem with a fake angry 'me. Unromantic.' Heer 'ha you are.' She showed her tongue out and teased him. 'yes you are a most unromantic person.' She ran out of his hand. Prem 'Heer, don't say like that.' Heer 'you are unromantic.' Prem chased her. Both ran around.

Finally Prem caught her wrist and turned her around. He pinned her back on the wall. 'do you want to know my romance level.' He pressed his body on hers. Heer with fear 'Prem, we are not yet married. I'm sorry.'

Prem 'no way. Today I'll show you my level.' Heer 'Please Prem. No Pr.' he pressed his lips on hers. She opened her mouth to invite him without her conscious when his lips touched hers. She moaned as he explored her mouth. she responded back with love. Her hands moved on to his hair for support. He kept his hand under her head to give her comfortable position and caressed her cheek lovingly. They went deep kiss with passion and love till they needed air for survival.

She buried her face into his chest. Both were breathing heavily. She whispered 'I love you Prem.' She giggled 'you are only 10% romantic.' Prem hugging her tight 'remaining 90% I'll show you in our first night.' He cupped her face and nuzzled his nose on her cheek 'you have to wait till that day.' Heer teasingly giggled. Prem seriously'its my Promise Heer.' Heer curved his lips in unbelief. 'you never kept your promise.' She pulled his face closer 'Prem Juneja.' Prem 'now I'm not Prem Juneja.' Heer confused 'changed your name?' Prem nodded his head 'yes.' He pressed his forehead on hers 'I'm Heer's Prem.' Heer with tears hugged him tight. He hugged her back.

Both sat in the couch. She snuggled into his arms. Both kissing and teasing each other shared their dreams. Balraj and Teji souls are happy.

After a month Prem and Heer got married. His friends who teased them on the last day of their college came to wish them. 'we told them that day but you took one year to realize that.' All the old students arranged a party for them under the tree. Now they are Premeer and living happily.
He never stayed away from his Heer even for a day except his office hours. He never travelled for business without Heer.
He kept his Promise.
~~END~~
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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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all parts rocked man...
awsum...
part 1
awsum..luved the prem n heer scene..
part 2
thnk god they met..
part 3
so atlast......prem is wide heer..
part 4
the bst part evr..
they r married..
seriously they sud hv undrstod..yar...first only..they wasted 1 yr..usmein chahat bhi ho jati..
heheeh..
Edited by fireblaze_divya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#6
when u gonna updt part 2 and 3uidiot selvy hangkarkechoordiya itsso good frndshipanger ahhahyeilikethisprem junejahahaha updtt orrr
and if u updt later get me a pm sevicee
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Posted: 15 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

when u gonna updt part 2 and 3uidiot selvy hangkarkechoordiya itsso good frndshipanger ahhahyeilikethisprem junejahahaha updtt orrr
and if u updt later get me a pm sevicee



yeah aishu....plz selvy..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#8

1 & 2 are done.

3 comes next
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Posted: 15 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: newt2007

1 & 2 are done.

3 comes next



fst selvy wa8in..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10
u updt the third part or u r deaddd ohh godd love frndship anger now painn

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