FF - Game of FATE ~ COMPLETED!! - Page 35

heyyyy brilliant updae! luvd all scenes!

hey awesome part
and again, loved prem and heer's scenes
do continue soon
xx

loving it .
now this is my fav premeer ff
g8 work 👏

update soon

great update.....

wonderful update selvy..................

so their relation has progressed upto the level of kissing................ i am soo happy................

and it is so nice to see chahat and sneha having the same characters of premeer............... eagarly waiting for the secret behind it.............

update sooon

Very Nice update.

amazing
continue asap
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wonderful udate...loved the premeer scenes.. the kids scenes everything...wonder how come heer doesnt know she had twins...i'm really eager to know what happened in her life...i thot she was a surrogate mother sanjana had hired but since she doesnt know sanjana , i'm confused...do update soon

Part 11

Heer is busy giving instruction to one staff. Prem is working inside his room. Harman and Maya came to their office. Prem welcomed them. Maya met Heer. She is happy to see them working hard. She saw some of the dresses of her order. Heer happily 'almost the order is over.' Maya touched her shoulder 'I know you will finish it. I saw the confidence in your eyes.' Both went to Prem cabin where Harman is talking with Prem.

After casual talk Harman 'Prem, one building is coming for sale. The owner is in hurry. so he is seliing it in low Price. you won't get in that area for this amount.' Prem 'but I don't have money now.' Harman 'I also thought about that and came to a decision.' Prem and Heer looked at each other. Harman 'you apply for loan. I'll put the security signature for you.' Prem became emotional 'just because you I'm able to walk in this city again. You are showing too much love.'

Harman 'when I was trying hard for one time meal, your father helped me with a huge amount of money. My help is nothing in front of your fathers.' Prem eyes filled with tears. Maya understanding the situation 'okay come we'll go and see the building.' Prem agreed. 'Heer, come.' Heer 'Prem I don't know anything about that. You go and see the building.' Prem pleading with his eyes 'Heer come with me.' Heer smiled and agreed.

They went to see the building with Harman and Maya. Prem and Heer liked the place. Harman introduced the owner of the building and asked him to give sometime to arrange money. Prem doesn't know that Harman has already paid the token amount to the owner so that he won't sell that to anyone else.

Next few days passed Prem running around for loan. Loan got sanctioned.

Prem is standing near the window. Heer came to his room to keep the water jug. She is wearing her night suit. 'Good night Prem.' She turned to leave. She stopped when she heard him calling. Heer turned and looked at Prem. He is still looking out through the window. Heer walked to him and stood silently looking at his face. Prem turned and looked at Heer 'Heer, are you happy here?' Heer gave a confusing look to him. Prem 'Heer, you and Chahat were enjoying your life. I'm putting you lot of pressure on you. You are barely spending time with.'

Heer covered his mouth with her palm 'no Prem. You are not putting any pressure.' Prem removed her palm from his mouth and hold in between his palms. Heer 'we were alone. We never had any relations except Megher and Preet. Now Chahat has Papa, Sneha and Dadi ma. It all happened because of you Prem. I'm seeing happiness in her face.' Prem pulled her closer one hand holding hers and another slipping around her waist. He leaned forward closer to her face 'so only Chahat is happy not you.' Heer touched his face 'I'm also happy.' She smiled 'go to sleep.' He pulled her closer. He kissed her cheek 'good night.'

Heer heart skipped a beat when his lips touched her cheek. She didn't show any sign of movement. He whispered into her ears 'anything more?' this brought her out of sweet shock. She shyly smiled. He kissed his cheek 'good night.' And ran out of his grip before he senses the situation. She stopped near the door looked at him. He touched the spot where she kissed and looked at her. She smiled and ran out closing the door.

Prem smiled looking at the door. He ran his fingers through hair and smiled. He fell on the bed hugging a pillow. He recollected the scene again and smiled until he drifted into sleep.

Heer entered her room smiling herself. She didn't see Gaya3 awake in her room. Gaya3 smiled to herself seeing Heer's red cheeks. She closed her eyes as if she is sleeping. Heer sat on the bed next to Chahat. She kissed Chahat and Sneha on their forehead. She lyed down switching off the light. Her hearts jumped thinking his kiss.

Next few days were busy completing the orders and completing the formalities for the new building. Prem entered the house happily after registration of the new building. He got disappointed when no one is there to celebrate his joy. His lips spread smile when he heard 'Prem, I'm here.' Prem went to Kitchen and saw Heer busy preparing Halwa. Prem 'where is ma?'

Heer without looking at him, she is concentrating on her halwa 'Ma went to mandir. Sneha and Chahat are paying in the garden.' She turned to take a bowl. She didn't see Prem who is standing very close behind her. She hit his chest. He encircled his hands around her waist. Heer 'Prem' she tried to remove his hand. Prem 'I'm happy Heer. Everything went fine.' Heer pulled his cheeks 'for you everything will happen as success.' Prem 'I want to celebrate.' Heer 'I made Halwa. You go to garden I'll bring that there.' Prem rushed out to garden.

In the garden, Sneha and Chahat are playing. They have created a mountain with sand. They are picking up flower. Prem 'what are you both doing here?' Chahat and Sneha showed their hand 'flowrs.' Prem knelt before the mountain 'for what?' Sneha inserted the flower on the top 'tee'. Chahat inserted a small flower 'litthle tee.'

Heer came with two bowl of Halwa. She sat next to Prem on the ground. 'Prem' she stretched her hand to hand over one bowl to him. Prem looked at her like a kid. He rubbed his hand on the sand twice. He showed his palm to her. Like a kid 'its dirty.' He smiled. Heer understood his intention. She smiled 'very clever.' She started feeding Chahat, Sneha and Prem. They were playing and enjoying Halwa.

Chahat and Sneha ran to pick up more flowers. Prem leaned towards Heer 'Heer, see there is a cute little bird sitting there.' He pointed his finger upwards towards a tree. Heer eagerly searched for the bird 'where?' He gave a quick peck on her cheek 'here.' Heer hit his chest seeing his naughtiness.

Gaya3, who returned from mandir silently enjoying the Prem and Heer. Whispering a prayer to God she walked into house with a smile.

Harman's orders delivered in time. New factory is ready to open. It has two buildings. One Prem decided to use for factory and another one as showroom in the future. Now they don't have any order so Heer decided to stitch some new design dresses for various age groups to open a new showroom.

Its pooja day. Prem, Heer along with Gaya3 and Kids came for opening. Gaya3 'Prem, where is Preet and Megher?' Prem 'they have important case to handle.' Gaya3 showed a disappointed face which Prem didn't notice.

Harman and Maya came for the pooja. Prem asked Gaya3 to perform the pooja. After arti and some rituals Prem and Harman are talking about future plans. Maya is talking to Heer. Gaya3 is chatting some of the old staff members. Chahat and Sneha are running around in the room gathering flowers.

Suddenly all the members attention turned to oneside. Chahat and Sneha are standing in the middle of the room keeping their hands inside their jeans pocket. They were talking about something. In the other side Prem talking to Harman. His both the hands are inside his pocket. Everyone looked at the kid then Prem. Many know Sneha is Prem's child. So they are not surprised to see Sneha in that posture but Chahat posture gave them surprise.

One 'she must be having some connection with Prem sir in her past genam.' Other 'may be she learnt it from him as she is staying with him.' One 'no. she must be having that nature by birth. Her comfort shows that.'

Harman looking at Sneha and Chahat 'I thought you has only one girl.' Prem looked at Chahat 'Chahat is Heer daughter. So She is also my daughter.' Harman 'but they looks alike in all the features. her style resembles yours' Prem smiled 'everyone tells the same.' Harman confused but don't want to dig much in it.

Harman 'Prem, t'row evening there is a party in our business men club.' Prem 'I don't like parties.' Harman 'I know but you have to come there. You can meet some people through you have the chance of getting export orders.' Prem agreed.

Chahat and Senha came to Prem. Pointing the balloons hanging on the hall 'papa, balloon.' Prem understood their intention. He knelt before them 'not now.' Chahat 'papa, one.' She pleaded. Sneha 'papa one.' Prem 'okay but one condition.' Chahat and Sneha looked at him 'ha' Prem 'you should not break that balloon.' Chahat and Sneha shook their head. 'ok papa.'

Prem got up and pulled two balloons and handed one to each. Chahat and Sneha started kicking the balloon around. Staff started their work. Harman, Maya and guest left the place. Gaya3 is sitting in Prem's room and silently recollecting Lalit's days.

Prem and Heer busy checking something inside the Prem's room. Chahat and Sneha came running into the room. They were laughing holding the balloon. Prem and Heer looked up and went back to concentrate on their work. Gaya3 smiling looking at Chahat and Sneha.

Suddenly all heard a loud noise. Prem and Heer looked up. Chahat and Sneha sat on the balloon and burst it. They laughed loudly. They stopped when Prem looked at them. They looked down. Prem with a smile moved to them. He knelt before them and looked at their face. they slowly looked at him. Looking at his smiling face they smiled and hugged Prem. He took hugged them 'naughty girls.' He kissed them.

Hearing the noise some rushed to Prem room and saw the loving scene. Gaya3 is confused 'how come Chahat also has the same habit of Prem.' Heer is confused 'how both got the same idea.'

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Loved the update. What with the mystery. Chahat n Sneha both have habits of Heer n Prem. Suspense is mounting.