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Khadija

@khajju

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#41

hey i m a new reader....u always pmed we when ur all updates....i wasnt able to read as i was busy with exams....nywayz thanks for all ur pms......nice update.

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munni_sheela

@munni_sheela

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: khajju
hey i m a new reader....u always pmed we when ur all updates....i wasnt able to read as i was busy with exams....nywayz thanks for all ur pms......nice update.

no problem

main thing is u commented

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munni_sheela

@munni_sheela

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: _Mariam_
Hey sorry for late comments
but awsome start to your ff

arman is prems son

now prem will probably ask her

continue soon

no problem mariam

im glad u like it

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munni_sheela

@munni_sheela

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#44

part 2

prme:so heer kaise ho????????

heer:tum se matlab aur mera haath chordo

prem:kyun...jao nahi chord ta

heer:dekho mera haath chordo warna.....

prem:warna kyaa.........coming closer

heer:dekho prem.........

prem:im glad tumhein mera naam yaad hai

heer:dekho.... prem

prem:heer mujhe tum se baat karni hai

heer:par mujhe nahi karni

and try to leave but prem held her more tightly

prem:heer kya ar.........

some one shouted "heer ............prem"

heer:aye bauji

and heer leave from there

prem(to himself):yeh uncle ko bhi abhi bulana tha kya??????

and prem also come outside

armaan:mama neend aarahi hai

heer:aah chalo and pick him on her arms

balraj:jao jake sula do and she leave from there and prem also go behind her without any one could notice heer lay down with armaan

armaan:mama preet uncle bohat ache hain

heer:kyun??????

armaan:kyunki unhone mujhe bohat sari choclates di

heer:acha and start t tickling him and they both are laughing

someone knock and say "am i diturbing u" both heer and armaan get up and see prem standing there and heer is shock

heer:tum

armaan:uncle prem aap yahan

prem:well mein ne socha ke tu se baatein karoon

armaan:mujh se

prem:hasan kyun???????

heer:well armmy ko neend arrahi hai soo plzzzz

armaan:nahi mom mein theek hoon

prem:see........heer tum kitna jhoot bolti hoo

heer glare at him

prem:sorry...and sit on the bed with heer and armaan

prem:so tell me mein aap ko kaisa laga??

armaan:kyun?????

prem:well tumne preet ke bare mein bataya aab mere bara mein batao

armaan:aap bhi ache ho

prem:woh kyun??????????

armaan:matlab

prem:kuch nahi

armaan:mama inhne kya kaha

heer:kuch nahi beta.......prem tumjao yahan se

prem:kyun????

heer:kyun ka kya matlab hai yeh mera kamra hai

prem:to??????

heer:to kay jao yaha se

armaan:mama aap uncle ko kyun daant rahein hain

prem:haan heer mujhe kyun daant rahi hoon

heer:armaan sona hain ya nahi

armaan:yes mom

heer:good........aab tum jao (to prem)

prem:ek shart par

heer:kya??????/

prem:itni jaldi maan gayi

heer:jaldi bolo

prem:meet me at 12 at night on terrace

heer:what????????

prem:what kay baat karni hai tumse

heer:theek hai now go plzz

prem:thank u and kiss her on her cheek and rum away

heer:😡prem

hope u like it

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Anisha Jayakumar

@anishajk99

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Nice update but short .......so prem is jerk i guess.......prem-armaan scenes wer gud.......cant wait for premeer meeting at the terrace........pls do cont asap........nd pls try nd give looooong updates 😛........thanx 4 the pm........

Edited by anishajk99 - 15 years ago

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Kamal

@Olicity_23

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#46

awesome

thnx 4 the pm

update soon

Kamal

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munni_sheela

@munni_sheela

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: anishajk99
Nice update but short .......so prem is jerk i guess.......prem-armaan scenes wer gud.......cant wait for premeer meeting at the terrace........pls do cont asap........nd pls try nd give looooong updates 😛........thanx 4 the pm........

thnx

i will try to update next part long