~~'MILAN'~~-part 25 and on pg120[28th may]

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: premheer19
Hi, nice part, make prem cm soon frm london. Wow ur from b'lore, i am from mysore, achha lagtha hai ki apna koyi mil jatha hai with luv jyothi

thanx... 😊

yaar sab log wahi se hai....yahan se koi nahi hai..... 😭

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: suryavni
hi su....
sorry yaar kaan pakaring for not commenting for the past two updates....

but i read them now and i am commenting...

wow ....prem tracked down rajveer and is gonna leave heer with him now....??!

how could he?now this going to london.....leaving her with raj...to take care of her....

will this make her realise her love for prem or bring her more close to rajweer?!

eagerly waiting.....

lol my name became su.... 😆
next time u have to do 50 sit pus 😈
yes he did he he is gr8 na..... 😎
ypp...he left her and went....
wait and watch..... 😉

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Jyothi N

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Posted: 15 years ago

#373

Matlab aur kn ya se hai, u no i am new here, waise dont worry b' lore is 2nd home, ana jana laga rehaiga 😉

Edited by premheer19 - 15 years ago

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: premheer19
Matlab aur kn ya se hai, u no i am new here, waise dont worry b' lore is 2nd home, ana jana laga rehaiga 😉

nspn.92 is also from mysore...
wwwoooww....tats gr8... 😃

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Namrata Kumari

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Posted: 15 years ago

#375

Prem jaa raha hai................may be doooriya unhe pass le aaye...........like Heer realise what prem means to her

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: NIMMY
Prem jaa raha hai................may be doooriya unhe pass le aaye...........like Heer realise what prem means to her

lets see..... 😉

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newt2007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#377

nice part

Prem found Raj. oh no.

poor Prem has to go through all this pain.

i think Heer will relaise the difference between Raj and Prem. hope this seperation brings Heer to Prem.

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: newt2007
nice part

Prem found Raj. oh no.

poor Prem has to go through all this pain.

i think Heer will relaise the difference between Raj and Prem. hope this seperation brings Heer to Prem.

thanx.....
lets see...... 😉

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#379

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey ppl..... 🤗 im quite sure that u pll will be happy after reading this chapter...so plzzz i want long comments......

CHAPTER 14

NEXT DAY......
Heer was simply changing the channels.Nothing was interesting or good.So she decided to call RV home.
She called him and he was ready to come in the evening.They decided to go out for dinner....

In the evening RV came to heer's house...He was waiting for heer to get ready.The phone rang which was in the hall.RV picked it up..
RV:hello...
Preet:hello kaun....
RV:im rajveer...aap kaun...
Preet:ye paajveer...kaun....wrong number lag gaya kya....."he asked bauji.....
Heer came down....and asked RV in action who..?
RV:I don't know...."telling this he handed the receiver to heer.
Heer:hello....
Preet:arre....bhabhi......
Heer:oohh.....preet...kai sa hai t aur ghar mein sab...kai se hai..?
Preet:who..sab chodiye......woh kaun tha...wohh..kaun ......haaaan RV...?
Heer:wwoohh.....aabb...mera dost hai...haan mera dost...."she said getting a bit tensed....
She dint want the truth to come out like that itself...Prem had assured her that he will make them understand slowly...till then don't tell anything.So she dint tell anything.
Preet:ooohhh.....ok.PB kahan hai....
Heer:thumhe nahi pata....woh toh London gaya hai....
Preet:jjeee....kab...i dint know abt this....
Heer:thumhe nahi pata ..i thought.....aap sab ko paa haii....
Pret:nahi...bhabi nahi pata....ok ye sab chodiye kab aarahe hai saab..
Heer:ek haft eke baad aajayega.....
Preet:I wil not leave PB aapko akele chodke chalaaagayaa........choo...hat hat.......mere paas mat aana...chooo.....
Heer:prrrreeeeeetttttt....ye thumhe kya hogaya hai "she said laughing..hearing him telling chhooo...chooo....
Preet:arre kya batao Veera ne kisi friend ki puppy ko laayi hai....1 mahine ke liye...aur mujhe kutthe bilkul pasand nahi....aur ye mujhe 1 hafte se sone nahi diya...hame sham era aage piche ghomtha rehta hai....."he said in a cute tone but also with little anger.
Heer started laughing catching her stomach...She felt it was really funny....and RV was not understanding anything..He was standing like a doll and was watching her.
Preet:ok....ok ...bye..bhabhi ye kutha mujhe chod nahi raha bye...talk to you later."he said and cut the call

Even after cutting the call heer was laughing and she told everything to RV and both of them started laughing....
They went had dinner.They started talking...and enjoyed to the full.
Later Heer came home at night got freshened up and was ready to sleep...that is when her cell phone rang...
She looked at it and saw prem's name flashing and a small smile crept on her face.
Hello"she said...
Hello.......kya kar rahi ho...."
I was about to sleep now.....said heer sitting on the bed.
Ooohh....sorry I dint realize...the time difference.im in office.tum apna khayaal rakhna teek hai....
Ok..prem...par thumhe pata hai kya....mujhe daarr lag raha hai...mai yahan akele...u no...
Prem:im really sorry heer...i left u alone there.......now u go to sleep its late...
Il call tomorrow...Bye....
Heer also said bye and cut the call and went to sleep.....

Days passed by....and tonight prem was coming back.....
Heer was also finding some difference in RV.He was not the same old one.But she dint want to ask him and make more thamaasha,so she kept quiet.Prem called Heer everyday....and they spent time talking most of the time.Sometime prem had work so not much they spoke at that time....
RV also used to come home and they used to go out.
Today RV had planned to take Heer to his house in the evening.Heer also wanted to go to his new house.. He always kept it as a suspense...and dint take her cuz he was not staying in a house....

Heer jaldi aao"RV became restless as heer was taking long time to get ready.....
Then after a long time he saw that she came down wearing a saree....This was the first time he saw her like that in a saree...
Heer came...."machar andar jaayega so better..."she said closing his mouth by pushing his chin upwards....

Then they went out.Heer locked the door.And they sat in the car and drove off......
RV stopped the car infront of a big building.....He came to heer's side made her get down.
Heer saw the building....."RV ye..ye toh...hotel hai...."she asked with confusion........As far she knew he was taking her to his house.....
"Ohhh...come on heer....u will come to know....."saying this he took her in
On the way a man showed him thumbs up....and so did RV.Heer dint notice this....
RV went and took the key from the reception and took her to the 7th floor and entered into a room.
"RV yahan....kyun.....i mean...."she was cut...
"ssshhhhhh......"

He made her sit on the sofa.The room was quiet big.Had a big bed in the middle and a sofa set was there.All the curtains were closed and it was dark.RV pot on the light....
RV:oohh...heer...i wont stay in any house darling... I stay in this hotel...I had come India for a month only....I actually stay in US...."he said slowly caressing her cheeks....Heer really dint like his move.He sitting so close...and doing that..She herself dint know but she dint like it.
"pls RV"she said pulling away his hands from her....
"oohhh...come on heer..."he said and ws about to go more near to her...he heard a knock on the door.
So he went to the door.Opened it and the waiter came in and arranged the drinks on the table and left.
RV closed the door and came back....
"RV ye...ye sabb..."she said disgusted
"ofcourse....i am a big man now and this is common"he said pouring the drink into a glass and his 1st round without soda...
"mein..thumhe kal milthi hoon...bye.."saying this heer was about to go out but RV held her by her wrist and had one more full glass of drink...
He also stood up and pushed her on the bed.....Heer had tears in her eyes....What was he doin?she couldn't believe her own eyes....
He came and jumped next to her on the bed giving her a evil smile.....He went on top of her and heer trying to push him hard but all in vain.He was too strong....But atlast she tried to push him and went to another corner...
Tum ye sab...kyun kar rahe ho..cheee....."she said with frustration...
Kyun nahi kar sakta....ha...."coming near...
Heer:plss shaadi se pehele ye sab...acchaa nahi hai.."she said pleading him and cooling her down.
He had one more glass....and started laughing...."shaaadi....main thumse....ha..ha...haa....im not like u heer that il leave my wife and come to you...am I mad.....thumhara pati toh...bohot mahaan hai...par meri biwi nahi.....infact main thumse kabi pyaar kiya hi nahi....pyaar kiya hai toh..sirf thumhare paison se......abb jab mujhe ek aur ameer ladki milgayi...main thumhare peeche kyun bhaagoonga......abb mere paas sab kuch hai...sab kuch....mujhe toh...abb tum mere dil behlaane ke liye chaahiye thi...thats it...
Aur waise bhi main ka chalaa jaaonga........waapis....so abb let me enjoy....."he said and had another glass and pulled her close....
Heer tried hard to get away from his catch.she pushed him hard...He fell down without no more strength as he was drunk......Heer ran away....crying..........and took a taxi...and went home

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