FF|All the Wrong Moves in All the Right Ways I - Page 65

I LOVE THE SOCK!!!!! 😉 - Naughty sock!!! Beautifully written!!! I bet G3 mom saw everything... Prem is just Prem... He is cute, naughty and romantic!!! And that Prashant... Can someone (eg..PREET) tell him the truth!!! I loved Harman.. I would believe that Preet would pull some kind of trick like that... But Harman!!! Good writing Grace!!!

in 1 word it was awesome loved every bit and every line of ur ff.it was amazing.read the whole ff in 1 day.plz pm me next time.

loved it.........

awesome part.....prem is like.......haha......thnx for the pm.........update asap........cant wait

OmG you ended the part so badly!! now i have to wait for the next part lol

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon..............i am waiting what will happen now.....plz update soon

Awesome update !
Loved it !
Premeer scenes were fantastic !
Great work !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !

Originally posted by: brainychild92

what.. u mean i gotta wait for the next aprt!! no!!!! i really wanna know everyone's reaction.. continue soon!!

😛 suspense is good no? 😆 Thanks for commenting dear!

Originally posted by: soapsick

OMG!! Wicked!! This was fab Grace!! Looks like Teji knows everything and will try and create problems for PH 😕 oh and gooo Gyatri! 😃 I'm so going to wait for Friday 😒

Hehe...what does Teji think of all of this??? 😲 Thanks for commenting Nikhila!

Originally posted by: suryavni

ah!...towel dance...!hehe...got a hangover and still flirting...!!😉

okay so you have sent angels for rescue....g3 and teji....!!

hope they 'll help them to get rid of prasanth...

and loved harman for the first time ....😛 so sweet of him to call heer 'bhabhi '

btw saying abt harman....you are still keeping us in dark abt his mysterious behaviour...

anyways waiting to know what happens next...!

Yea, I've been neglecting poor Harman don't worry he's track is on the way 😃 Thanks for commenting Surya!

Originally posted by: Aymee

OMG, Grace, I wonder what Teji and G3 saw and knows. I hope they both support them and tell their dads about their relationship.

I couldn't stop laughing when Prashant walked out of Heer's home in such a hurry. Poor guy, just like Prem, I guess he will be spending his night in the bathroom also 😆.

My favorite part was when Prem thought he was seeing an angel. But when he thought the angel felt like Heer and sounded like Heer, I couldn't stop laughing. I am glad Prem and Heer. I hope they don't fight like this again.

Shower scene....one word...HOT. Wow, Heer got a very nice view of Prem and his body. I am glad the sock kept falling down on her. And when Prem asked her if she wanted to join, I almost fell of my chair. Very hot scene. I loved it.

Thank you for the PM. It was a very cute, funny and hot update. I really do hope Teji doesn't turn against Heer. I have feeling both moms must have witnessed them romancing each other.

Thanks for commenting Lisa! I'm glad you liked the last update. Hehe...more surprises in stored for sure 😳

Originally posted by: harshaitixoxo

Can't wait to read the next part!
Plz update soon!

Thanks for commenting dear! 😊

Originally posted by: moon_mine

o my god!!!!!
wat an update!!!!!
hd evrythng n it.......romance , concern, pranks, care, tension, n at the lst suspense!!!!!!
relly it ws supreb!!!!
lovd evry part.....
heer's concern for prem.....abt his headache.....
heer's drooling over prem's body.....
then prem heer romance.......
then preet's concern for his brother n bhabhi.....
n then the same goes for harman also......
then prashant's popping out of nowhere.......
n the tension created due to that....ws also shown beautifully!!!
then harman's prank on prashant ws just hilarious!!!!
relly can't thnk harman cud do such mischief!!!!
these r generally expected frm preet!!!!
so this ws quite a surprise!!!!
then at the end came the mother son bonding!!!!! its true...that wat ever age u r u alws need ur mother's hand wen on ur forehead......wen u r sick!!!! n that one touch cn do wonders!!!!!

then at the end gayatri's plan to see prem heer together...n teji's attitude!!!!!
hope teji wud support them at least gayatri wud make her support them!!!!!!
nyws too eager to read the next part..........so pls update asap!!!!

Thanks for commenting dear! Yea, I figure Harman was pretty bland in Kis Desh but he's the middle brother right? He's got to have a nice mix of Prem and Preet in him. So, I decided to make Harman save the day and inject a little more character into him. 😃

Originally posted by: cute1122

wow great part plz updare soon...............

Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: alisha_harshiti

i just hope teji and g3 are gud..and omg the towel scene was hillarious....over all a power-packed update butwhy did u stop here?awwwwww now i have wait for long.....please update soon.....

Suspense is good 😛 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear!

Originally posted by: angelina_angel

hey thats very very mean no pre cap
n u didnt even mention when ur gonna update!!
not fair😡
loved the beautiful hangover it was indeed beautiful
so haman's also in their team
hope gayatri convinces the others
im 100% sure she knows about it
poor prashant actually felt sorry for him but he deserves it for coming in between premeer
didnt know harman could do such thing
well he did say anything for bhaya n babhi so guess its anything

Harman to the rescue...hehe😆 Wanted to bring him more into the story since I've been neglecting this poor character. Thanks for taking the time to comment dear!

Originally posted by: --Mehak--

Great chapter Grace!👏 It was in a smooth flow and I liked everythign about it!😃The shower scene was HOT though it was only Prem😆 but his description from Heer's POV was sensual nonetheless!😳I am glad Teji finally knows and Gayatri will be there with them!Prashant guy is getting what he deserves"😆Oh and about me hating him, Its actually the fact that he isn't totally a BAD guy till now!😆If you plan to turm him into an evil guy like Manmeet or Rishabh, I can ofiicially hate him!😃and about PH romance!it was appropriate dear!I am glad you didnt put much cause thats what the situation and scenes demanded!Waiting for Friday!😃

I thought Manmeet was never evil he was just crazy...the evil guy was his twin brother Prashant 😳 If that's any indication you can probably HATE 😡 him now 😃 And the PH romance...glad it worked out okay. I have to balance it from being too much or too little 😳 Thanks for commenting Mehak!

Originally posted by: premdesh

awesome update

plz next part asappp

Thanks for taking the time comment dear! 😊

Originally posted by: -Nitya-

Gayatri to the rescue! *plays super hero music* I hope she explains to Teji that Heer and Prem love each other very dearly and that they should be the ones getting married! =P If Teji doesn't agree..she can go to heaven! 😆

I really liked this chapter!! It was cute, filled with so much Premeerness!! 😲 and best part was when prem asked heer if she wanted to see his towel dance. 🤣 epic! and what a perfect situation!

Laxatives?! I never knew Harman could be so cunning! but thanks to him, they got rid of that Prashant dude! I hope he clears the way soon..I don't think I can handle reading about him trying to make a move on Heer without doing what prem did in the bathroom. LOL!

awesome chapter Grace!! (=

Hehe...roller coaster ride still in progress 🤢 so there's going to be a lot going on as I try to wrap up this Prashant track. As for Harman he's a Juneja...he's got a little Preet cunning in him 😆
Haha...the towel dance joke was a my fav in this chapter 😃 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear!

Originally posted by: sonia7

awesome update
aww loved the prem heer bathroom scene especially the bit when he asked heer "do you want to join me" lol
i think gaya3 knows about prem and heer
and teji seems to be angry with heer lest see what she has to say to heer
thanks for the pm

Hehe...the bathroom scene 😳 Thanks for commenting dear!

Originally posted by: pwincess1

plz plz plz continue soon!

why did you stop it there???

well i hope the truth is out now!

Suspense is a good thing 😆 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear!