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Harpreet Randhawa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: bd670816
awesome update...loved it.
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#82

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio
nice....
so pooja looks like heer!

itz good that pooja is dead now heer will come in prem's life!

continue soon!

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Harpreet Randhawa

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#83

Originally posted by: meeshti.
hey
nice update

intresting ........................

soo heer looks like pooja

update soon

Yap thanks!!
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Originally posted by: blufate.14
wow nice update soon.....

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#85

Originally posted by: nehara
hey...
awesome updates.....
it was really good...
but i'm confused.... like u said...
is heer pooja's twin?? or is she pooja??
cnt wait to find out.... pls update soon... 😃

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Originally posted by: crystall
Awesome updates !
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Waiting for next !
Update soon !
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#87

Originally posted by: brainychild92
i like!! i hope its not like kavyaanjali not that i didnt like that show.. i just dont want heer out of revenge.lol

continue soonn

No No she's not gonna be this ff is probably gonna be very different form the others!
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#88

Originally posted by: kptl
now its getting more interesting....cant wait to see watll heer aka pooja have to say abt acting as pooja...nd ya cant wait to see da connection bw pooja nd heer... r dy one or sister...

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Originally posted by: sonia7
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Harpreet Randhawa

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Hay guys im back with another update!! I will update PLAYBOY tomorrow! SO here's the update hope u like it!

Chapter 3

It was Pooja his Pooja "Pooja" said Prem and started walking towards her. "POOJA" yelled Prem again cause of the loud music than he finally reached her and was standing behind her. Prem slowly stretched his hand towards Pooja and put his hand on her shoulder.

She slowly turned around and said "yes" she said "Heer were gonna go and take a brake" said one of Heer's friends "kk" said Heer and turned back to Prem "yes....so...how can i help u?" asked Heer and Prem just hugged her. Although Heer didn't mind since she thought that Prem was hot and what not but than again he is a stranger.

"Excuse me" said Heer and pushed him off "who are you i mean i've never seen u in my life and your hugging me?" asked Heer "Pooja mai Prem tumara Prem" said Prem "mera Prem?" asked Heer "Pooja?" asked Heer "i think that this man is drunk" thought Heer.

"umm listen im Heer not...Pooja" said Heer "nahi tum he Pooja ho not Heer Pooja please lets go home and than everything will be back to normal me you and our Chahat" said Prem "ohh so he thinks im his WIFE" thought Heer "Look Mr...Prem? Im Heer not Pooja im Heer Maan" said Heer.

"No your Pooja Juneja" said Prem "GOD i think this guy is really drunk i should help him or else he might end up calling someone this Pooja chick" thought Heer "umm do u need any help like are u drunk or something?" asked Heer "no Pooja you know that i don't drink" said Prem.

"Rightttt" said Heer "GUYs" yelled Heer and all of her friends came over "can you plzz tell this man who i am no questions plzz tell him" said Heer "she's Heer Maan why?" asked one of her friends "See im Heer not ur Pooja now plzz go" said Heer and was leaving when Prem stopped her by holding her wrist.

He pulled her back and she hit his chest "let GOO" yelled Heer "Pooja why are you doing this?" asked Prem "IM NOT POOJA" yelled Heer "look ur mistaken im not Pooja im Heer Heer Maan now plzz let go of me" said Heer. "NO NO ur my Pooja maybe because of the accident you don't remember me" said Prem letting her go "but don't worry lets go home and once you see Chahat you will remember everything" said PRem

"WHT how is this Chahat now?" asked Heer "Chahat humare beti" said Prem and Heer mouth was wide open "WHT look dude im not even married and your saying that i have a kid!! and that too with you?" asked Heer "im soo out a here" said Heer and left and Prem came behind her.

Heer was in the parking lot and she said bye to her friends and was about to get into her car when someone came infront of her and it was Prem. Heer just rolled her eyes and was trying to push him out of the way. "Pooja please" said Prem with teary eyes "Okay you know what this is the limit IM NOT POOJA" said Heer "please just let me go" said Heer.

"I will let you go we will both go home to our home" said Prem putting his hands on Heer's shoulders but Heer just shoved them off "LISTEN YOU LET ME GO RIGHT NOW IM NOT KIDDING this really is the limit" said Heer "liken PO-" but got cut of by Heer "don't you dare call me Pooja every again understood this really is the limit 1st you say that im your Pooja 2cond you say that i have a daughter with you and 3rd your telling my to go to OUR home listen me you have NO HOME together i go to my house and you go to yours." said Heer

"and plus why are you doing this?" asked Heer "doing what?" asked Prem "doing all of this i mean did you want to take me out or what?" asked Heer "ur my wife i can take you out anytime" said Prem "please just get out of my way" said Heer "no fist listen to what i have to say than" said Prem and Prem kept on going on and on and on about him and Pooja.

Heer was getting so tired "ohh god how to I make this Prem dude shut up?? i've tried yelling not working so lets try it Smara's way (Heer's friend)"thought Heer. Than she crashed her lips on Prem's. Prem was really shocked but happy cause this was his first kiss with his Pooja.

Heer put her arms around Prem's neck and Prem put his hands around Heer's waist and pulled her closer. Than Heer let go of Prem's lips but Prem didn't Heer was trying and was pushing PRem away but Prem was pushing Heer towards him. Than finally when Prem and Heer needed to breath Prem let go and when he didn't Heer slapped him.

"HOW dare you?" asked Heer "excuse me" said Prem while breathing heavily "why did you keep on kissing me" said Heer "wait wait wait who kissed who again?" asked Prem "look don't take that the wrong way kk i just kissed you to make you shut up cause evidently my screaming and yelling was no help" said Heer "Pooja please" said Prem than Heer went down on her knees and folded her hands "please mere babh mujie jane do" said Heer

So Prem picked Heer up by her shoulders and said "fine but when i prove that you are my Pooja you can't deny" said Prem "whtever" said Heer and Prem moved and Heer sat in the car and drove off. "Pooja tomorrow i will prove it but Pooja would never have behaved with me like this and never would she have worn those kind of clothes is she really Heer or my Pooja?" thought Prem "Kon Ho Tum"

(Precap= "look dude seriously i promise that i will never ever come to this club again not at night nor in the morning but please stop following me or else i will have to call the police." said Heer)

So how was it????plzz do let me knoe!!

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I HOPE THAT THIS WaS a LONG UPDATE!!

Edited by -BabyCupid- - 15 years ago

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