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shivangi2092

@shivangi2092

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#391

firstly a bigggggggggg muwaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! to you dear for writing such a beautiful update!!!!!!!😃

Loved it thoroughly!👏

I really enjoy ur writings!!!!!!!!!

Meher is such a "shaitan ki nani"! lol!😆

really liked all the Meet and Premeer scenes!😉

plzzzzzzzzzzzz next part jaldi update karna!!!!!!!!

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kauser

@mazkachazka

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#392

lovely update!!!after a long time though!!

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Tasneem

@Tasneem-17

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#393

OK, so firstly let me clear this that i never read ur first 9 shots at all....probably i just read one of it, most possibly the last one, but that too not with complete concentration. So, when i got ur pm, initially i was a little confused whether i should read it or not coz i didn't have a single idea about the storyline and how the story proceeded from the beginning. Thus, i thought of reading it from the first.😃

The starting was really captivating. It instantly grabbed by attention and therefore i HAD to continue. 😉

It was a very good thought of beginning the story with a "bang-on" Premeer rendezvous.....though it was an accident, but like i always say..."Everything memorable thing begins with a bang"⭐️

Prem and Heer's character analysis was just beautiful......feels like saying "I wish i had sb like Prem in my life"...."I wish i could be as pretty as Heer"......"I wish i could be as lucky..."😳

Preet and Meher's relation is just "Jhakass"😆; and Meher is like "Vodka ke shot mein ak choti si mirchi hari...😉" Love her😛.

The intensity between Premeer within their eyes were described very elegantly👏😳

Aww......poor Prem, itna acha date plan kiya tha, propose to dur ki baat hain...ab pata nahi ke woh kuch aur bhi keh payega ki nahi😆.

Aishu, u r a fabulous writer. In future, if i ever write a ff or ss or anything, u r going to be my only inspiration.👏🤗

U know i have a big diary of speeches.....i just love to collect them. And i loved the way u ended all uf ur shots...with a famous saying of some famous people.⭐️

Sorry, for the late reply but nevertheless couldn't miss the opportunity to read ur ff😛

Take Care😊

Luv ya❤️

Tasneem😎

Edited by Tas17 - 14 years ago

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#394

how cute!!prem-heer's date was funny but clear my confusion

are meet married or dating? does meher live with them? what relations does she have with juneja..

continue soon n pm me when u do

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#395

Awesome update !

Loved it !

The end part was soo funny !

Waiting for next !

Update soon !

Thnx for pm !

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#396

⭐️

hey aishooo !!!!😊

m back wid my coment of ur shotsss!!!

dishkyuuunnnn!!😉

LOL

good tu itne lambe updates kab se likhne lag gayii !!!😲

huh 😆

mujhe puree 3 hrs lage parhne mein !!!

wasyy it was the first tym jo tune itne achee updates likhee

i m totally surprised 😆

SHOT-7

it was an awesome update ⭐️⭐️

the rain scene was quiteeeee hottt !!!!!😳

n the song was quite suitable for the situation !!!😉

prem is such a shameless!!

he was droling on heeer!!!

tumhari ankehin !!!! kuch toh baat h 👏😆

dunt u get jealous😆

soo meher is getting wat going in prem's mind !!⭐️

arghhh

this preet is soo stupid

but they both r totally romantic !!!!!😳

SHOT-8

starting hi kya lajawab thiii !!!😛

"isse pyaar kaho ya pagalpan lamha lamha tujhe dhoonde mann"

waahhhh!!!!!!😛

aeeeeeee ye kitne songs sunte h !!!!!😆

harr update mein song daal degii romance create karne k liyee!!!!😛

achaww h !!!

it was an totallyyyy gudd update

tu b achi writer ban hi gayii😆👏

this preet meher fight is soo funny wid a taste of romance masala!!!!!😆⭐️

loved it

meher is dioing a great job whilee making them closer to each other .......

awww poor prem !!!!

pehle heer gus gayi rum mein ab ye meher !!!😆

heer is soo shameles!!!

n u r tooo !!!!

abe apne dil k arman uske dil se nikalwa ri h !!!😡

description of body is quitee drooling !!!😆

u did a awesome job anyways !!⭐️

loved that breakfast taunts by meher !!!😉

soo they r going for shopping

great !!!

loved datt u r looking so see seee!!!!😆

baate palatna toh koi prem se sikheee 😛

SHOT9

this was an awesome update 👏

the car scene wass kind off niceee!!!!!⭐️

but wat prem said after da car ride was not good !!!😡

teri toh aisho ki bachii !!😡

yahan pe tragedy gusane mein lagi h !!!

huh

i loved the way meher n preet solve this issue n r making them realise their love😃

aree prem se i love u kab bulwayegii !!😡

tu sare kaam kya pitai k baad hi karti h kya larkiii !!!!😛

SHOT10

it was an totallllyyy preet meher update

well i loved their way of dating in discoo !!!!!😆

kind of uniqueee😛

preemer ki date shuru hone se pehle hi khtam ho gayi 😆

love that gay sequel ni their datee!!!!😆

hehehe

waiting for their real date 😉

i mean u prmised na next shot wil be their date 😳

i m waiting for dat mpatiently 😳

chal ab jaldi se updateee karrrrr

keep it up

n pm meeeee toooo😡

Edited by meeshti. - 14 years ago

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#397

heyy

great part, loool first preet getting slapped by an aunty!! in a disco!!

and then prem getting flirted by a gay guy!! loool this was jokes!!

cant wait for more

Maheen xx

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-salma-

@-salma-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#398

awesomeeeeeee ff 👏 👏 ..... i really liked it

continu soon and plz add me to ur pm list

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: anuu2010
awesome update
thanks for pm
waiting for next part

hey annu m glad u liked thnks sweety i l try upd sunn

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya
awsum yar...luved it aishu...dear...!!! bechara prem kitna struggle kar raha tha ek dress ke liye...!! aaww prem n heer lost in each othr eyes...!!
bechara prem koi usko bacho...!!lol....
thx for da pm...n yep dnt forget to update FC...!!!

thns diva m glad u liked hehehee prem is girlyy types naa tking time to b dressed heheheee nd dont worry i wont let anythng happen to my premm i hv updted fc do look nd tell me hoz tht

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