My first FF: we are one happy family[Part14=Pg 24] - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Okay guys! Um updating my FF within 15 minutsssss!!!! plssssss ur comments is the only thing which will encourage me to countinue:D 😊 hope u will love it:XD
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[SIZE=8]Hey guys! This is my first FF. I am starting the FF where the drama ended. This means I am continuing my FF from the point it ended. And guys! I will try to update the FF as soon as possible. So hope you guys will like this.

Everyone was having the dinner. Ramu kaka was serving the food, and all the members of the family was sitting in the chairs and eating and enjoying the food. Suddenly Heer felt vomiting so she rushed to room. Everybody stared at her with a worried look, and then kuldi spoke out. "It's okay! That happens during pregnancy". But Prem insisted, "but didi, Meher don't…" and he looked up and said others to continue, he will go and check her.

When Prem entered the room he heard Heer's voice form the washroom. He headed there and saw a much tiered Heer. Prem felt very weird seeing Heer at that condition. He hurried to help her to wash and after that he took her in his arms and walked towards the bed.

There they saw an upset Chahath, standing in the door with a milk glass. Prem and Heer looked at each other. Then Chahath came closer to them. Prem made Heer to lay the bed and before he could sit next to Heer Chahath came and sat there. She handed the milk to Heer. Giving a cute smile to Chahath, Heer drank it. And then Chahath took heer's hand to her little hand and started saying, "why u were vomiting… Chahath can't see mummy sick..." Heer smiled and placed her hand on Chahath head and said lovingly, "beta! This happens when we are pregnant. And by the way, you must be happy to have a sibling... Don't you?" when Heer said that Prem came and took Chahath to his lap and sat close to heer's head. Chahath replied with a big smile "yep, I am" and again her smiled changed and said "but I don't want a baby brother or sister when you get sick". Hearing that Prem and Heer steal a glance to each other and Prem said, "Your mother must have suffered so badly when she was pregnant to you". Chahath cute eyes wide opened hearing that and said, "Wow mummy! You're so great!" Prem's jaw opened a bit and Heer looked confused and asked "why?" Chahath replied saying, this time whole family and even I am there to help you and feed you and also care you. But when you were pregnant to me, neither dad nor none of the family was with you…" That made Prem feels sad. He kept on playing Chahath hairs and Heer noticed prem. "But don't worry mom, this time everyone is with you, we all are really looking forward to the baby... And dad! Sneha and I will find a cute name to the baby!" saying this she leaned to heer's cheeks and gave a kissy and ran out.

As soon as Chahath went out, Heer made Prem to face her and said, "Prem! Don't think about the
past! To tell you the truth, those 6 years, every hour, every minute and every second you were
with me. Helping me to bring Chahath to this world and raise her." Heer hugged Prem's hand as tight
as she could and continued, "Geet and her mother really took care of us. Please Prem, don't think about past and ruin your mood. Prem smiled and looked at Heer and said teasingly, "do you know to make my mood good?" Heer smiled shyly and said, "Yes!" And then Prem hugged Heer and Heer hugged him back.

"Still Heer, I want to say something!" hearing this Heer broke the hug and wanted to know what was disturbing her prem. "say it, Prem" and Prem took heer's hand and said " I don't know how it feels to see your kid when he/she just comes to the world.. Heer, I want to know how it feels to keep my kid on my arms. And Heer, I want to get back the days I have missed in the past. I want to live Chahath childhood with this baby" Prem said it placing his hand on a teary heer's womb. "But I think it will be more happy to have Chahath and the new baby… this is still a time for me to live with Chahath's' childhood" Heer nodded and they both hugged.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
Hey...
Wonderful update !
Loved it !
How i wish it had happened really !
But anyways great one !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome..chahat's dialogues were really good..tat kid is so intelligent...and caring..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks to pm nice update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wonderful start👏👏👏👏👏
lovedd it
awesome updateee
premeer chahat scene was awesomeeee
kash kis desh end nahi hota:(:(:
AWESOMEEEE UPDATEEEE👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesuuuuuuuuum at last som1 made it after it ended thanx alot!!!!
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Thats a great update...
Chahat is a smartypants... very intelligent...
Great description and scene was really cute..
Thnks... please continue...
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its really good. do continue soon.

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