My first FF: we are one happy family[Part14=Pg 24] - Page 14

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
prem and chahat scene was very cute
where is chahat?
who is this new entry?
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part.....
prem-chahat scenes were cute....update whenver you can!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely update........premeer scenes wer 😳.....loved the dad-daughter scenes as well........glad that heer nd the baby r fine.......wonder who is the person prem saw........a cliff hanger .........pls do cont asap.......thanx 4 the pm......
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Posted: 15 years ago
HEY NICE ONE..UPDATE SOON CANT WAIT...
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update love premeer and chahat parts and who is the person? u are bringing rishab back or some other person... why u stopped at this place egarely waiting for the next...
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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When Prem looked back, he saw Raj veer standing right in front of him with a big smile on his face. Prem in shock said, "you here…" and Raj veer extended his hand to shake hand with Prem. Prem still in shock extended his hand to shake hand with him. At the same time he started asking Prem about Heer and Chahath. And that increased Prem's shock and then he asked Raj veer how he knows about all this.

Raj veer decided to tell Prem about it. "Prem, when I came to know about Heer leaving you from Meher, I decided to go and check how she is living her life without you in Ambala. That was the day that you all were changing you lives to here. When I went to Heer… I guess you know how she will be. I tried to convince her. But she was thinking that it was you who betrayed her. I wanted to help her so I offered help to her as a friend of you and her. But she didn't allow me to. So I decided to leave the place as she wanted. But fortunately at the very movement she started vomiting and fainted. That's when we came to know that she is pregnant. Again I tried to convince her once more to return to you. But she doesn't want. She was sick for like a month so I waited with her and when she was fine, she wanted to earn money for her kid. Prem, I could not stop her. Every time I have to give up in front of her. But she did not say anything when I joined Ambala police as I felt like I should be with her. From the marriage bureau she met Geet and her mom. They were very nice people. And we became good friends. And when Chahath was four, I had to go London for training and I lived there for a year and now I am living here with my small family. I came to know about you re-union from Geet and I am glad for you. We are changing to India very soon."

Prem thanked him for being with Heer during her down days. He gave a brotherly hug to Raj veer. "And Prem I have got married to …." Raj veer cut in as he got a cal, so he excused and attended the call. "Yes Honey" said Raj veer and was shocked when he heard the replied from the other end. So he quickly said, "Yes, I am coming!" and turned to Prem and gave his card and went off.

Prem quickly turned back when he heard Chahath's voice. She was coming to him with some books. Prem started walking to her and took the books from her. "Where were you? And what are all these books for?" "This is a series of books. I want to read all these books Dad, Please." Prem couldn't say no to his little angel so he went to the counter with all those items.

After paying to all those stuffs, Prem and Chahath made their way back to home. On the way home, Prem bought Pizzas for lunch knowing that Heer won't take her lunch without them.

Heer was sitting in the hall alone on the phone with Geet and asking her to come and take her with her home. But Geet was not in a mood to take Heer over her place the same day. "Heer, I know how badly you want to meet us! But today I can't come there. As well as you know he can't go to your place as Prem is with you. Tell me when Prem is going to meet his clients? Then I will come to take you both with mw to here. So Prem won't have any doubt on us." Heer smiled as she understood Geet's plane. Heer agreed to it and when she was cut she saw Prem with so many shopping bags and saw a very happy Chahath.

Heer smiled and helped Prem to get the shopping bags to their room. On the way Heer asked Chahath about the books and she was glad that Chahath is building reading habit. Heer checked all the books making sure all those books are at her age. And there were some Disney lands cartoon DVDs and when Heer found Naruto DVDs, she asked Chahath when does she start watching Naruto's, but it came out that it was Prem who bought those DVDs. Heer and Chahath laughed for it and to get out of the topic Prem took Pizzas and went out calling everyone to join him.

It was almost evening when they went their bedroom after having the lunch. So Chahath went to her room with all her books and after changing to a T-shirt and a short Prem too went to join Chahath in her room. So Heer got busy making Prem's office dresses ready for tomorrow. And after that Heer too joined them.

When Heer came to Chahath's room, Prem was lying on the bed with Chahath on his hand and he was helping Chahath in undemanding new words she comes across. Heer came sat next to Prem and started stroking his hairs. Then he held her hand and placed on his chest lovingly. So Heer lyed next to Prem placing her head on his and hugging him gently.

Prem suddenly remembered that Heer was on the phone when Prem came back. So he asked her expecting it was from India, but Heer replied politely that it was from Geet who has come back to Canada just today. And Heer told Prem about Geet coming to take them tomorrow when he is out meeting with clients. Prem agreed for it and said, "I will join you people. Tell me where she is taking you two." Heer panicked when hearing that and before she could answer Prem said, "hey, I met Raj veer here." Suddenly Chahath said, "Raj veer uncle here. Where you met him" Prem told all about it and Chahath shook his hand on her forehead, and said, "Oh, I miss him so much, we should meet him some time!" and went back to reading. Then Prem said to Heer "He is going to live India soon. Oh yeah, He said he is married. Is he married to Geet?"


Thanks guyssss!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by cutii - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update........glad that rajveer helped heer nd chahat wen they wer alone.........family scenes wer cute.......even i feel rajveer is married to geet........another cliff hanger ..........pls do cont asap........thanx 4 the pm........
Edited by anishajk99 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hhmmmm rajveer
is rajveer married to geet???
and is so why heer is hiding this???
thnx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Phir se cliff hanger!!! Grr... I m getting curious
hahaha... very nice narration from Rajveer's P.O.V
It was a surprise seeing Raj again but great...
Oooh is he married to Geet??
I like Naruto tooo!! heheh..
Thnks for the pm

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