~Sia's Creation Corner~ Premeer VM- Janiye (Pg-29) - Page 5

Originally posted by: monaghosh

Hi! WHEREVER U HAVE POSTED KURBAAN MEET(SONG),PLZ LET ME
KNOW THE PAGE NO.IF U HAVE WRITTEN SOME MEET FF,OS,SS THEN ALSO PLZ LET ME KNOW,THANKS.

i know u found it

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

hi niki😃 thanx i needed one for a long time i hv now, hope u like it😃 ahaan😆, sure sweetheart as u say😃

thnax for trusting me and liking my work so much😃

Ok guys another Premeer and Meet OS from me. Well I had this idea for another ff but I dint start it, don't know would even start it so I thought why not use it for an OS. So here it is, I hope you all like it:

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Warning: A very passionate OS, read at your own risk.

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Last night was double date for both premeer and meet. It all started with a fight between Meet and knowing that interfering won't be good, premeer kept themselves out of it. But unfortunately they still got entangled and end up going on a date with them but not with their actual partners. Preet, being heer's best friend Meher's fiancee and automatically Heer's jiju, flirted with Heer to anger Meher more. To lighten the mood Heer too responded back. This only enraged Meher more towards Preet and she too started flirting with Prem and in end came up with this idea that they go out on double date i.e. Meher with Prem and Heer with Preet. Premeer got totally shocked, but agreed reluctantly. But Heer kept a condition that they all will go to one place i.e. at Preet's farmhouse even if they will be in different rooms. Prem looked sadly at Heer, only two days were left when he was going back to India and he wanted to spend every moment of their remaining time with his Heer. They were having a long distance relationship as Prem had a business in India and Heer studied in Canada with Meher. Prem knew long distance relationship will not be easy but reality dawned on him only when he had to stay away from her. Now he had to come meet her for a week, after being away for months, he wanted to spend his ever moment with his girl friend. But now of this stupid fight he had to be with Meher than with his Heer. To Prem, Heer didn't look that she was any way affected by this idea infact to him it felt that she too wanted to spend time anywhere else but with him. Seeing her like this, Prem got determined to make this night special for Meher.

Well date didn't turned out to be the way guys planned it. It was the idea of gals. Preet had thought to watch a movie with Heer, and Prem thought to have romantic candle light dinner with Meher. But girls never wanted this; they wanted to be with their respective partners. So they made up a plan that they would dress up wearing same dresses and meet with their dates, spend around 15 minutes with them and then power would go off and then making use of it they would switch places and be with their respective spouses. Making use of the dark, they would pretend to be their dates but with this plan they would spend time with their spouses without letting them know. But their plan was flop as Preet went to check the wires and knew it was deliberately cut and guys got angry for them for cheating them.

Now next day in the morning, Heer was sitting on couch drinking coffee wearing a tank top with shorts. Prem was not angry on her, he told her he hoped that some how she would find a plan to be with him and realized that it was her and not Meher who was sitting with him in the dark when he held her hand, after power was cut. A smile passed her lips when she remembered how Prem took her hand in his and kissed it tenderly. Her thoughts were broken by loud bang on the door and she looked up to see Meher coming out of her room with a distressed look on her face.

"What happened Meher, why are so sad?", said Heer.

"Preet is still angry", said Meher sadly

"Well why wouldn't he be? Atlast he got a chance to be on a date with me and you ruined it", said Heer grinning to lighten Meher's mood. Meher just glared back in reply. "Ok don't give me these looks. You know I am kidding right? He is my jijs yaar, itna mazak toh kar hi sakti hoon unke liye. Tell me why is he still angry? As far I remembered he was feeling quite bore while watching the movie for the 10 minutes when I was with him. I guess he wasn't enjoying it with me, I mean he was feeling awkward", said Heer taking another sip from her coffee mug.

"Come on he does like to be with you. But yesterday it was different. He said that he wanted to spend time with me, but this is no way to do it bcos we fought. Then he thought it was you with him but no it was actually me", said Meher reasoning.

"Well what u trying to say?", said confused Heer.

"I am just saying that he didn't like me lying to him. He wanted to make you feel good as it was bcos of us that you didn't spend time with Prem. But he couldn't mend it as we fought and involved you two in it. He was saying that I made him feel guilty", explained Meher

"Ya it didn't turn out to be the way we wanted it. If only they knew that we would switch places after being with them for like 10 minutes and then power would be cut automatically and then we would be with our respective partners", said Heer lowering her head.

"It was your flop idea, why didn't you think that ultimately our mates would know us. For how long we could have fooled them", said Meher angrily

"Excuse me whose idea it was actually to be on such a stupid date. You fought with him and also agree with me when I gave this idea. And ultimately the grand one it was you who could not hold Preet back when he went to check that why power was cut", said Heer

"And for how long you think he would have stayed back? I couldn't hold him back the way I usually do otherwise he would have come to know that he is not with Heer but with his fiance", said Meher

"If it was not for your stupid ego in between I wouldn't have come with this stupid plan", said Heer

"Enough Heer forget this, Prem isn't angry on you but Preet is from me. And he is not at all talking to me. Now find a solution for this. Tell me what to do?", asked Meher

"Ab yeh bhi main hi batao. Ok fine hmmm take him out somewhere, spend time with him or something", suggested Heer after seeing Meher sad face.

"He is not ready to go anywhere with me. He said he will stay here whole day", said Meher pouring herself a glass of water in the kitchen

"What! There is no way he is doing this, I want to be with Prem here today, I have already made the plan for it. Kya Preet ko yaad nahi ki usne humein yeh farmhouse diya hai do dino ke liye. He wanted nobody to disturb us and now he himself is doing that", said Heer getting very hyper and moving towards the kitchen.

"Calm down Heer. Ok nobody would disturb you and Prem. But if you want your plan to work, you better come up with something to make Preet forgive me and go with me. And Fast!", said Meher

Suddenly their conversation was stop in middle by the site in front of them. Prem and Preet had come out from their room without any shirts on, oblivious to the fact that Heer and Meher were standing across them in the kitchen. Heer and Meher completely forgot what they were discussing and their eyes widened from what they were looking at. Both men didnt know what effect their shirtless bodies were doing to their better halves---they were blushing while seeing their six pack toned bodies. Though both the girls were in complete awe but none of them were taking their eyes away from them. Both the guys were quite muscular and were ripped to perfection. Their bare chest, chiseled body, strong arms, their body warmth were calling out to them. Both the girls were thinking only one thing now, what it would be like to be in the arms of the man of their life now. Though both Preet and Prem just have woken up but still they were looking utterly sexy in this way or without a shirt and just with their shorts on. With their hair ruffled due to sleep girls wanted to straighten them. both the girls looked at each other and nodded while agreeing silently that they like this view better than it been covered by their shirts. Both started imagining what he would be like to have their hands run on it, what their spouse reaction would be when they ''(let me clarify here Meher is imagining about Preet and Heer about Prem)

When this thought came in the mind of Meher, she let out a huge cry and before she could stop it, it grabbed both super sexy men's attention. They looked up to see first Meher who had a hand on her mouth to muffle her voice and then at Heer, who was hitting the former's shoulder.

"Thodi der baad nahi chila sakti thi tum. I was just getting to enjoy it", said Heer giggling.

"Tum dono yahan. itni subah kaise uth gaye?", said Preet with confused look on his face.

"Agar subah- subah yeh nazara dekhne ko milta hai toh hum roz zaldi uthne ko tayaar hai jaanu", said Meher gawking at Preet's chest. She was looking at him from up to down, making Preet feel awkward.

Heer muffled her laughed and said "my, my Prem I didn't know you have such a great body, why do you always hide it under a shirt. Even jiju you too aren't behind. We loved the view, right Meher", said Heer winking at both the men.

"Of course sweetheart. I must say you too really work hard a lot for such a body and we did like the result. And you too aren't behind Prem, I must say Heer is very lucky", said Meher laughing.

"So are you Meher. Really guys this isn't something to hide, not fair that we are seeing it for the first time", said Heer who too couldn't hold her laugh any more, and started laughing holding her stomach.

Both the guys cheeks reddened to ten shades of red "I think I forgot something", said Preet.

"So did I" said Prem covering himself with his arms. The time guys were blushing more and were feeling more shy than any girl would feel. They rushed to their rooms to get their shirts. "Come on guys we won't mind if you remain like this. Please stay", said Heer still looking at them still laughing.

"Infact forget your shirt more often like this. We aren't complaining at all. Are we Heer?", said Meher winking at Heer and laughing. In reply Heer shook her head in negative. "I loved Preet more like this", said Meher sighing pleasantly.

"Even Prem looked his best now. And now I will insist him to stay more like this. Heyy I got an idea. Dance on a sexy number in front of Preet, he will feel very awkward and will surely forgive you then take him out of here and the leave the house for me and Prem. Now I know how to add more spice in my plan", said Heer chuckling.

"What! Are you crazy? I can't do that, what will Prem think and Preet will be angrier. I can't do that", said Meher skeptically.

Before Heer could reply both Greek Gods came into the room, this time fully dressed, and the redness on their cheeks still not leaving them. Inwardly both girls wished they could still see their spouses without it. Heer looked at Prem from up to down, she felt like kissing Prem senseless at that moment and without thinking twice she said to Meher while still looking at Prem "Fine I will do it. Start the song, and then you follow me."

Without wasting a second, Meher went towards the stereo system and inserted a CD in it. Guys were still confused and too shocked to say anything.

Heer got up and started walking towards Prem. "what are you talking about? What are you doing and what song?", said confused Prem. He could see her eyes shining with mischief and he really wanted to know what was going on her mind. Heer didn't answer him rather a song started playing. Preet was all amused by the looks Heer was giving Prem and he thought that these gals had planned something to embrass Prem more. He didn't know that soon he will be the scrape goat and the plan was related to him.

Bounce..bounce

Just keep on bouncing baby

Heer moved seductively towards Prem with passionate look in her eyes. She looked she was reading to eat him. She enacted the movement of waves through her hips and legs.

Bounce..bounce

Just keep on bouncingggg

She looked at Prem from head to toe and deliberately stayed her eyes at his chest for more seconds then required, knowing fully well that he was watching all his movements. She looked up straight in his eyes and winked at him.

Mal mal ki raaton mein aa

Khwabon ki baton mein aa

bahon mein aaja zara janiya

She trailed her fingers from his hand to his shoulders, grabbed his collar and pulled him towards her leaving very little space between them. And then opened her arms and pulled him into a tight hug. Prem still dint know what was happening to him, he was so shocked from her movements to react.

Chup-2 dhadkon ki sun le shadyein aaja

Bahon mein rehle aaja janiya

She brushed her lips with his lips and kissed very lightly the corner of his mouth. She knew this would shake him up but not fully satisfy him. She put her head on his chest and ruffled his silky hair. She closed her eyes, like always she felt complete in being his arms, being so close to him. Heer didn't wanted to be but here, in the arms of the man she loved most in the world. She could feel his heart beating very fast.

Ab toh bathon mein rakha kya hia

Jab har pal teri aakhein kehti hai sau kahaniyan

Prem pulled himself out of her arms, his eyes widening from shock. He couldn't believe she was doing this and that too in front of their friends. But for Heer it was just Prem right now and nobody else. It was as though she could only see him and her feelings for him were directing her actions. She wanted him right now and he was there. She didn't care if anyone else was watching them or not. Prem opened his lips to say something but before he could, Heer kept her fingers on his mouth to stop any words to come out. She held Prem's eyes by the look in her eyes'look of love combined with passion. This completely amazed Prem and shiver ran down his spine.

Shut up and bounce baby bounce

Behki-behki hawayein

Behki- behki jaye yeh jawaniyan

She knew Prem was lost completely by the look in her eyes and she knew what to do now. She pushed him back and then did a step of this song, and later swinging her hips seductively. This was not what Prem expected after being so close to her; it was torture for him to be away from her. She too immediately missed his warmth and scent. She had felt so good by being so close to him. But she was in a full mood to tease Prem, no way she would let this opportunity go.

Shamein rangeen kar do main

Bahein teri bar do main

By seeing in Prem's eyes, she knew like her, he too wanted to be close to her. She took a step towards him but still maintain some distance between them. She touched his chest over his shirt, knowing fully well that his shirt won't stop him from feeling the heat or sensation provided by her hand. Not once she looked anywhere else but his eyes. Then she unbuttoned his top button and he flinched from her touch. Her fingers were warm against his skin. She bent her head down to his chest to make him feel that she will kiss him but instead she slid her arms around him to his back. While doing so, she nuzzled his cheek with her nose showing she did it unconsciously but she did on intention. She felt him taking a deep breadth to calm his nerves and she giggled thinking what effect she was having on him. She knew he was having a hard time controlling himself.

Yeh ishare rehne do Na mujhko kehne do

Kahin baton mein beete na jawaniyan

Prem had recovered by now and looked around and found Preet looking at them, grinning, and Meher too watching very intently. Prem looked back at Heer, and she was moving her hands around his body, unaware what effect this was having not only at him but everyone else too. He tried to warn her by raising her eyebrows and staring at her and motioning at others. Heer knew what he was trying to convey but didn't pay any attention rather came more close to him. She started brushing lips at this neck, not completely touching the skin underneath her lips. When she felt he was about to speak, she silenced him by keep her lips on his. This took Prem completely by surprise but after 2 seconds he responded back with more passion. This pulled the trigger, and he could no longer keep his action in check. He pulled her more close if that was possible. He kept one hand at back of her head and another at her waist, so that she doesn't leave him now. Heer smiled first, this was the reaction she wanted from him from start. He was kissing her as there was no tomorrow and as though he hasn't kissed her for a long time but in reality it was only few hours. She just had made him yearn for it and that too in the worst way possible.

I feel it, do it all night, I need it, do it all night

I feel it, tonight, I could do it all night tonight

Now seeing Premeer kissing like this, as they have no care in the world, even Meher got motivated too and she knew what she had to do next. If seeing Premeer so close to each other didn't shock Preet and he found this all funny then seeing Meher walking towards him with a sexy look on her face, definitely was. Preet knew that now it was his turn and there is no way he could escape it. He knew he was gone. He was completely bewildered by determined look on Meher's face.

Aankhein zalim yeh teri

Rahe ruke hai meri

Keeping some distance between them, Meher first touched Preet face and then massaged his shoulders to make him relax a bit. She smoothed out the furrow in his brow with her fingers. Then she took his hands and kept them on her waist and she kept her hands at the back of his neck. She started swinging and leaning her body in his arms, making him tighten them around her more. Meher wanted to tempt Preet to a level that he would himself kiss her. And she knew how exactly to do that. She looked at his chest then immediately, but slowly, she looked at his face, then lowered her eyes suggestively at his lips. Then immediately looked up in his eyes as though her eyes just slipped to his lips. But she knew Preet wouldn't be fooled by this rather this move would tell him exactly what she intended him to know. She looked in his eyes with all the love she felt for him and found him taking a deep breadth. Then she moved closer to him and brushed her lips to his left ear. Then she faced him, their lips were close to each other. She leaned more forward, making him stop breathing but then she gave a peck on his cheek and then moved towards his eyes and kissed them one by one.

Ish tarah se dekho na Na mujhko dekho naa

Ki teri aankhein kehti hai sau kahaniyan

Preet didn't expect this at all, infact this was least in his mind; she was driving him crazy by being so close and not doing anything about it. He was dieing to kiss her, and he knew she too wanted to kiss him but then why the hell she was torturing him like this. forgetting what they were doing, he tightened his grip more on her, and glared at her, wanting her to stop going around the brush and do what they both wanted. Meher smiled inwardly, she knew what he meant. But she acted all innocent and trailed her lips against his jaw and neck. Premeer now have stopped kissing and Heer made him look towards Meet. It was now his turned to be amused to see the scene in front of him. Preet looked liked a child whose candy is snatched from him. Prem knew now Preet was in complete turmoil, the situation he was in few minutes before. God knows these two girls love to tease and torture them.

Shut up and bounce baby bounce

Mehki-mehki hawayein

Behki- behki jaye yeh jawaniyan

Preet could not take any more, he just want to kiss Meher until she became senseless. But Meher knew by the look in his eyes what was going on his mind, and she was in no mood to comply with him just yet. He leaned his head forward and the moment he was about to make his lips touch his, she pushed him, just the way Heer had pushed Prem. She smiled and winked at Preet and did the step of the song. She rotated her body along with her hands from down to the top of her head. Meher gestured Preet to come towards her with her fingers. Preet held her hand and spun her around before dipping Meher down in his arms and touching his lips with hers. Meher first smiled, this is what she wanted. This meant he had forgiven her. She kissed him back with same vigor. Seeing this Heer too smiled knowing now everything is back to normal between Meet. She looked back at her love who was looking at her with raised eyebrows and amused smile. Heer leaned in and touched her forward with his.

Mal mal ki raaton mein aa

Khwabon ki baton mein aa

bahon mein aaja zara janiya

Meet had stopped kissing now and Preet smiled at her while he pulled her up and closer to him. He held her by both his hands at her waist while she kept her hands at bock of his neck. They moved their bodies in tone to the music and smiled.

Chup-2 dhadkon ki sun le shadyein aaja

Bahon mein rehle aaja janiya

While moving her body to the music, Heer first kept a finger at Prem lips than at hers. Prem nuzzled her cheek with his nose and then kiss her cheek.

Ab toh bathon mein rakha kya hia

Jab har pal teri aakhein kehti hai sau kahaniyan

"So what was that", asked Prem. "You tell me jaan", said Heer. "So I guess you aren't angry anymore, are you?", asked Meher. "What you think sweetheart", said Preet and kissed her on the cheek. Preet and Prem exchanged a look and nodded.

Preet said "I think I forgot something", and picked Meher in his arms. Meher squealed and Prem looked at Heer and said "So did I". When Heer saw Preet moving towards their room, Heer said "Don't forget Meher, you have to leave this house for ...". Prem didn't give her the chance to finish the sentence, as he crushed his lips to hers and took her in his arms. "Don't worry, I ...", even Meher couldn't complete her sentence and well everyone knows why.

Shut up and bounce baby bounce

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The End

So how was it? i know its quite long for an OS but then by posting it in 2 parts I really didnt want anyone to wait so I posted it in one go. Waiting eagerly for your comments. One more thing do tell me if you want me to sent you a pm every time I write an OS.

A.N. this is for the readers of OA and SL. I know I promised to update these two too today but yesterday I had a terrible headache and no matter how much I tried I could not get rid of it and I could only end up finishing this OS. I could not even edit it. I am really sorry but in 2 days I would update them too. I hope you understand.

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey
that was very nice

thanx a lot

-Resvered-

It's very nice
😳awesome

Originally posted by: xoHarshaxo

-Resvered-

Will be back with a LONG coment.

for that i hv to wait for how long??????😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Heerbeauty

It's very nice
😳awesome

thanx paddo

Haila! Sia!

Originally posted by: amu142

Haila! Sia!

whats this FF all abt !! OMG! Heer has never been this bold...nor Meher in any FF till date!

and Prem n Preet must hv gone crazy watching their gals go absolutely mad!!!

yeh idea tujhe mila kahan se!

dimaag se😆😆😆