FF: Saathiya (ch19-pg 111) 29 jul - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Prem4everRamsha

lovee itt....

just make sure premeer romance comes in early.......
i love your idea.... most people tend to write the opposite usually =P
add me to the pm list for sure sureeee
and do update soon pleaseeeeee
Love,
Ramsha



Thank you...😊 will try to...
yeah i know but jus wait n watch..
Yeah definetly..



Originally posted by: newt2007

waiting to know how prem is going to change Heer.



I'll be updating soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
Hello everyone
Here's chapter one

Chapter-1

GEETS' POV

"I never thought I'd be able to live this moment. Finally I'm getting engaged to my love and life. I couldn't ask for anything more than this. Thank you God."

HEER'S POV

"Today is my engagement and I hate him from the core of my heart... I truly hate him… How dare he blackmail me to fulfil his wish of making me his wife? How can I even survive with him under the same roof?"

He has shown his control over life even before getting engaged. Now she'll be officially engaged to him, what will he do?

All these questions are popping up in her mind.

RAJVEER'S POV

"This is just amazing. She's finally becoming mine today. I'm finally getting what I wanted to from long time."

PREM'S POV

"Today is my engagement and I'm the luckiest person in the world. I'm finally going to witness my dream becoming reality. I'm getting engaged to my love!!!!!!!!! I just couldn't believe it"

The day he saw her he felt she's the one for him. From that day it's only she who ruled in his heart, his dreams, and his thoughts and everywhere….He loves her a lot. He can't even imagine his existence without her.

His thoughts drifted to the time when she entered his life. It was just three weeks before when he went on a business trip to Paris.

3 WEEKS BEFORE

Prem had successful put forward his plan and now it's the delegates turn to decide. They had a small talk and instantly nodded their heads to the proposal. Balraj was already in shock having seen Prems' presentation and now he was completely dumbstruck when he saw the delegates agree instantly. Everything seemed quite bizarre to him. He knew the delegates since years. They never took instant decisions nor do they get impressed so easily.

He heard of Prem's competence from many of his friends and colleagues but it was the first time he actually witnessed himself. This made even the slightest line of doubt arising in his mind to wipe off. He was now pretty much sure that only Prem would be the right groom for Heer.

Hearing about Prem and his success deep inside his heart he felt like he'll be the right one for Heer but still he had a few doubts in his mind but today all his doubts seemed worthless. He knew that Lalit would be ecstatic to get their children married to each other and Prem being the ideal son would never go beyond Lalit's words. He didn't want to put Prem under pressure. So, he decided to ask Prem first and then Lalit. He was actually waiting for an opportunity to talk to Prem.

Now that God had given him the opportunity by sending Prem to Paris, he wanted to talk to him. The delegates and all other members left while Balraj was in his thoughts and now it's only Prem and Balraj in the room. Prem walked over to Balraj and took his blessings.

Prem: Hi uncle, how are you doing?

Balraj: I'm good Prem and how are you beta??? How is Lalit?

Prem: He is doing fine uncle and on hearing that he got the deal he'll be jumping around I guess.

Balraj: Yeah I know. Prem I want to talk to u personally.

Prem: Sure uncle

Balraj: I think you know that I have a daughter.

Prem: Yes uncle I do know

Balraj: I want you to get married to my daughter

Prem was stunned to hear that he wasn't able to comprehend what he heard a minute ago. Before he could even react Balraj continued.

Balraj: Before you answer my question I want you to tell about my heer… As she is my only child me I pampered her a lot. She doesn't believe in our traditions and culture. I can't say she is sweet but that doesn't mean she's bad either. Its' sad but it's true. I don't want you to keep in dark and there's also one more thing I want you to know. She's very loving and caring if she wants to be and I completely believe that if you marry her I'm sure you'll change her to be the best wife, best daughter in-law and best bhabhi

Each and every line of what Balraj said got registered in his mind but still he stood stunned by the happening then he realizes that he should answer him. Before Balraj could say anything further Prem answered.

Prem: I'm sorry uncle I can't accept your daughter's hand. I love my parents and my siblings. I want a girl who loves my parents and takes good care of them. I want someone who would treat Preet and Veera like her kids and mostly she should be liked by my family. I'm sorry uncle.

Balraj felt as if the world was spinning. He somehow controlled himself.

Balraj: Is that the only reason for not accepting my daughter?

Prem: No uncle, I am in love.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
I just forgot to mention

pm list added in pg1
incase i forgot to add any1 i'm sorry..plzz let me know..and also if any1 wants to get added now pm me..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
i'm the first one
hai its simply superb
prem is in love with heer nah?
he is getting engaged to her nah?
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz tell me my head is spinning with confusion
i cant wait to read more
plz update asap
Edited by shirlys - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
Very nice update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
kavya looking forward to this one
ewwwww dont tell me prem loves geet and rajveer has blackmailed heer to marry him
please get premeer together and rajveer geet together
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
great




thanx 4 the pm


update soon



Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
awsome.
Update soon..
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Hey Kavs....
fantabulicious update hun...⭐️
loved it....👏
so Prem is in love with Geet???
Geet loves Prem???
And Rajveer is blackmailing Heer???
Haio Rabba....
plz update soon......

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