FF - KISMAT I ~ Part 1 - 33 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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interestingg...premeer born on same date...thats sweet...continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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m already liking it
cant wait
update soon
and its brilliant idea
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HEY.....
I really like it....
it sounds really interesting.....
cn u pls update soon....
cnt wait 4 the update... :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Selvy,
very nice concept........
seems interesting.........
waitingggggggg for ur next update.........
thnx a lot 4 ur PM.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome sstart cant wait to read more!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
awesome
loved it
please continue asap
and add me to ur pm list!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part - 2

Prem is going to office to help Lalit and Balraj in their business. Prem shouted 'Heer, Heer.'

Lalit and Gaya3 laughed looking at his son's attitude. Heer came in and saw Lalit looking down with a disapproval face and Gaya3 covering her mouth and laughing. He threw the tie down on the floor with anger.

Heer 'Prem' she started laughing.

Prem got angry 'all are laughing but not saying anything.'

Heer opened his closet and picked up a shirt and a coat. 'Prem, Remove that and wear this.' He did as per her instruction. She tied his tie. 'Now look. How smart you are?'

Prem looked himself in the mirror and smiled. He hugged her and kissed her cheek 'that's why I called you. see they are laughing but not telling anything.'

Gaya3 'we know that you won't listen to us. Come down fast.' She moved out with Lalit.

Prem wrapped Heer shoulder with his hand 'why they laughed?' they started moving down in the stairs.

Heer 'Prem, the shirt and the coat didn't match. You need to change your style when you are going to office. you are not a college student.' She proudly 'now You are a business man.' He smiled at her proud face.

Prem with a puppy face 'you do one thing. Daily morning you keep my dress ready.' Heer agreed.

Prem pulled her closer by putting his hand around her neck and kissed her cheek 'thanks.' she kissed his cheek back.

Preet and Megher are already there in the table chatting. Preet is about to say something, Megher dumped a piece of paratha into his mouth and signed him to be quiet. 'its PH time. not yours.' Preet felt hard to eat that piece. Megher giggled looking at his struggle. Preet got angry and took big piece and dumped into her mouth. She struggled with tears in her eyes. He laughed. She choked her food. he quickly gave water to her.

Prem and Heer joined them. They didn't fight today. Others wondered. After breakfast. Heer kissed Prem cheek and wished him good luck. Prem took blessing from Gaya3 and Teji. Preet and Megher too wished him with a hug. Prem went to office with Lalit and Balraj.

In the evening, Heer is restlessly walking in the living room. Gaya3 and Teji exchanged smile looking at tensed Heer. Prem came with Lalit and Balraj. She ran to him. 'how was the day?' Prem wrapped his hand around her shoulder and both went to his room. 'not too bad.'

Heer sat on the bed. 'how many girls you saw today?'

Prem removing his tie in lower voice 'these two oldies has appointed young girls. Office full of sexy girls.' Heer opened her mouth and listened what Prem said. he closed her lips with his fingers 'you will catch flies.'

Heer 'so you had a romantic day today.'

Prem in a disappointed tone 'nope. These two didn't allow me to meet anyone.'

Heer got up and pat his cheek 'don't worry you may get chance t'row.'

Prem 'halo I'm not that kind of boy.'

Heer 'don't lie. You are.'

Prem 'no. don't irritate me.' he pointed his fingers on her nose and she did on him 'you are. Accept.' Both started argue. Others in the downstairs burst into laugh hearing their fight.

After dinner, Preet and Megher started playing chess. Elders went to their room to take rest. Heer is reading a magazine. Prem sat next to her in the couch. 'Heer, What are you doing?'

Heer with a teasing face 'sleeping. Don't you have eyes. I'm reading.'

Prem pulled the magazine out of her hand. he kept his head on her lap and laid down on the couch. Her fingers stroked his hair. He flipped through the pages 'are you going to do fashion designing?'

Heer 'no.' Prem questioning face 'then why are you reading this magazine.'

Heer 'to select a dress for my friend marriage.' She pulled the magazine from his hand.

Prem crossing his hand across his chest with a disappointed face 'you won't look nice in this dress.'

Heer with anger 'why?'

Prem turned her face in sidewise holding her chin and looked twice and with a sad face 'it will suit only to girls not to you.'

Heer got angry 'what you mean?' she pushed him down on to the floor. He fell flat on the floor. Prem stood up dragged her down 'how dare you push me down?' she got up and both started fighting pushing each other.

Prem ended the fight 'you will look like a princess in this dress. my princess.' He pulled her into his arms and kissed her cheek. She hugged him 'you are so sweet.'

When Prem said my princess Preet and Megher looked at them. But Prem and Heer didn't give any attention they went up holding their hands happily. Preet 'PB loves Heer di.'

Megher 'I think so. But they are always fighting like Tom & Jerry.'

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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Gr8 update. Liked what Meher said that Preen Heer fight like Tom n Jerry. Like their cute fight. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww... there fight was really sweet.
Loved it.
Update soon...
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
nice conecpt ..................
pls update soon 😆 ⭐️ 😛
are u update it daily like rishta
if yes
iam soooooooooooooooooooooooo happy for ur another beautiful ff

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