FF-Aa Bhi Jaa Ch:5, Pg-44, Dec-6 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Additi...

Awesome Start Sia and Kavya.....👏 .....😳thank you sweetu😃

Loved the Starting...........😛.....i am glad you liked that😉
The cute Relation that prem and that WOMAN shared i liked it.....😆.....😃



I felt bad When she died cause i thought it was Heer but thankfully
she wasnt Heer. 😆 .....well thats what impression we want to give to our readers and then surprise them in the end that it wasnt her, so liked the surprise?😆

I am supposed to be sad caused Shreya died but i am happy cause Heer will be there 😍.......ya she will be, jahan prem vahan heer toh hogi hi naa😉


Thank God shreya died her self warna mai zarror Mardalti ussi...😆 So thank You
for saving me doing this CRIME..😆......tum poori violent hoti jaa rahi ho😆, shreya toh bach gayi kind off, par sanajana ko kuan bachyega BS mein😆😆, i am sure not prem😉

I am 100% sure that you dont want to die naturally but from my HANDS ....😡.....i am sure yahan toh prem mujhe bachyega😆

Pehle prem ki shaadi us sanjana si karwaye BS......OA mai jagra kar wadiya aur yaha chahat premeer
ki bajaye shreya aur prem ki betee hai...😲 Yeh baat mujh se Hazam nahii horahi hai ..😲....dont worry sweetu trust me all these stories are of premeer...nobody can separate them😃


update soon..........will try to😆

With lots of love for my Nanad Kavya .....😡 vo meri nanad hai

and lots of Gussa for Sia....😡same from my side
(i know kavya yeh sare kharab Ideas Sia he ki hongi ) 😉...............u know me so well sweetu😆

NEHA

Originally posted by: kkmouli

kavya u dint even tel me dat u startd a new ff...
i hate u..
n wht was dat????????
is she heer???
plzz update soon..
n kavya i'm gonna kill u..

Originally posted by: yasu09

wowwwwwwwww.........another fabulous FF....
woh bhi from two fabulous writers....................
the intro was brilliant.....⭐️......
hmmmm i should feel sorry for Prem as his wife just died......
but oddly enough i don't...😆...because now that means Heer can come into his life......
anywayz eagerly waiting for the next part......

Yaz

Originally posted by: nspn.92

Hey that was awsome.😊 I just loved it.

Update soon....

Pls..do add me to ur PM list.

Originally posted by: sonia7

hey awesome prologue

please add me to your pm list

and update soon