Junior Prem........Phingoli......Last Part pg11... - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
oh great update dear
can u plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz PM when u update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i will be very thankful to u
eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
great part



thanx 4 the pm



update soon



Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
tooooo gudd
waittinngg for the next part
do pm me wen yu update
THANK YU
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
wow !!! this is the best
huh i can imagine prem's expressions whn everyone was disturbing him ...poor prem
plzz update the next part soon
and take care swty
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
hiiiiii sheeba dii!
lovely update!!!!!!!!
hope prem overheard shrimalini and came to know who she is......
loved the premeer scene specially the one with chaahat where she wants a younger bro!
prem is so hilarious!
anyways....continue soon! and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Hello everyone...........Thanx a tonnnnnnnnnnnnnn to all of u for all those lovely comments...........and best wishes I am much better already...........actuaaly this changing weather troubles me always............anyways..............Here's the next LAST PART TO THIS ONE SHOT..............Hope u all enjoy it............and haan Hope I didn't let u guys be bored without Prem there in the show...........😊

Gurinder was elated………Rannvijay says to Sm---WAH BHABHI………..Aap toh ek dum kamaal ho!.......... 😔

There Prem who was watching all this says angrily---Kamaal toh tum sab ho!...........

Gurinder and the rest of them were shell shocked to find Prem there………glaring at them………….

Prem walks upto them and begins---Kyun mainney kuch galat kahaa……….TUM LOGG TOH SACH MEIN KAMAAL HO!...........

Gurinder tightens his grip over the papers as Prem says---Uss din tu mere hii ghar mein ghuskar mere baujii ko chor keh rahaa tha naa Gurinder?...........Lekin sabsey badaa chor toh tu niklaa………..apney faaydey ke liye apni biwi kaa IS TARAH ISTEMAAL KIYA?!

Prem glares at Sm who stood silent………….

Prem says poiting at Gurinder and Rannvijay----Aaj um donon ek baat dhyaan se sunnlo…………..Main apney parivaar ke liye………..KISI BHI HADD TAK JAA SAKTAA HOON!............JAB SAWAAL MERE APNON KAA HO TOH SAHII KYA HAI….GALAT KYA HAI MAIN NAHIIN DEKHTAA…….BAS KAR DETAA HOON………..Isliye abb isskey baad tooney koi bhi aisi giri hui harkat karney kii koshish kii(Prem points to Sm.........)...........Toh mujhse buraa koi nahiin hogaa............Tum logon ne Heer ke bholeypan kaa faydaa uthaaya.............abb iskey baad mere parivaar ke kisi bhi sadasyaa kii taraf aankh uthaakar bhi dekha toh main bhool jaaongaa kii tum humaarey rishtedaar ho!.............👏

Prem controls himself from getting into a fight with them and says brfore leaving----waisey bhi yeh kaagaz tere kisi kaam ke nahiin hai ..........main jaantaa tha tu kuch aisaa zaoor karegaa isliye mainney pehley hii kagaz apney paas rakhey the baujii ke kamrey mein nahiin..............

Prem turns around to leave when he sees a stunned heer standing in the doorway staring at SM............

Gurinder steps forward to catch hold of Prem when rannvijay and their father stop him.............

There Prem puts his arms around heer's shoulders and takes her away from them saying---Chalo heer...........

Its a scene in the Juneja house in Prem Heers room............Heer was still dressed in the green salwaar kameez she had worn for the function..........standing by the window she stared into the moonlit sky........... 😊

Prem comes out of the washroom dressed in a white Kurta pyjaama...........he notices Heer sobbing...........

Prem walks upto her and puts his hand on her shoulder saying---Heer..........Bhool jaao jo hua............Ussmein..........ussmein tumhaari koi galtii nahiin thi.........

Heer turns to hug Prem tight and sobs---Prem main kitni bevakoof thi!.........aggar tum nahiin hotey toh pataa nahiin aaj kya ho jaata...........

Prem makes heer move away from the window as the wind outside was cold and she was shivering a little.........embracing Heer's face wioth his warm hands Prem says wiping away her tears----MAIN THAA NAA?!.............AUR KUCH HUA BHI NAHIIN...........phir jo nahiin hua uss baarey mein soch kar pareshaan kyun honaa?.............Waisey bhi Meri heer galat nahiin hai isliye ussey lagtaa hai KII SAB SAHII HAIN...........WOH KHUD KABHI KISI KAA BURAA NAHIIN SOCHTII..................ISLIYE USSEY LATAA HAI SAB ACHCHEY HAIN..............Aur sach poocho naa toh mujhey AISI BEVAKOOF HEER BAHOT ACHCHI LAGTII HAI............. 😳

Heer smiles and she hugs Prem gratefully...........who wraps his strong arms around heer............glad he could make Heer feel happy............

Heer looks at Prem who had his arms still wrapped around her.............she moves up a little and could feels her lips touch prem's she closes her eyes..................and kisses him............

The two kiss each other and as they liplock they move towrads the wall............Heer moves away from Prem when she feels herself bump into the wall........... 😳

Prem gazes at heer's beautiful face as she looks down..........Prem removes her dupaata which slowly falls to the ground............everything happens in flashes............Prem holds heer's arms tight to the wall and kisses her from her waist and coming upto her neck...........while heer draws the curtains of the window which was right next to the wall............

Heer feels Prem moving his hands acroos her hips and coming upto her back as he goes on kissing her on her lips...........The next instant Heer feels the Kameez kii zip open..........and Prem looking at her lovingly..........Heer smiles and Prem turns her around pinning her against the wall............Heer closes her eyes as she fels Prem's warm hands move across her cold bare back.............Heer was loving every move Prem made...........

She then turns around and holding Prem's face in her hands she kisses him with full paasion on his lips as leaving him off guard and the two fall on the nearby couch...............Heer found herself on top of Prem who was gazing at her face...........

Heer smiles and she unbuttons Prem's kurta and lay her cold lips on Prem's warm bare chest............kissing him passionately..........The screen blacks out...........Aur pardey se jhaanktaa woh chaand jo Prem Heer ke Prem kaa prateek tha..........aaj unkey milan kaa sakshi banaa........... 😳

Kaisa laga?😊

Jaldii bataao............😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#67

heh heh dii.....i read this before you pmed me!

loved it......as usual fantastic......
the dialogues you write for prem are too good........you really should have been the creative on the show....
toh aaj uski yeh haalat nahi hoti!
thanks for the late pm you must have sent....😆
keep writing!
Edited by v_nikhita18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
Very nyc dear
u ended really well
luvd ur last part nt bcoz of theor consummation but bcoz the way prem consoled her and their love went onto another ride
Ashlesha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
hey.........
awesome..............
i really wish this happens in the show........... :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
lovely man
it was amazing !!!!
thanx for this beautiful post

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