FF: PremHeer&Chahat (17/1) PART 19 pg.29 updtd !! - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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oh so sanjana is evil.plzzzzzzz dont let her harm heer or her child and update soon
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oh so sanjana is evil.plzzzzzzz dont let her harm heer or her child
waitinggggggg for next asap.
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awesoem chapter, do continue soon
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hey great ff very nicely written plz update soon plz add me to ur pm list
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EPISODE # 10 :
NEW ENTRY :
KARAN SHARMA
(It was 7:00 am ,prem woke up early as heer was sleeping ,prem was staring her sleeping beauty😆
Suddenly the phone rings, prem answered :" Hello ??"
Mr.kapoor: " Mr. Juneja aj app ki flight hai mumbai ki,ajj bht important meeting hai ,"
Prem:" oh im sorry mai to bhool hi gya ,mai bas ata hun ,app mera airport per wait kero "
(prem quickly took a bath , and was getting ready to for his flight ,he did not wanna disturb heer, as she was sleeping ,he is staring at her ,and a smiles appear on his face, He kissed her cheeks and left a letter ,beside her pillow, he quitely walk out of the room, everyone in the house was sleeping ,prem quickly ate the breakfast and went to the airport )
it was 8:00 am ,Gayatri meher, and kuldraj doing the pooja, and waiting for heer to come as heer is the one who woke early in the morning for the pooja, but today she was not there ..
G3 ask meher, to look for heer as she is not here yet, Meher went to her room and knocked the door, but no response ,she looked from the side window and saw heer was sleeping ,and she did not wana disturb her, Meher came down and told that she is sleeping as heer as she must hve slept late night ,so i did not disturb her, g3 says ok. u do the pooja, ( the pooja was over it was 8:15, the ladies were in the kitchen preparing breakfast ,as harman and preet were getting ready for the office, chahat ,ketan ,tanu,gungun and Arjun went to the school, Bauji was reading the newspaper )
Heer Woke up at 8:30, she slowly opened her eyes ,and saw that prem wasnt there on the bed, she looked for him in the bathroom ,but he was not there, then she sat on the bed, she was feeling really tired because of yesterday's late night party, suddenly she turned back to take her dupatta, and saw a letter on her pillow, it was prem's letter, it was written the he has gone to mumbai for two days,in a business meeting a will be back soon, and at the end it was written LUV U HEER !!😳.. by reading this,a cute smile appears on her face ,and then she layed down on the bed again,,(Everyone was having the breakfast ,as bauji ask where are prem and heer , Meher replied , they both are sleeping ,,Bauji ask her to wake them up as prem has to go to the office, Sanjana, was also having the breakfast , Meher, entered in heer's room as heer, was getting ready ,
Meher:" Didi app itni der sey uthi ajj,??' aur jiju kahan hai ??"
Heer:" Han wo mai kal raat ko der sey sooi thi ,aur prem to ajj subh hi mumbai chala gya koi, businees meeting key liye, to chal mai ati hun "
(meher went down stairs, and told everybody ,that prem had gone to mumbai for a meeting ,and he will be back in two days,, then heer came down, gayatri told her to look after ur self ,as she has prepared a specail breakfast for her, .. Sanjana was staring ,her and giving her an Evil look )
Bauji:" Heer, prem ney tujhye kab bataya key woo mumbai ja rha hai , humey to kch nahi bataya ?"
Heer:" Han bauji mai to soo rhi thi ,os ney ek letter chor diya tha ,,mujhey usi sey pata chala"
Bauji:" kab wapis aeyga,??"
Heer:" doo din baad"
G3:" aesa bhi kya kaam jo bata ker nahi, gya, heer ko is halat mai chor ker gya hai"
(sanjana was feeling very happy !!as prem is not here,so that she can try to harm heer)
Heer:" maa koi baat nahi, shayd koi zaroori kaam hoga "
(everyone ate the breakfast, while preet and harman went to the office, bauji and g3 in their room.and Sanjana,Meher,and kuldi watching a movie,!! Heer in her room thinking abt her unborn baby,she was getting very exicted abt it ,,then she called prem )
Heer:" hello ?? Prem ,tum bina batiye kyn chaley gaye, pata hai mai kitna pareshaan ho rhi thi ??"
Prem:" sorry Heer, !! wo achanak phone aagya tha, bas mai abhi hi phoncha hun, ajj kaam khatam kerdunga, to kal ajounga ,,"
Heer:" prem tum jaldi ana mai ,bht bore ho rhi hun, isi ley apney bachey sey hi baat ker rhi thi"
Prem:" mai bhi tumhey aur humrey bachoun ko bht miss ker rha hun, Bas kal ajounga,"
Heer:" okay prem apna khayaal rakhna "
Prem:" meri choro ,tum apna khayaal rakhna, poora din bhuki mat rehna, aur mai abhi maa ko phone ker key khaunga, key tumhara khayal rakhey ,aur kuch kaam mat kerna"
Heer:" prem prem prem !!, mai apna khayal rakhungi, dont worry, bas tum jaldi ajao, I MIss u "
Prem:" I Miss U too And i Love u ,, Bye 😳"
Heer: " Bye !!
( it was afternoon, All the children came from the school, and chahat ran towards premeer's room)
Chahat:" Mumma!! ( she hugged her) app ajj neechey breakfast per kyn nahi aye, aur papa kahan hai, wo bhi nahi aye"
Heer:" beta mai raat ko late night sooi thi, isi liye nahi aye, aur papa out of town gaye hai ,Kal aajeyngey"
Chahat:" Oh to papa out of town gaye hai , this is not fair, ajj tu mera program tha key papa,mai aur app dono shopping per jayngey , per papa to bina bataiye chaley gaye"
( Prem and Kept Choclates in Chahat's room, before going to mumbai, )
Heer:" koi baat nahi, wesey idea acha hai ,mai bhi bht boor ho rhi hun tu kyun na shopping chalye , aur han papa ney jatey waqt ap key room mai yeh choclates rakh di thi "
Chahat : " wow !! Papa is the best i love u mumma papa, "
Heer:" chalo hum dono papa key liye bhi shopping ker leyngey , app jldi sey tiyaar ho jao "
(Sanjana came inside the room, and said heer kiya mai bhi tumharey sath chaloun,shopping per )
Heer:" han han kyn nahi chalo na, '
sanjana:" thanks heer, wesey heer,chahat ko ley ker janey ki kiya zaroorat hai ,mai chalti hun na tumharye sath, wesey bhi tum is halat mai chahat ko kahan sambhalo gi"
Chahat:" Mai koi bachi nahi hun ,mai apna aur apni mamma ka khayal khud rakh sakti hun"
Sanjana:(got irritated) mai tum sey nahi tumhari mumma sye baat ker rhi hun"
Heer:" chahat ,beta yeh theek keh rahi hai ,mai idher hi raho mai app kiya liye bht sarey dolls aur toys ley aoungi okay"
Chahat:" Okay mumma, ( she kissed her cheeks, and gave and evil look to sanjana and leavve from there)
(Sanjana was having a full proof plan for killing her, as she going alone with her)
Both sanjana and heer came down to go for the shopping,g3 asked heer, that were are u going )
she replied : '" maa mai ghar bethey boor ho rhi hun, isi liye sanjana key sath shopping per ja rhi hun, "
g3:" beta mai bhi chalti hun, terey sath,"
(sanjana interupt)" auntty ji mai heer, key sath ja rhi hun na, ap tention mat leyjiye, mai heer ka poora khayal rakhungi,"
Heer:" han maa sanjana hai na "
G3:" okay beta per dehaan sey jana"
( sanjana ,was happy that her plan will be successfull as heer, wont be coming in this house again, as she will took her place in this house and in prem's heart )
( heer and sanjana doing the shopping, as sanajan had made a full proof plan of killing heer,)
Chahat called heer, she said mumma jaldi aye na im waiting for u )
Heer:" han beta bas mai aarhi hun"
Heer:" Sanjana chaley??"
Sanjana making an excuse(heer i forgot mujhey apni frnd sey milney jana hai, tum ek kaam kero tum ghar jao mai usey mil ker ati hun)
Heer:" are u sure??"
Sanjana:" han han mai ajaungi tum jao "
( heer sits in the car)
Heer: " driver chalo "
Sanjana followed heer's car ,as they were 10 kilo-mtrs away from juneja house..
the road was empty, and sanjana found a good move to kill her now, she speed up her car, and hit on the back of heer's car, the driver could not control the car,and the car bangs on the tree,
sanjana stops her car and thinks to herself ,now heer is dead. and i should also move from here, before any one can see me,,
the driver had already died ,and heer was lying unconcious on the back seat of the car ,
there was a handsum guywith her mother coming from the same road, he saw the car..and he ran towards it,No one was around there, the driver was dead,and the lady (heer)was alive, with the help of her mother he took the lady to the hospital ,but there was no emergency staff at the moment, the guy requested the doctor to operate the lady(heer),but docotr refuses, as it was a police case, guy beg the doc to operate her, or else she will die, the doc agress, he took her to the operation theatre, and he said to the guys pls fill up the form,
the nurse asked the guy ,wat is ur realtionship wit the patient, they guy was confused wat to say,(the nurse repeated the question, and he abrubtely said ,she is my wife 😕, his mother was shocked to hear that .
Mother: " karan yeh to ney kiya kya ?? " ( They guy name is karan sharma, he is a smiple middle class guy living with her mother and an elder sister )
Karan:" is waqt mujhey ,us larki ki jaan ki parva thi, isi liye mainey yeh bol diya"
Mother:"beta per humhey is larki key ghar waloun key barey mai kuch nahi pata,"
Karan:" maa jab unhey hosh aajeyga,tab hum us sey un key ghar waloun key barey mai pooch leyngey"
After 3 hours, doctor came outside from OT and said, congracts the operation is successfull, (karan and her mother took a breathe of relief)
the doctor said,ur child is absolutley fine, but ur wife had unfortunately lost her memory "
Karan and his mother are shocked to hear this , the doc said now u can meet ur wife,
they both entered the room, heer asked the nurse who are they, she replied he is ur husband karan, and she is his mother, (heer has completely lost her memory, and thinks that he is her husband)
Heer holds karan's hand and said:" tum kahan chaley gaye they mujhey chor ker,mai kitna dar gai thi, pls mujhey yahan sye ly chalo karan"
Karan was unable to take his eyes off from her face, he was falling for her, but was not able to speak to her,
Karan's mother:" beta abhi tum aaram kero,hum baad mai baat keryngey theek hai"
a smile appears on heer's face by looking karan and her mother, heer fell asleep ,as she is still holding karan's hand. the nurse asked wat is the name of the patient, His mother replied her name is MAHI..
Karan:" maa yeh app kiya keh rhi hai"
Mother:" beta ab is ki yadash bhi khoo gai hai, aur humhey iskey ghar waloun key barey mai bhi kuch nahi maloom, to asey mai mainey isey apni beti bana liya, ab yeh hamrey sath hi rehy gi"
Karan couldn't say no to his mother, as he was also feeling the attachment towards heer"
Karan asked the doctor ,that when we can take her back to home ,
the doc replied tomorrow !!
NEXT DAY !!
prem coming out from the airport, he is very excited to meet his heer, he couldn't control his happiness, he quickly sat into the car and drove towards the Juneja house,
AT hospital, Heer is discharged, but she is unable to walk, due to fracture , Karan picked her up in his arms, heer was staring karan, an eye look session, heer was feeling the love for karan and same goes with karan , karan's mother was very happy ,as she is thinking that now my son's life will be changed, MAHI will be my bhau and her child will be my Grand child,
they took heer to their home,
PRECAP:" prem entering the house " Heer Heer !! kahan ho tum ?? "
G3,kuldi ,meher and bauji r crying, as harman and preet were out to look for heer,
chahat came running and hugged prem ,she said :" papa mumaaa"
Prem got tensed he asked g3, " maa heer kahan hai ?/"
she replied, beta heer kal shaam sey ghar wapis nahi aye hai,
Tears rolled down from his cheeks,
NeXt Part will be on Saturday !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
great part


thanx 4 the pm


update soon


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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
Awesome update. Oh Heer lost her memory. Hope she regains her memory soon n Prem finds her.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Ohh great..
very interesting .....
Its like the begigning of desh now.
A whole new love story will start.
Waiting for ur nest update.

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