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Posted: 15 years ago
great


thnx 4 the pm


update soon


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FANTASTIC👏MEHER WAS ALWAYS ROMANCING WITH PREET NOT LETTING HIM DO HIS OWN WORK😉MERE KHAYAL SE SHE WAS DOING PREET'S WORK😆INITIALLY PREET WAS EXCITED BUT SOON GOT BORED OF MEHER😲ONE MORNING PREET TOLD MEHER THAT HE WAS TIRED OF HER😡MEHER STARTED CRYING😭KIRAN MADE PREET REALISE HIS MISTAKE & PREET WENT HOME WITH TOYS😃PREET KEPT THE TOYS ON BED TOLD MEHER THAT HE IS EXPECTING ANOTHER BABY😳MEHER SHOWED FAKE ANGRY TO PREET🤪BUT PREET TOOK MEHER TOWARDS BED & STARTED ENJOYING THE MOMENT☺️THANKS FOR THIS LOVELY ONE SHOT👏KEEP WRITING LIKE THIS😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Zaara Nachke Dikha- Part 1



This one shot is inspired by a dance class i took today! I kept thinking of Sushant as i was dancing and then thought of this! I thought it was very apt since sushant is on ZND! He is such a fabulous dancer- probably one of the biggest reasons as to why i love him! Anyways, Enjoy!

"Veera, this is stupid! I already know how to dance. I was on the dance troupe in college, remember?" preet whined.

"Bhai, I know you can dance but some members of this family cant dance( veera glared at harman and prem), and this is really important for Kuldi's wedding! I want everything to be perfect! So we all needto be in sync with each other. Plus this will be so cute at the wedding!" veera exclaimed.

Preet rolled his eyes, they did not need a choreographer to dance at a wedding. Veera had planned this whole competition between the bride and groom's families. And he was not delighted that he had to wake up at 7 am during his summer for these classes.

Meher walked in hurriedly with her nephew, ayush, holding her hand. She sat him down with a gameboy. "Sorry, I am late!" meher said as she hugged veera.

Preet turned to look at her...she was pretty but she was in workout clothes and no makeup. She had a boy at least the age of 8 with her. She didnt look like a mother, infact she was tall and firm. She was defintely a dancer, But Preet was sure he was a better dancer.

You guys are doing the competition thing to a medley, right?" meher confirmed.

"Yes, and we have to be better than kiran's family. his sister ashlesha will never let me live this down if we arent better!" veera said.

So that's why this is so important to veera, preet thought rolling his eyes again.

Veera explained the four rounds to meher. First was khallas round in which she would perform against ashlesha,second was the shava shava round where the parents would perform, then was the humtum round in which prem and his fiance heer would perform, and last was the paarivar round where the entire family would perform


Meher began by helping them with the parivaar act. She soon grew frustrated with harman and prem. She noticed that preet was a great dancer, his moves were so fluid. They were practicing nagda nagda , but prem and harman failed miserably.

"Uh, meher can you show me this step again?" harman said mischeviously. "Can you stand in front of me and show me?" harman said.

Preet understanding harman's intentions and feeling slightly jealous said, " I'll show you harman." Harman hinted at preet that he wanted meher to do it but preet hissed at him.

Meher oblivious to their banter, corrected preet. Preet was irked that he was trying to save meher from harman's eyes ( although he couldnt help but stare when she moved) and yet she was correcting him. "No! I am doing it right." preet argued back.

Meher was surprised but she showed preet the steps again. He caught her waist as she moved and moved it the way he thought was right. meher was startled but let preet's hands guide her. "Uh, er," she hesitated. "You're right it looks better this way." meher smiled innocently. Preet smiled back drawn to meher.

The next few weeks passed with meher having fun teaching gayathri and lallit. Ayush took it upon himself to help veera, since he nursed a crush on her. ( preet had soon realized that ayush was meher's nephew and not son,, much to his relief). Heer and prem were slowly cathing on, but harman was still a hopeless case.

" Can ayush take Harman's place?" veera whined as the rest of the family chuckled while waiting for prem-heer to arrive.

To be continued in post below..... 😉
Edited by tadashi - 15 years ago
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Zaara nachke Dikha Part 2


Lalit got a call from Heer and the family rushed home and gave aquick bye to meher and ayush. Veera called meher later to tell her that prem had fallen off the latter while putting up decorations and sprained his ankle.

The next day, meher came to the juneja's house for practice. She loved shaadi ke ghars. They were so festive and fun! She twirled enjoying the music on her ipod and admiring the decorations when she felt a mass of flowers fall on her. She looked up to see Preet chuckling. meher ran upstairs to chase him. She got close to him but then tripped on the carpet and preet caught her. Veera walked out of her room to the sight. Her eyes grew wide and then a smile crept up to her lips. "Perfect!" she squealed breaking preet and meher out of their eyelock. "You two can perform the humtum round now that prem and heer can't do it!"

"What!?" meher and preet yelled at the same time which brought about the rest of the family members. "why can't preet perform with heer?" meher suggested.

"No! It has to be a couple! We can't break the rules!" Veera said.

"But Meher and i aren't a couple." preet said. "Yeah, and I am not family." meher said.

"Uff oh, you two flirt so much you might as well be a couple." veera exasperated.

The family laughed, as preet and meher turned red. Had the rest of the family noticed their flirty arguments, secret glances and hand brushing as well? meher thought.

"Veera sahi keh rahi hai. Tum dono ko kali natak karna hoga. Kiran ki family ko thori pata chalegi." gayathri said.

Meher and preet reluctantly agreed. Both were reluctant because neither was sure of what this intimacy would bring about. Meher and Preet practiced all that night. Preet learned the steps quickly and soon he and meher began to fall into place. As preet watched meher twirl into him his heart pounded to the beat of shuran Allah( the song they were performing to). He realized he was falling in love with her. He had her mannerisms memorized- the way she blushed after every compliment, the way her eyes got big when she was slightly embarrased, the way her face lit up when she danced, the way she openly laughed when she tickled ayush, the way she hugged his mother, the way she bit her lip when she was thinking, and the way she would back away when he came close to her. He thanked god for this opportunity.

During the prewedding functions, Veera made sure preet and meher acted as a couple much to preet;s delight. At the mehndi preet grabed a hold of meher's hand and brought her to dance with him. ashlesha sauntered her way over to preet. "Preet!" she squealed. "Mein yeh kya sun rahi hoon...tumhare paas girlfriend hai?" she said as she rubbed his arm.

Meher suddenly felt a twinge of jealousy. " Hi. I am Meher." meher extended her hand towards ashlesha. " Oh, to tum ho jisne preet ki dil churai." ashlesha said with the resentment apparent in her voice.

Meher smiled at her as she intertwined her own hands with preets. Ashlesha quckly left the area. Preet stared at her in amusement. "what!? Veera said to act the part. " meher said. Preet couldnt help but chuckle, he was now sure that meher felt the same way.

The day of the wedding both families were preparing. Veera and aunty/uncle's rounds went well. Now it was time for the humtum round. Meher was really nervous, she kept pacing. After all this wasnt even real. She was just trying to help, but what if she failed? Then would the rest of the family never like her, would preet ever talk to her?

As she turned to pace in the other direction she ran into preet. "oh sorry, woh uh..."
Preet placed his finger on her lips. He then brought her hand to his lips and softly kissed it. He then whispered, "goodluck" and winked.

Meher and preet danced. Each movement breathed passion into their boddies. He spun her to ishq hua. Then she leaned into him for sajda. They danced to jogi mahi and finished to meherbaan( authors note: if you havent heard this song- go listen to it! it;s by ar rehman and its mindblowing!). As they ended breathless in each others arms, preet let go of meher and called out to the DJ. Meher, as well as the rest of the crowd was bewildered. A song soon began: "Kab tak chupaogi jawani....." Soon Preet was joined by lalit, prem ( who "sprained his ankle"- as per gayathri and veera's directions so that meher and preet would perform together), and harman. Finally Preet ended the song on one knee, "Mujhse shaadi karogi?" Meher's eyes welled up with tears as she nodded her head quickly. Preet got up and put a ring on to meher's finger. "So were the moves coordinated right this time, Ms. Maan?" preet said teasingly. "Flawless" meher whispered into preet;s ear as she hugged him.

So this oneshot got a little longer than I expected so I split it into two parts. I hope you like it. Please give me honest feedback! I'll be honest... I am probably going to update dooriyan and then disappear again! Kaan pakaring, but I have stuff to do! I promise to finish everything my the end of summer! 😉
Edited by tadashi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hai, kya story thi... loved it!~ it was too good! Meet! 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
awesomeeeee update
totallyyy😆😆😆 update
loved meher's notty notty behaviour
preet is shooo cuteeeee
i just loved his talksss
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
LOVELY👏SUPERB CHEMISTRY SHOWN BETWEEN MEET👏FABULOUS YET SO DIFFERENT FROM UR OTHER MEET OS'S👏MEET DANCING TO EACH OTHERS TUNE👏THANKS FOR THIS WONDERFULL MEET OS👏DONT DISSAPPEAR FOR TOO LONG😉DONT HAVE MUCH TIME THATS Y SHORT COMMENT SORRY😆
Edited by monaghosh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
chaa gaye ho tusi janab.....amazing..loved it through out...actually loved veera in it...lolz:P
ya i know we all hav a habit of disappearing...update asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
great



thanx 4 the pm



update soon



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Posted: 15 years ago
That was so good
Cute and funny
Meet are too cute!
I like the fact everyone was in on the plan so Meet could dance together
Thanx for the PM 😛
Edited by Aaliyah01 - 15 years ago

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