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Posted: 14 years ago
THAT WAS SO ....TRUE!
I LIKED THAT U POSTED THIS ONE! CONGRATS FOR UR NEW THREAD BY THE WAY(STORY MEIN I JUST FORGOT!!)
THANKS 4 SHARING THIS ONE
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Sush: u were right sweety, this ff is truly awesome. Thanx ...or i would had missed it.
do add me to ur pm list dear. Your ff is amazing.
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CHAPTER-62

Preet runs after Meher and finally gets her.


Preet: I'm sorry Meher. I know mein bohut buraa hoon na..


Meher: Haan tum bure ho.. bohut bure' agar tum uss din mujhe milne aa na sake toh kum se kum uske baad ek call toh kar sakte the.. mein ne sirf tumhare liye journey postpone kart hi rahi aur tum tumhe toh mere liye time hi nahi tha..


Preet: I'm sorry for everything Meher.


Meher: Sorry Preet.. tumhe pata hai mein ne tumhe kitna miss kiya.. U.S. jaane ke baad ek bhi pal aisa nahi gaya jab mein ne tumhe miss nahi kiya ho' Phir jab Heer di se baat huye toh mein apne aap ko rok nahi sakhi aur mein ne unhe bata diya ki mein tumse pyaar karti hoon.. phir Prem bhaiya ne ye sab kuch kiya taaki tum mujhe bata sakho.. Kya itna sab kuch karna jaroori tha.. tum mujhe pehle bata nahi sakte??


Preet: Mujhe darr tha ki tum mujhe no kehdoge gi' aur mein woh bilkul bardaash nahi kar sakta tha..


Meher: Tum aisa kyun laga


Preet: Tum mujhe ek acha dost samaj thi thi and agar tumhe mere liye feelings nahi the toh I didn't want to lose you as a friend too


Meher: Jab tumhe itni takleef ho rahi thi batane ke liye toh mere baare mein sochte.. mujhe kitni pareshaani ho rahi thi tumhe batane mein'


Preet: Sorry again..


Meher: Ab sirf sorry hi bolte rahoge ya kuch aur bhi kahoge.


Preet: Oh yea sorry.


Meher just glared at him.


Preet: Meher I love you.


Meher: I love you too Preet.


They hug each other. They are then joined by others who were happy to see them together.


Kunal: Congratulations Preet' tumhe toh mein baad mein dekhloonga' mujhse chupake raha aaj tak..


Prem: Chalo ab sab sone jao kal se shaadi ki tayariyaan bhi toh karne hai..


Kavya: Haan bhai chalo.. koi bohut excited ho raha hai apni shaadi ko lekar hume unki excitement ko kum nahi karna chahiye'


Angad: Ok guys see you all tomorrow.


Just when everyone retired to their rooms, they heard someone's shrieks. All of them assembled down. They were shocked to see Buaji collapsing on couch.


Gayatri walked to her and asked,


Gayatri: Kya hua buaji? Aap ne aane mein bohut der kardi'


Buaji: Kum se kum aa toh gayi warna mujhe toh laga mein aaj mein seedhe bhagwan ke ghar jaoungi


Lalit: Aap aisa kyun kehrahi hai?


Buaji: Pehle woh bhajan ke wajah se dr hogayi aur baad mein woh tumhari katara gaadi' beech mein hi karab hogayi' Ab bas bohut rehliye yahaan' kal meri ticket nikalwado mein jaa rahi hoon'


Gayatri: Lekin aap aise kaise jaa sakti hain?? Prem ki shaadi'.


Buaji: Pehli baar jab hua tab toh bataya hi nahi aur ab dobara mein rahoon ya rahoon rukegi toh nahi' mujhe jaana hai..


Gayatri: Teek hai jaise aap ki marzi


Everyone retired to their rooms.

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The mehendi ceremony was going on. Ishita and Heer got mehendi done and rest of them are getting it done. Buaji left in the afternoon and promised to come back later. Gayatri and Gauri were happy that plan worked. Gauri and Kripa danced to few mehendi numbers. Later as all of them sat together, the girls wondered why there wasn't any interruption. Knowing their partners, they knew they would try to sneak in but they didn't. Something was wrong. Heer's mehendi was already dried so she thought of washing it when she felt her mobile vibrate. She noticed the caller name and she smiled. Noticing that everyone was busy chatting or getting mehendi done, she slipped out.


Heer: Hii Premmm


Prem: Itni der kyun lagi phone utane mein'


Heer: arre sab mere pass mein baite hue the..


Prem: Acha teek hai'


Heer: Waise itna shor kyun sunayi der raha hai' wait mein speaker on karti hoon' She placed the mobile on table in the garden and sat on the chair close to it.


Prem: First promise me you wouldn't tell anyone.


Heer: Let me think' ok I promise


Prem: Bachelors' party.


Heer: What? Bachelors' party?


Prem: Yes, you heard it right.


Heer: And you don't mind telling that to me?


Prem: Why should I? Mujhe pata hai tum kabhi mana nahi karogi.


Heer: Acha agar mein kardeti toh?


Prem: Nahi karti


Heer: Acha itna confidence.


Prem: Haan.. acha tumhari mehendi kaisi hai? I really want to sneak out and join you but unfortunately these guys aren't letting me out.


Heer: It's really good and I'm really missing you too. Kya ho raha hai wahaan?


Prem: Dances' tumhe pata hai na woh masti movie ka gaana' Kavya and Angad pulled mine and Kunal's legs and somehow I escaped bechara Kunal phas gaya.


Heer: Tumhe pata hai yahaan sab miss kar rahe hain' anjali ki mehendi mein kaise andar aagaye the aur khoob masti ki thi na


Prem: Haan actually iss baar bhi same plan tha' mein ne bola tha sabko lekin these guys came up with this party plan.


Heer: Oh it's ok' chalo everyone is having fun na' Hey woh toh Pratham bhaiya ki awaaz haina' kya woh gaa rahe hain??


Prem: Haan' its bhaiya' agar bhabhi ne unhe aisa dekhliya na toh woh toh gaye kaam se'


Heer: Kya matlab hai tumhara? Don't tell me he's dancing with a girl..


Prem: You bet'


Heer: Iska matlab there are dancers too'


Prem: Isn't it obvious Heer'


Heer: Mein toh socha you guys are just having fun among yourselves.


Prem: Haan' they are just dancers not the typical bar dancers you see in movies'


Heer: Lekin phir bhi


Prem: Chill dear' its normal fun that's it. waise bhaiya is just doing his dare' papa ko dekhna tha he was awesome'


Heer: Papa bhi'. lagta hai wahaan bohut masti ho rahi hai' I wish mein wahaan aa paoun'


Prem: Ek kaam karo peeche wale raste se out house ke pass aajao..


Heer: Kyun?


Prem: Kyunki party outhouse mein hai..


Heer: Lekin andar agar kisi ne dekhliya toh'


Prem: Mein tumhe andar thodi na le jaounga sab ke samne' tum aao toh sahi'


Heer: Ok then I'm coming' pehle mujhe yahaan sabko handle karna hogana'


Prem: Ok bye sweetheart' I'll be waiting.


Heer: Bye.


Heer turned around with a smile and soon her smile disappeared and a frown appeared in its place.


She saw Gayatri, Gauri, Kripa, Ishita and Anjali fuming with anger.


Ishita: Mein soch rahi thi ye kunal kyun reply nahi kar raha? Toh ye baat hai'


Gauri: Maa suna aapne' mujhe tabhi shak hogaya jab Pratham bohut sajdajke jaa raha tha' mein ne socha mehendi mein hi aayenge ye log lekin'


Gayatri: Bache toh phir bhi soch sakti hoon lekin Lalit???


Kripa: Angad subah se phone pe laga hua tha' kuch dancers, decoration baat chal rahi thi' meine socha naya show ke liye tayari chal rahi hai aur yahaan toh'


Anjali: Humesha humaare functions mein tapakte rehte hain'kyun na iss baar hum jaake unhe zatka de'


Gauri: Right' chalo chalte hain'


Heer: Bhabhi lekin'


Gayatri: Tu chupkar' jyaada prem ki deewani mat ban'. Chup chap humare saath chal'


Heer bowed her head down and went along with them' She tried to message Prem but Kripa snatched her phone before she could send him.


As they approached near to outhouse they heard faint sound of music,


They went in through the back door and slowly went into a room through which they can witness everything happening. Angad ordered DJ to play the next song,


It was Angad grabbing the mike, cornering everyone's attention.

Now you can do it like this
Take it to the level, you can do it like that
Shake it to the right
All my ladies and my man and my man's and my ladies ..

Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga
Shaadi ban gayi umarqaid ki saza, haan saza

He danced in the centre along with dancers pulling Kavya and Pratham,


Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga
Shaadi ban gayi umarqaid ki saza, haan saza

This time he surrounded around Prem and Kunal and sang. He went out in a corner and everyone was enjoying dancing.

Yeh hai udaasi, jaan ki pyaasi
Shaadi se achcha tum le lo faansi

He felt being pulled that was when he noticed Kripa holding on to his hand. She sang the next line for him but since the music was playing and everyone was dancing in their own world.

Laakhon dukhon ki hoti hai ye wajah, haan wajah
Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga
Shaadi ban gayi umarqaid ki saza, haan saza

Angad's face paled as he sang the next part. She crossed her arms and raised an eyebrow.

Jiski shaadi par jaana, usko itna samjhana
Jiski shaadi par jaana, usko itna samjhana
Na kar shaadi, yeh barbaadi, phir na pacchtaana


Hold on...don scold him saying short part... continution in next page... happy reading..

Edited by Kavya.... - 14 years ago
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Chapter-63

Pratham was truly enjoying himself. He along with Kavya pulled the to-be grooms in the centre while he rounded Prem and Kavya Kunal' As they finished the circle, they saw their wives standing in front of them.

Jiski shaadi par jaana, usko itna samjhana
Na kar shaadi, yeh barbaadi, phir na pacchtaana

Anjali stood infront of Kavya arms crossed with a stern look mouthing the line'

Haan mauka hai pagle, shaadi se bachle
Samjha le dil ko yeh shaadi ko machle

Gauri raised her eyebrow at Pratham who stood with head bowed down. She ignored him and caught Prem's ear as she mouthed the lines'

Shaadi ke mandap se tu khud ko bhaga, haan baga
Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga

All the men stood in front of their wives now and as they heard the lines, they wondered how they wish they could run away from there'.

Prem glared at Heer for the disaster happened while she gave a helpless look. The staring session went on for a while. While all this was happening, Lalit still was oblivious of the fact that women were there. He mouthed the rest along with dancer and came to centre when he noticed Gayatri.


Sabse pehle shaadi thi, yaaron jahan mein jisne ki
Usko dhoondho, pakdo peeto, galti usne ki

Gayatri stared at him for a while and mouthed the same'

Sabse pehle shaadi thi, yaaron jahan mein jisne ki
Usko dhoondho, pakdo peeto, galti usne ki
Woh tha saudai, banke kasai
Usne toh sabki lutiya dubayi

Preet barged in along with the dancers as everyone stood silent and completed the portion and he saw Meher entering in.

Paani mile na maaro aisi jagah, haan jagah
Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga
Shaadi ban gayi umarqaid ki saza, haan saza
Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga
Shaadi ban gayi umarqaid ki saza, haan saza
Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga

The men felt that truly they got zor ka jhatka and didn't know what to do.

Prem felt he had to do something to change the mood. He slowly slipped to DJ and told him the plan.

Ta ra ra.. ta ra ri re' ta ra ra

In short time, the lights went off and the spotlight was on in the centre where Prem stood in front of the mike'.

Come around' it's time to baby

Come around..

Come on now' come around'

Kunal joined him too as he sang for Ishita.

It's time to baby' come around

Come around' come around

Prem made his way through the crowd and reached Heer who was all smiling'

Khwaabon bina, nigahen meri jee rahin thi

Koi nahin tha yeh akeli meri thi zindagi

Ohhh yehhh'

Kunal followed his footsteps and reached Ishita who smiled shyly'.

Khamosh tha honthon pe baatein nahin thi

Koi nahin tha yeh akeli meri thi zindagi

Prem pulled Heer into his arms and danced around as her arms went around his neck.

Tum mile toh mil gaya yeh jahaan

Tum mile toh har pal hai naya

Tum mile toh sabse hai' faasla


Kunal and Ishita did the same.

Tum mile toh jaadu chaa gaya

Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya

Tum mile toh maine paaya' hai khuda

Come around'

It's time to baby' Come around..

Preet pulled Meher for dance.

Come on now' come around'

It's time to baby' come around

Come around' come around


Angad went up to Kripa and held his ears and pouted as he sang.

Palken moondein chaahat meri so rahi thi

Khushboo hawaaon mein thi

Maine nahin mehsoos ki

Mmm mm.mm

Kavya tried to pacify Anjali in the same way.

Jaane kahaan bahaaren meri khil rahi thi

Khushboo hawaaon mein thi

Maine nahin mehsoos ki

Kripa smiled and put her hand in his and they danced together smiling.

Tum mile toh mehki baarishen

Tum mile toh jaagi khwaahishen

Tum mile toh rangon ka hai silsila

Anjali pulled him into a bear hug and he took her to sit down resting his hand on her bulge.

Tum mile toh jaadu chaa gaya

Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya

Tum mile toh maine paaya hai khuda

Gauri saw everyone trying to pacify their partner and wished Pratham would do something for her but in vain. He stood with his head bowed down. Disappointed she thought of leaving and turned when she heard'

Ta ra ra.. ta ra ri re' ta ra ra

Pratham took slow steps towards Gauri as he sang'

Tune duaaein suni

Dil ki sadaiyen suni

Tujhse main maangu aur kya

Tujh bin adhura hun main

Tere sang poora hun main

Karta hun tera shukriya


Pratham went on his knees as he sang the lines for her'

Kaise kahoon, kaise kahoon'

Kaise kahoon'kaise kahoon'

Kaise kahoon lamhe mujhe choo rahe hain

Aisa laga hain inmein tera hi toh ehsaas hai


Prem hit Heer's head as she stared at Pratham and Gauri with a smile and sang..

Ohh hooo

Kaise kahoon dil mein nayi aahaten hain

Aisa laga hain inmein tera hi toh ehsaas hai

Tum mile toh mera dil gaya

Tum mile toh sab kuch mil gaya

Tum mile toh logon se kya vaasta

Gauri hugged him and all the couples had fun time dancing together.

Tum mile toh jaadu chaa gaya

Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya

Tum mile toh maine paaya hai khuda

Everyone was having fun and unnoticed Lalit and Gayatri who was frowning away when he tried to approach her. Heer noticed this and whispered something into Prem's ears.

All the men surrounded Lalit while the women went to Gayatri.

Lalit: Hmmmmmmmmmm

Gayatri: Ooooooooo

Lalit: Oye oyeeeeee

Eh meri zohra-jabeen, tujhe maalum nahi

Tu abhi tak hai haseen aur main jawaan

Tujhpe qurbaan meri jaan meri jaan

Lalit went to Gayatri and held her hand while Gayatri hid her face with free hand.

Eh meri zohra-jabeen'

Tu abhi tak hai haseen aur main jawaan

Tujhpe qurbaan meri jaan meri jaan


The rest of couples circled them clapping. He placed his hand under chin and made her face him'

Ye shokhiyaan ye baankpan,

Jo tujh mein hai kahi nahi

Dilo ko jeetne ka fan, jo tujh mein hai kahi nahi

Main teri'

Main teri aankho mein paa gaya do jahaan

Gayatri lowered her eyes blushing.

Eh meri zohra-jabeen'

Tu abhi tak hai haseen aur main jawaan

Tujhpe qurbaan meri jaan meri jaan

He slowly started to dance with her.

Tu meethhe bol jaan-e-man,

Jo muskuraake bol de

To dhadhkano mein aaj bhi,

Sharaabi rang ghol de

Oh sanam'

Oh sanam main tera aashiq-e-jaawida

All the men joined in and sang along.

Eh meri zohra-jabeen'

Tu abhi tak hai haseen aur main jawaan

Tujhpe qurbaan meri jaan meri jaan

They had a great time enjoying the rest of the evening.


It was night time and all the guests left by then. The family sat together to discuss things. Prem told he's going to sleep as he had an important meeting the next day. He went to his room and closed the door.


After chatting sometime with everyone and knowing about Meher, the family retired to their roons. Heer took her night dress and went to change and after she changed she got on bed and pulled on the covers. She felt someone kiss her and turned to other side to see Prem on bed beside her. She sat up.


Heer: Premm tum yahaan???


Prem: Haan mein. He said and pulled her on the top of him covering with the blanket.


Heer: Yahaan kya rahe ho???


He kissed her cheek and said

Prem: Aise hi'tumhe dekhna ka mann kara aur mein yahaan'


Heer: Acha' heer said lovingly and cuddling closer to him.


Prem: Heer mujhe acha nahi laga' buaji left aur tumhe tumhara kamra milgaya' tum mere pass nahi rehsakti ab' he said caressing her hair


Heer: its ok Prem.. ab kuch hi dino ki toh baat hai'


Prem: tumne mujhe mehendi toh dikaayi hi nahi'bad girl'


Heer: Oh mein toh bhool gayi' wait mein light on karti hoon..


She put on the light and showed him her hands which were deep red'


Prem: Woww isn't it darker than before' I mean last time when you put mehendi..


Heer: Ye toh hona hi tha' tum mujhse pyaar jo itna karte ho'


Prem: Mein tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon iska proof toh tumhe milgaya' par mere kya? He said raising an eyebrow.


Heer: Hmmm' She went into thinking mode and then slowly bent forward on him, making him go backward and hit pillow. She reached his lips with hers and poured all her love in it. As they broke the kiss, she shyly smiled as he winked.


Heer: Acha ab chalo'


Prem: Kyunnnn???


Heer: Kyun kya?? Jao mujhe sone do aur tum bhi so jao' kisine dekhliya toh phir shaadi tak hume ek doosre se milne nahi denge'


Prem: Heeeeerrrr' He whined as she pulled him towards the door.


Prem: Acha ok' one last..


He kissed her and left from there.



Finally I posted this one... next Premeer marriage... and it would mark the end of this FF...Thank you... Plz leave your comments....
Edited by Kavya.... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally u updated this one
it was awesome loved it
Premeer scenes were too good
i really gonna miss this ff
Update soon...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
please add me to your pm list....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update Kavya
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was awesmee...thanks for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
The Premeer scene was soo sweet !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 14 years ago

finally you continued this ff...........

Awesome parts
update soon

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