ff: ''a many splendoured thing', update pg. 102 - Page 60

Originally posted by: estee

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it's funny how some of you have actually caught on that prem discovered heer's sofa could become a bed.

i wonder why....

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all my beloved phorumers, thank you for reading. like preet wondering about heer going away, i just can't see why you are still doing that!!

Esther, update NOW!!

Hiya E! Dnt reli know if u know me, haha but I m Kamal....

hey estee! 🤗 finally ur back! r u finally free or stilll busy?? i wld have soo killed u if u had made dis the last chapter 😡😡 thank god pcp stopped u else i wld have srsly strangled u! u'd better continue wid dis one and ur nt finishing it any time sooner okay?? *looks sternly*

E, 🤗

That was beautiful my dear. Yes, the brothers need to know why Heer left Prem. But the way Prem explains that - awesome!! He loves her enough to let her go and fulfil her dreams and he knows that she will come back to him. Yes, it is a torture to be when your love is away from you. But the very thought that she belongs to you is enough to keep you going.

I loved the way you described the coffee and the cream. Just like when you add the white pure cream to the black coffee, it touches the centre first and totally changes the colour. So is love. It is as pure as cream and when it touches your core - your heart, your soul it ends up making a completely different person of you. It was one of the most poignant descriptions E. 👏

The conversation is not over. I hope we will get to read the actual conversation between Prem and Heer in the very public coffee shop in the next update. Please update soon E. And please make it a happy one.

Love,
Ash

That was beautiful estee. the brothers should need to know why Heer left prem.plz dont end this story this soon

😲 You updated!! YAY!!

WOW !!!! yeah just wow , is what i can say.....eagerly waiting for ur next update

WOw !! just wow is all what i can say

😊 Hi Estee, I'm quite new to the forum and it's a pleasure to meet you. Thank you for the FF -yours is the first one I read. Enjoyed reading it. The cliffhangers after each chapter were nicely done. I think you're a great story teller as I never got bored while reading the story.