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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnime

hey but you knw that I'ven been busy nd sick lately !!
nd u knw vry well dat I hate one liners nd dat I prefer giving long comments !! now if you want one liners, I can do it huh 😆

Tasha you too !! so sorry yaar, I wasn't commenting anywhere .. I've been very busy, I've been ill plus personal problems .. nd I will b busy till thursday as well .. I haven't commented on Rhea's FF as well yet 😔 but you forgot my loooooooooooooong comments I was giving before huh ? you even forgot that I was asking you to atleast reserve so dat I could be the first one to comment ? 😭

Aww Taz! Don't get upset! comment whenever you have time, but I have noticed you are quite active on the PR forum1😆 Save a lttle time for me and Sid!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tadashi

Aww Taz! Don't get upset! comment whenever you have time, but I have noticed you are quite active on the PR forum1😆 Save a lttle time for me and Sid!



I'm not upset lollz, I knw you grlz 🤗 .. yeah m only active in the chat thread, otherwise not .. nd you knw dat I like to analyze the part 😆 actually we r coming up with PR members awards, that's why we have been lately busy .. but will comment aftr ths thursday .. 😳
btw whr is Taniya ?? ( addiction ) 😕
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 19


Preet looked at the doctor with immense worry. He waited for the doctor to give him more information. Prem also came and stood beside Prem.

Doctor(smiles): Congratulations! App ka beta hua hai (Prem quickly grabbed into a hug. Preet hugged him and returned to the doctor)
Preet(smiles): Thanks doctor. aur Meher kaisi hai?
Doctor: Woh bilkul theek hai dont worry.
Preet(smiling widely now): Thank you so much doctor. Woh..woh main Meher aur hamare betay se mil sakta hun?
Doctor: app unse thori dair main mil sakte hain.

Saying this the doctor left. Preet and Prem waited outside the room. A nurse came and told Preet that he could meet his wife now. Preet excitedly walked towards the room.

Preet entered the room and saw Meher lying on the bed with a baby crib beside her bed. He saw her calm face. Her eyes were closed. She was looking tired, but still very beautiful. He looked at the crib beside the bed. Their son must be there he thought. He smiled. He walked up to the bed and stood beside the crib. He could see the baby boy clearly now. He was very small. He reminded him of the time Gungun was born. She was a very little chubby baby. This boy was a little slimmer and smaller, just like Preet. They now had another angel in their lives. Preet extended his hand and slowly ran his finger along his son's cheek. He was soft like Meher. He didnt want to wake up so he moved his hand away.

Preet looked at Meher and went close to her. He kissed her forehead lightly. This gesture woke Meher up. She opened her eyes slowly. Preet looked at her big beautiful brown eyes. The were gleaming with happiness. He smiled at her and she smiled back. He saw a tear flowing from the corner of her eye and disappearing into her hair. He knew these were tears of joy. He could feel the same joy inside him. This baby was another proof of their love. He slowly laid his lips on top of her soft rosy lips. He kissed her softly. He whispered I love you in Meher's ear.

Meher looked at him and held his hand. She then looked at their child. He was the cutest just like Gungun and Preet. Preet saw Meher looking at the baby and knew that she wanted to hold him. He wanted the same. He went closer to his crib and picked him up in his arms carefully. Meher's eyes were glued to the baby. She saw him shifting into Preet's arms.

Preet carefully sat beside Meher on the bed. Meher sat up carefully. She looked at her little boy and kissed his cheek lightly. Preet looked at Meher and then at the baby. He transferred the baby into Meher's arms.

Meher looked at their boy. She kept staring at him. Preet wrapped his arms around Meher from behind. He rested his chin on Meher's shoulder and stared at the baby.

After a few minutes, Meher felt wet on her shoulder. She looked at Preet and saw him crying.

Meher(looking at Preet): Preet tum roo kyun rahay ho itna?
Preet(whispered while looking at the baby): ssshhh. Meher, Aman uth jayega.
Meher(confused): Aman?
Preet(smiled): tumne hamaray betay ka name Aman rakhna tha na.

Meher smiled at Preet for remembering the name. She looked at Aman and ligthly kissed him again.

After a few hours, the whole family came to see the baby and Meher. They were all very happy for the new family member.

After 20 years…

Meher was in the kitchen teaching Gungun how to cook. She heard a loud scream of Preet.

Preet: AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!

She ran out of the kitchen towards their room. She entered the room. She saw Preet in front of the dressing table. She went near him to enquire about the scream.

Meher: Preet, kya hua? tum itni zor se kyun chekhay?
Preet(holding his hair): Meher! dekho kya ho gaya! (he lowered his head towards Meher)
Meher(looking at Preet's hair confusingly): Preet kya hua?
Preet: Meher, white hair!
Meher(she looked closely and found a white hair): Preet, tum is ki wajah se itni zor se chillayay! dara dia tha tumne mujhe. aik hi to white hair hai.
Preet(looking at Meher in anger): aik hi?? Meher, tumhe to koi farq nahi parega na kyun ke tumhare to itnay saray white hair hai magar ab mere bhi…(Preet made a crying face and sat at the edge of the bed)
Meher(she sat beside Preet and put her hand on his shoulder): aray Preet tum itna kyun udaas ho rahay ho. tum white hair main bhi bauhat cute aur handsome lagogay (she pinched his cheek)

Preet looked at her sadly. Meher went closer to him and kissed his cheek. Preet smiled widely and hugged Meher. They were soon interrupted by Gungun.

Gungun(standing at the door of the room): ahem ahem! romance shomance!
Meher(breaking the hug and feeling shy): nahi..woh..
Gungun(she laughed at making her Mama feel embarrassed again. She moved her attention towards Preet): waisay Papa, app itni zor se chillayay kyun?
Preet(showing his head to Gungun): dekho Gungun, mera aik white hair.
Gungun (her eyes widened and she looked at his hair): Papaa! app meri shaadi main white hair le ker aayenge??(she sat beside Preet sadly)
Meher: oho Gungun, aik hi to hair hai aur tum itna overreact ker rahay ho!
Gungun: Mama app ko toi farq nahi parega na kyun ke app ke to itnay saray white hair hai(Meher and Preet looked at Gungun in shock. They were shocked to hear Gungun saying the exact words as Preet. This was another proof that this devil was Preet's daughter and exactly like him)

Soon Preet and Meher's other children also joined the trio to enquire about the screaming.

Aman: Papa app theek to hai?
Khushi: Papa, Gundi ne phir kuch kia kya? (Khushi, Preet and Meher's youngest daughter, looked at Gungun and narrowed her eyes)
Gungun(getting mad): tu ne mujhe phir gandi kaha!
Khushi: maine gandi nahi kaha. maine to Gun di kaha. (chuckling)
Gungun(getting up): main tujhe batati hun(she went towards khushi who was about to run away but Sapna, Khushi's twin, came in the way)
Sapna: aray app dono phir lar rahay ho. choro larayi ko. Papa, app ko kya hua tha?
Preet: Kuch nahi beta (smiling at his children) waisay tum log aj shopping kerne nahi jaa rahay the?
Sapna: jana tha Papa laikin didi khana pakanay chali gayi Mama ke saath. Woh aj jeeju aa rahay hai na (Sapna winked at Preet who laughed)
Gungun(Getting angry. she sat beside Preet again): Main us ke liye nahi bana rahi thi khana!
Preet: to humne kab kaha tum Manav ke liye khana bana rahi ho (they all laughed at this. Gungun felt embarrassed that all were teasing her)
Gungun: woh…woh… jao main app sab se baat nahi kerti!(showed everyone her tongue)
Preet(putting his arm around Gungun): Aray Gungun. tumhare itnay se din to bachay hai is ghar main aur us main bhi baat nahi karogi hum sab se? (he looked at her sadly)
Gungun(she looked at Preet and started crying. She immediately hugged him): Papa!

All the siblings and Meher joined the hug. Gungun was going to be married in a few days and they were all going to miss her very much. She was going to marry Manav.

Later in the evening, the house was busy in preparing for a dinner for Manav's family. Preet went to the mithai shop to get special mithai for the dinner and also get some of his favourite.

As he was returning from the shop, he was shocked to see someone. He stopped his car and watched for a while.


hehe 😈 so how was it?? plz comment😊 thanks for reading and commenting!! ❤️ i will hopefully update Jeenay ke isharay tomorrow😊
Edited by unknown18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
THANKS FOR UPDATING WEDDING FF,I JUST FINISHED READING IT,ITS FABULOUS👏 BUT ITNI JALDI ITNE BARE HO GAYE,REALLY FAST FORWARD
NOW THERE WOULD BE NO MORE ROMANTIC SCENES BETWEEN THEM😭
GOOD SURPRISE ELEMENT AT THE END.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey lovely update..but that was a huge leap😆...anyway still loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ur ending.............................
create alot of suspense,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
yr don't do tht plsssssssss
morovr luv the connection n fighting b/w brothers n sisters................
exactly as tht of mine with my bro n sis..........................
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Posted: 15 years ago
🤣🤣Preet gets a white hair n that too after 20 yrs of their marriage..................Funny bt unbelievable.............Ur quite inspired by Ekta i mst se!!!
All in all amazin...........Meet have 4 kids or are der even morehuh??......................I love ur work.........Chalo serial mein na sahi tumhari story mein toh atleast he's doin wat he sed("Main toh puri cricket team khadi kardunga!!")😆😉😛😳......Do conti asap!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
reserved ... m yet to read it bt the 1st thing I saw was aftr 20 yrs .. Sushant wouldn't lyk it !!! why not 5 ? 😔

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tht was the cutest part ever !! 😳 .. chota preeeeeeeeeeeeet .. m shoooo happy !!!!!!!!!
nd thn the 2nd part was tooooo cute nd funnny .. typical Preet who would cry bcoz of a white hair .. bt wait I'll tel Sush to read ths part, he'll kill you ! 😛
Gungun, the typical female version of Preet 😆 .. I loved their bond !! shweet papa-daughter scene .. thn the children coming one by one, I thought there were 11 bt u disappointed me nd Preet 😔 waise, how can u get Gungun marry Manav ??? Manav sirf Archu k liye !! 😉
nw u might get a bashan for ths frm the adda ppl 😉😆 .. ohhh nd in the last, I'm sure he met Ash .. ryte ? 😳 thn wht bout the other Junejas ? 😳
Edited by tasnime - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part
Aww they had a baby boy
Typical Preet reaction to the white hair
Hmm wonder who it was that he saw
Thanx for the PM

Look forward to the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow!! siddu fab' 👏 ff....loved it though I dnt know the characters...still it ws enjoyable.....Preet is quite the opp of Mannu.... scared of white hair 😆 m sure Mannu wld hve said chalo ye toh hona hi tha umar jo ho gayi hain 😆 nd Archu wld hve said aap preshan mat ho mere bhi kaafi saare hain 😆 the kids bonding scene ws cute as ws the hospital scene....nd 20 yrs leap omg!! typical Ekta hun....nd wat this Manav thing....Mannu only belongs to Archu....I hope he's only M's namesake 😛.
Looking forward to the next ⭐️

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