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Aradhna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

OMG, and update! *shocked muh*

my spot.

Love,
Radz

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

nice chapter!

well written.....waiting for the next one asap!

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Sarah

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Fabulous update Zahra 👏 👏 👏
beautifully written and l loved it!!!!!!!!!
Prem is so caring he wants to take the responsibilities as the father..Great
loved Premeer interaction...Heer invited him to company her in check up..that's is great
waiting for the next update

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

It was very Goood i think prem should take her ]

to his home and they both shuold live together or get marry.........

hmmmmmmmmmm lots of things are echoing in my mind anyways

i loved it it was very good

Plz update your FF as wellll

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Maha

@-Maha-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

really nice update dear love it continue soon plzzzz

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Nitty

@Nitty2910

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

wow!!! I really loved the update... so heer will allow prem to be part of the baby's life.. I seriously can't wait to read how the story continues....

eagerly waiting for the next chapter....

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

hiiiiiiiiiiiiii nice update finally heer allowed prem to be a part of their baby's life

plz update soon

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Magpie

@Magpie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Hey Zahra,
Happy Halloween to you too !!

Will get back to this.

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sia

@luv_kdmhmd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#79

Hey zahra

lovely update, in fact fantastic. The way you portrayed son and mother relationship was awesome and sweet, rather heart touching. Small gestures like prem keeping his head on her lap, she wiping his tears with her sarree's pallu was so good. What happened in prem's past because of his father, made me feel that he would have never abandon his child even though he may not be in love with heer. But in our case fate is also on the side of heer. He loves her too, soon he is going to have happy right?

So prem is not ready to give up, is he?😆 no matter what he will get his gal in his life, wont he?. Loved this update zahra, expecting a lot from you for the next post. Plz update soon and do pm me plz

Sia

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Fatima

@-Fatima-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#80

hi zahra sis
firstly sorry abt not editing my last comment i totally forget abt that these studies kept sooo busy *sigh*
back to comment it was amazing update.the way u potray prem & gayatri's relationship was fantastic.all emotions were superb.
Premeer part was also great
plz update soon.wait for the next.
luv
Fatima

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