Premeer FF 'Love Hurts' part 3 pg 15 21/11 - Page 11

Originally posted by: maha_k

hi dear hi maha

finally 😆😆 yeah i know 😳

but again short update fatz main maron gi tujhy seriously😡😆 i try but cant write more than that *sigh*

again amazing update👏👏.thanks 1st i was thinking that your story is somehow releted to desh after leap but now i am understanding it😳😳 oh u do good coz i dont know what i m writing 😳.its different but lovely yar heer behavior is confusing but looking like in past prem was at fault hmmm confusion😕😕

but again great update 😃👏and madam try to update long next time plzzz😊 ok i'll try to update long next time *hope so*

luv
fatima

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

Hi fatima great update. But it was very short but as you said we are with you, so when you are free then update. It was very touchy update, I wonder what happened between them that so much hatred have come between them. I hope san sach zaldi se samne aaye, aur sab theek ho jaye, I hope prem soon makes her believe in him.

hi sia
thanks for supporting really i never write anything first time so it gives me hard time but i'll try to update next long.
glad u like
try to update soon
luv
Fatima

Originally posted by: meeshi.

hii fatima

awesome update

pls update soon

add me in ur pm list plss

hi dear
glad u like
try to update soon
ok i'll add u in pm list.
luv
fatima

Originally posted by: -fsn-

hi sia
thanks for supporting really i never write anything first time so it gives me hard time but i'll try to update next long.
glad u like
try to update soon
luv
Fatima

i understand fatima completely

itni dair baad update kiya...
woh bhi itna sa...
me angry with you...
nice part it was...
plz continue soon with a longer one soon...

regards,
Suhana.

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

i understand fatima completely

even i suffer from this thing

so update when you are satisfied with your work

no rush

we can wait😃

and what are friends for, right?

thanks sia u r such a sweetheart.
yeah this writing is giving me tough time *sigh*
i m not satisfied with my writing till now hope for the best in future.
keep waiting 😆
luv
fatima

Thanks for all those who press like button & commented

luv
Fatima

Hi guys
hows u all doing?
dont get shocked i m updating early now i m free so i'll try to update frequently.
so without further bak bak here is the update.

Part 3


(heer runs out of the room crying hardly & prem was rooted at his place & thinking about when he first met with heer 6 years back)
When he first time met her how sweet<innocent she was.she only know to love peoples she dont know the meaning of hate.Now just because of him she change & she changed totally.

(note:heer's parents died when she was 10 after that she lives with her dadi in their village & now after her death she is coming to live with hr chacha & chachi
they have two childrens meher & angad.Angad is married to Kripa & meher is engaged to her fathers friend son Preet.They both r in love.Prem father was Balwant's friend but he & his wife gayatri died in an accident.Now prem lives alone & he is like family member with Maans.Preet, Angad & Prem r best friends.)

(flashback)

Prem was sleeping on his bed when his phone start ringing picks up his phone sleepily & after seeing the name he attend the call
Prem:hello
Man :hello chodo tell me where r u?we all r waiting for u?
Prem:why r waiting for me angad?
Angad:gosh prem urs memory is really very low u forget today my cousin sis is coming to live with us & then we have party so u r suppose to be here.
Preet is already arrived & there is no traces of u.aggar tum thodi dair mai nahi aye toh kripa & meher 'll kill u.
Prem:OMG mai toh bhool gaya tha.raat ko late night party mai tha so abhi so raha that u just wait for 30 mins.i'll be there.
Angad:Ok tum jaldi aao.Meri sis bhi aane hi waali hai.
Prem:ok i m coming

After disconnecting phone Prem goes to washroom for quick bath.After taking bath he dressed up in his casuals & goes to Maan mansion.As he enters Maan mansion in hurry when he collide with sometone.Before that person loose her balance he held her from her waist.Then when he saw the most beautiful face of the world.Black almond shpe eyes in which he want to drown.Then he see the awkwardness in those eyes at that time he realizes his position.Suddenly he heard Mehar cried.

Meher:Heer di r u alright.then she see prem.gosh prem bhaiyya ap aagayee asusual late
Prem:(in his mind so she is Heer Meher & Angad's cousin sis)
he came back to reality when he heard meher calling him
Meher:Prem bhaiyya kya hua?kahan kho gaye?
Prem comes back to reality he try to find that beautiful face then he saw her running upstairs.
Prem:kahin nahi meher.Angad aur preet kahan hain.
Meher:woh log andar aapka wait kar rahe hain.
Prem:Heer.............mumbled slowly


so its enough
wait for urs comments eagerly
i knw its crap
luv
fatima

finally😆😆