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Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey

awesum update

thankz for pm

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

hey Ashwarya,
how are you dear... m fine dear
first of all thanx alottt for dedicating this part to me. 😳....ya the pleasure is all mine
and nest sorry for being late to read and comment... this weekend i was busy with some family affairs...... its ok dear m happy that atleast u replied

and very nice update as ever...thanks for the flattering words haha sorry dont take it to ur heart ur words mean a lot to me
you really are a fab storyteller....hahaha m not a grandmother ok dont doubt i am still getting classes through u alls ffs trying to learn how to be better ????
awesome....

and dear this time you have to promise me that you will update asap...i l try mght be on wednesday and if not then on saturday
otherwise wait for your inbox to be flooded with , my pms...😉ur free to do that i l be happy

take care,u too
have fun...ya i l
love yalove ya 2
Suhana.aishwarya gayen

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey

awesum update

thankz for pm

Originally posted by: blueocean_787

Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very interesting..

Originally posted by: --Sarah--

Awesome update...loved it
can't wait for the next

Hi aishu

Hey first and foremost I loved your update. I loved my stay at simla. I took such vacation after a long time and I loved every moment of it. vahan barish bhi hone lagi, it was romantic weather there, but it was totally wasted. Kya karo prem saath nahi tha naa😉. But I am back and now please update soon. I am dieing to read what will happen next.

One thing is clear that prem's presence still has effect on heer. 😊Isn't it good sign? And it kills him to see her like this. Prem I hate you for what you did to her.😡 You better mend the things in a right way otherwise….well I will think about what to do with you if you don't listen to me.

I guess somewhere kashish has got a hint that prem has changed and good that she took preet out of the way, giving prem the chance that he wanted.

Song sequence was really good. And so were the expressions of prem and heer.

Ok that scene in parking lot was awesome. Hmmm I had a feeling that she didn't even give him a chance to explain. I believed what rishab said. But how can one do that yaar. I mean it so stupid to not believe the person you love rather believe the third person. But I guess rishab would have twisted the situation in such a way.

In the flashback, prem is so excited. Why do I have a feeling that it was rishab who came, well no marks to me for guessing that.🤣

Aishu I loved your update. It was great. Hey don't forget you have promised me to give premeer romantic scenes and that too in private. And you know what as much as you like to read my comments, in the same I love to read your replies to it. Keep up the good work. Aur isse pehle sab mujhe galiyan dena shuru kar de ki main itni late aayi hoon vapis, ki tune update nahi kiya, toh usse pehle update kar de. 🤣 just kidding sweety, mera haq hai na.😉

Love you

Sia

Originally posted by: meeshi.

hiiiiiiiiii update soon i m still waitinggggg

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

Hi aishu hi sia

Hey first and foremost I loved your update. I loved my stay at simla. I took such vacation after a long time and I loved every moment of it. vahan barish bhi hone lagi, it was romantic weather there, but it was totally wasted. Kya karo prem saath nahi tha naa😉. But I am back and now please update soon. I am dieing to read what will happen next.i am happy that u enjoyed there
haha weather romantiv hunnnn koi mila ky awaha
prem hota to main bhi chalti yaar par sirf prem ke liye harshad ke liye nahi kyunki main sirf prem ki diwani hun

One thing is clear that prem's presence still has effect on heer. 😊Isn't it good sign? And it kills him to see her like this. Prem I hate you for what you did to her.😡 You better mend the things in a right way otherwise'.well I will think about what to do with you if you don't listen to me.yathateffectonheermakesthestorypassionateandtemptated
hhaa tu soch ky akarna hai mian wahi karungi jo tu bolegi

I guess somewhere kashish has got a hint that prem has changed and good that she took preet out of the way, giving prem the chance that he wanted.yakasishwilmakepreetunderstandandrestuwillknow

Song sequence was really good. And so were the expressions of prem and heer.

u liked the song i was so tensed i didnt had anyone to help with it

Ok that scene in parking lot was awesome. Hmmm I had a feeling that she didn't even give him a chance to explain. I believed what rishab said. But how can one do that yaar. I mean it so stupid to not believe the person you love rather believe the third person. But I guess rishab would have twisted the situation in such a way.yaweshouldblveourlovebutsituationsaresomewhatnotinourhands

In the flashback, prem is so excited. Why do I have a feeling that it was rishab who came, well no marks to me for guessing that.🤣hahahahahahhahhah

Aishu I loved your update. It was great. Hey don't forget you have promised me to give premeer romantic scenes and that too in private. And you know what as much as you like to read my comments, in the same I love to read your replies to it. Keep up the good work. Aur isse pehle sab mujhe galiyan dena shuru kar de ki main itni late aayi hoon vapis, ki tune update nahi kiya, toh usse pehle update kar de.🤣 just kidding sweety, mera haq hai na.😉ya i will give romantic scenes in part 11 ok and i love ur replies and i feel glad to know u like my relpies and u read them even i have replied to ur ff which is full of nautanki bear it
koi meri dost ko gali de itni majal haaha
tu hi t meri dost hai ab mujhe babki frnds pakka gali denge hahahaa
tumhe har cheez ka haq hai dear

Love you

Sia

urgent note: if you ever thought about discontinue it, then you will have it from mee. you are encouraging me so much, and you yourself thinking about such stuff. go on sweety i love your writing.😊ya ya i l continue actuaaly i was dmoralized so maine woh likh diya and u r the best tu apne hi aacha likhti hai usme mera koi haat nahi ok