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Anisha Jayakumar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#861

i just finished reading ur FF now......and this was such a woderful update..... but the precap sounds scary.....
pls do add me to ur PM list and update soooooon..........

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Posted: 15 years ago

#862

Originally posted by: amu142

hmm....so Prem had knowingly arranged the party!

and Raj helped him out! gr8!

now wth has this Veera done this time...that Heer is so mad at Prem!

Just wait and Watch.

Thankyou for the comment baby 😳

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Anisha Jayakumar

@anishajk99

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Posted: 15 years ago

#863

hey i hope ul update it 2day itself.........

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Posted: 15 years ago

#864

Originally posted by: anishajk99
hey i hope ul update it 2day itself.........

Yaa i am almost done 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

#865

Originally posted by: topsyturvy23
awesome...
i am reallly loving this story...😊

Thankyouuuuuuu Dear 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

#866

Originally posted by: meeshti.
hiii
awesome update

it was soo ute and prem

prem flirts a lot

hihihihi

yeh veera phr aa gayi

pls update soon

Thankyouuu Dear 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

#867

Hii guys, Thankyou For all the comments and Thankyou for pressing the like button, really appricate it guys. Well anyways I am here with the update, hope you will like it. Here it is ....

Prem pulled Heer into the bathroom. Heer - "Preeeem." she said a bit shocked as he trapped her between the door and his arms. Prem - "Naraz kyun hoo?" He said looking at her. Heer - "Mein kab naraaz hoon?" she said looking back at him. Prem - "Paka." Heer raised her eyebrow. Heer - "Preeem." she siad trying to get out. Prem - "Kya Prem meiney kuch poocha hai?" He said as his breath touched her neck.

Gaytari - "Preeem." she said calling him. Heer - "Prem chodo Ma ... woh kya soochien ghee." she said pushing him away but he didnt let go. Heer - "Preeeem." she said panicking. Prem - "Pehlay bolo." he said seeming calm. Heer - "Kya?" she siad looking at him. Prem - "Naraz kyun hoo?" Heer - "Nahi hoon Prem." she said looking at him. Prem didnt seem convinced. Heer - "Prem." she said taking a deep breath and looking at him as he waited.

Heer - "Naraz hoon kyun kay tumney mera phone nahi utya, mujhe phone wapis nahi kiya, mujhe batya nahi kahaan thay tum, or .... Preem maa." Prem - "Or?" he said pinning her arms to the door. Heer - "Or ... Prem tum mujhe itna tang kyun kartay hoo, Aaj pata hai mein kitna parshaan thee tum itni late hoo gayi or ghar nahi ayay, Or uppar sey naa mujhe bataya tum thay kahaan, bolo. Maza ata hai mujhe tang karney mein, Pata hai meiney tumhein kitna miss kiya sara din, Or tum joo ...." Prem smiled. Prem - "Agar yeh pehlay bool deti tu kuch hoo jana thaa." He said looking at her. Heer - "Matlab?" Prem smiled.

Gaytari - "Preeem." she said calling him again. Heer - "Jayo Prem Ma Bula rahin hain." she said pushing him away. Prem smiled. Prem - "Hamary rishtey mein hamisha kisi ko kabab mein hadi bana hota hai." he said getting out.

Gayatri - "HEEER." she said yelling after 2 minutes Prem had gone. Heer rushed to her room. Heer - "Jii Ma?" she said coming in. Prem smiled sitting on the floor by Gaytari's lap. Prem massging her legs. Gaytari - "Beta meri Yellow Sari cupboard mein sey nikal kay zara press kardo." She said in as Heer nodded without looking at Prem. Prem watched as Heer worked.

Gaytari - "Mein tumharay bauji koo dood dhay kay ayi woh neechay kam kar rahay hain tum jayo or soo jayo." She said patting his cheek as she left. Prem smiled and nodded. Heer iroing Gaytari's cloths when Prem placed his hand around her bare waist and on chin on her shoulder. Heer - "Preem tumhein sharam nahi ati Agar Maa dekien ghee tu kya kahin ghee." she said pushing him away.

Prem - "meri biwi hoo yaar" he said standing beside her facing her. Gaytari - "Prem." she said walking in. Prem - "Jii Ma." Gaytari - "Tum ghaay nahi abhi tak ... Kyun Heer ko hamisha tang kartay hoo." she said as Heer smiled. Prem rolled his eyes and left the room. Gaytari got something and left. Heer put away her sari and noticed something beside Gaytari's bed. It was a small box. It was packed so Heer left it and went to her room.

Prem stood by the window looking out as Wind blew into his air. Heer closed the door as Prem turned around. Heer didnt bother looking at him, and just went to the cupboard taking out some cloths. Prem smiled. Prem - "Heer." But she didnt turn around. Prem took a deep breath with a smile and walked upto her.

As she was about to turn around he picked her up in his arms. Heer - "Prrreeeem." she said looking at him shocked. Prem laid her down on the bed and laid beside her with one arm acorss her stomach and one under her neck. Heer - "Preem." she said trying to get up but he pushed her down. Prem - "Heer meiney ab kya kiya?" he said looking at her as she looked away.

Heer - "Meiney kuch bolo?" Prem - "Tu bolo na ..." Heer looked at him serious. Heer - "Prem tum hamisha mujhe daratay or phir boltay hu mazak thaa ... Abb aaj jo kiya woh kya thaa haan? Sara din mujhe itna darya or phir arraam sey boltay hoo mazaak thaa, Prem mujhe pata kitna dar lagta hai jab tum bin bataay chalay jatay hoo, meray saath asa mazaak naa kiya karo ... mazaak bii hoo mujhe bohat dar lagta haii." She said looking away upset. Prem smiled and closed his eyes softly. He placed a finger under her chin and made her look at him.

Prem - "Agar mujhe pata hota tum itna meray baray mein parashaan hoti hoo ...." Heer cut in. Heer - "Prem meri zindagi, mera pyaar, mera sab kuch tumsey joda hai, Prem jab tum mujh sey door jatay hoo mera ek pal bii dil nahi lagta or ...." Gaytari knocked on the door. Gaytari - "Heer." She said as Heer got up. Prem laid back on the bed. Prem - "Arrey yaar koi or kaam nahi hai inko ... meri life todi sii romantic honey walay hoti hai tu aa kay sari karab kar detay hain." he said low enough so he could only hear. Heer went to Gaytari's room.

When Heer came back Prem was still on the bed, not changed. Heer turned around to close the door as Prem pulled her back by her waist. He hugged her tightily from the back. Prem - "Sorry." A small wispher came out of his mouth. Prem turned her around but Heer didnt look at him. Prem - "Heeeer." he said in a babyish voice. Heer looked at him. Heer - "Kya?" Prem frowned leaning his forhead on top of hers. Prem - "Promise Promise asa kabhi nahi karoon ghaa, Ab tu baath karo." He said softly as Heer looked at him.

Heer - "Paka?" Prem smiled. Prem - "KAcha." he said smiling as Heer pushed him away. Heer - "Preeeeem." He laughed slightily pulling her into a tight gentle hug.

Prem - "Ek baath batyoo, Hamari beti ho ghee ya beta." He said as Heer played with his hair while he rested his head in her lap. Both of them changed into their night suits. Heer - "Beti ... Acha wasay tumney batya nahi tum kahaan thaay sara din?" Prem smiled looking at Heer. Prem - "Office mein." He said laughing a bit.

Heer - "Acha jii ... Prem sure kisi lardki sey milney nahi ghaay thaay?" she said in a teasing voice. Prem looked at her surprised. Prem - "Jaa sakta thaa liken mein itna bii bura nahi hoon." Heer - "Ya." she said rolling her eyes. Prem - "Tu tumhein laga hai mein kisi lardki sey milney gaya thaa." Heer looked at him in a weird way.

Heer - "Or nahi tu kya jab ghar ayay thay tu tumhari neck pey lipstick ka neeshan thaa." She said in a upset voice. Prem looked at her shocked. Prem - "Kya?" he said sitting up. Heer - "Kyun Mr.Prem Mazak acha nahi lagta?" she said pinching his cheek. Prem looked at her as she laughed looking at his reaction. Prem couldnt help but smile. Prem - "Aab Mazak kya hota hai mein tumhein batyoo ghaa Mrs.Prem." Heer rolled her eyes.

Heer - "Ya ya." she said as she laid down. Prem shook his head and laid down with his back towards her. Heer hugged him from the back placing her cheek on top of his. Heer - "Mazak samjho yaa sachiyi par tum par sirf mera haq hai, sirf mera." she said as Prem smiled. Heer kissed his cheek softly as Prem took one of her hands in his. Heer and Prem drifted to sleep in the same poistion as the night started to fade away.

PreCap

Same as last time on Pg.130

Okay guys thats it for now ... This is a gift before the whole Drifting apart, and Veera's plan starts so i just gave you guys a little part with Premeer only so hope you enjoyed but from next chapter Its Veera's Track. Well looking forward to comments and thoughts about this chapter. Dont forget to press like button. Love Ayysha

Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago