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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: heer.maan786

ayesha plz update soon dear..eagerly waiting

Okay dear 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Nitty2910

interesting... wonder wat is veera upto now..... I hope Prem understands her.....

waiting for the next update...

Thanks nitty will do 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Next Part

Heer woke up breathless. She ran her hands threw her hair and looked around. She was in her bedroom. She took a deep breath realizing it was a dream. She probably fell asleep while she layed down. *Okay so if your confused the dream started from where Meher phones and tells her that Nihaal had an accident and after that till the ending of last part.* She got up from the bed and went to the bathroom.

Gaytari - "Heer." she said walking in to the room. Gaytari - "Heer." she called again. Heer - "Ji Ma." she siad coming out of the bathroom. Gaytari smiled and walked upto her. Gaytari - "Heer beta yeh lo." she said handing her some parsad. Heer smiled and took. Gaytari - "Chalo tum taaki hoi hoo gee arram karo." she siad patting her cheek and leaving. Heer smiled and ate the parsad.

Rohan - "Mama." he said walking into the room while Heer was cleaning the dresser. Heer - "Haan." she siad turning around. Preet came chasing Rohan as he went and hugged Heer's legs. Heer smiled hugging him. Preet - "Oye chicken." he said picking up Rohan and taking him. Heer let out a slight laugh. Heer smiled getting back to work as her phone rang.

Heer - "Haan aab kya?" Prem - "Attitude kahaan sey aa gayi ma'am." Heer - "Tumhari patni hoo kuch tu sikhna hi thaa." she said sitting on the bed. Prem - "Kya kar rahi thee?" Heer - "Kuch nahi bus cleaning, tum batyo tumhein office mein koi kaam nahi hota kya?"

Prem - "Ab tumhari yaad itna saatati hai mein kya karoon." Heer - "Koi flirt karna tumsey sikay." PRem - "Chalo kisi cheez mein tu acha hoon." Heer smiled. Heer - "Ghar kab ayo ghaay?" Prem - "Kyun?" Heer - "Wasay hii." Prem - "Phir bii." Heer - "Matlab?" Prem - "Miss kar rahi hoo na." Heer - "Prem sapnay deeakna chord do." Prem played around with a small ball in his hands.

Prem - "Aaj late hoo jayi ghee kaam bohat hai issliye." he siad in a funny way. Heer - "Phir bii kitnay bajay." Prem - "Umm ... 10 - 11:00pm." Heer - "Itni late." she said in a low voice. Prem smiled. Prem - "Ab tu admit kardo miss karo ghee." he said laughing. Heer - "Bye Prem." Prem - "Arrey mein mazaak kar raha thaa ... chalo na miss karo, mein tu karleta hoon." Heer - "Teeak hai tum miss karo mujhe ma bula rahi hai." she said hanging up.

Meher - "Didi." she said coming into her room. Heer - "Haan Meher." Meher - "Didi Raj bhahia ki aaj bohat important meeting thee or unko contratc mil gaya hai tu unhoon ney hum sab ko jiju ky hotel bulaya." she said sitting beside. Heer smiled and nodded.

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Gaytari - "ab chalo." she said hitting PReet on the arm as he started the car. Preet smiled. Rohan sat in Heer's lap and Meher beside them. Lalit in the front and Gaytari in the back. It didnt take long to get their. When they reahced the main hall was decorated. The whole family was greeted specially. Prem stood beside Raj in the back with a drink in his hand. As soon as Heer stepped in it felt like someone just punched his chest.

He looked at Heer laughing with PReet as they laughed looking at a couple. She wore a black sari with black heels and matching jewellary. Heer saw Prem staring at her but was disturbed by Raj walking towards her. Prem smiled and walked to his family. Heer - "Congrats bhaihia." she said hugging him as he smiled. Raj was happy to see Rohan too.

The whole family was busy with Raj and friends. Heer was standing by the corner becuase of the noise she felt kinda parniod and tired. Prem - "Mein tumhein miss nahi kar rahi." he siad walking behind her and whispering in her making a girly voice. Heer smiled looking at him.

Heer - "Oh please mein anay nahi wali thee .... Ma ney mujhe force kiya." PRem looked at her smiling. Prem - "Ya thats what they all say ... but good thing you came." He said in naughty way. Heer frowned looking at him. Heer - "Matlab?" PRem - "Kya?" he said smiling and drinking his water. Raj - "Can i have your attention." he said standing up in the front of the crowd.

Raj - "This party isnt only for my contract suecuess but for something way bigger .... i actually had no idea until this afternoon." Heer looked at Prem who was still smiling. Raj - "This party is mostly dedicated to Mr and Mrs.Prem Juneja." he said as the crowd clapped. Heer turned bright red as everyone stared at her. Heer - "Prem tum aaj anhi bacho ghaay." she said realzing what was happing.

Raj - "MEri Behan Heer Ma Banay wali hai or Mr.Prem baap." He said as the cloud cheered and Juneja's mouth hung open. Heer tired to hide the embarssment and nervouness. Prem - "congrats Mrs.Prem Juneja." he siad softly to her. Heer - "You know i hate you." Prem - "I know." Everyone clapped and congrated them. The juneja's were beyond happy, although still shocked.

Heer - "Ma Prem ko deeka hai?" she said asking Gaytari about an hour later. Gaytari - "Pata nahi beta ... shayad apni cabin mein hoo ghaa." Heer smiled and went upstairs. Prem wasnt anywhere, not his cabin or anyone else's. Heer - "Prem kahan ho tum?" she said getting tired of seraching for him. Meher - "Didi chalein." she said coming from the back. Heer - "Haan mein bus PRem....." Meher - "Woh Prem jiju kahin ghay hain." Heer - "Tumhein batya?" Meher - "Haan." she said pulling Heer. Heer looked annoyed. Why didnt he tell her.

Soon the sun went down and the day had passed and still Prem hadnt called or anything. No one seemed to care like they knew where he was but Heer was bothered every second thinking about where he was. The darker it got the more worried she got.

Gayatri - "Heer kya hua?" she siad looking at Heer lost. Heer - "Me 11 baj ghaay hein Prem abhi tak nahi aya." she said in a sad voice. Prem - "Nahi." he said walking down the hall talking on the phone. Gaytari - "Yeh lo aaa gaya." Prem hung up and walked into the room and saw Gayatri and Heer. Gaytari - "Prem kahaan thay Heer kitna parshaan hoo rahi thee." Prem tired to hide his smiled as Heer looked at him angry.

Prem - "Ma meiney bola thaa mein ate ayoon ghaa ... kyun Heer." he said in a teasing voice. Heer gave a glare. Gaytari - "Chalo tum dono aab soo jayo late ho gayi hai ... or Heer tumhari medicine meiney table pay rakdi hai." she said patting her cheek. Prem - "Kud nahi laa sakti thee kya?" he said sofly. Heer - "Ma dekien ab..." Gaytari - "Prem. " Prem - "Ma mein sahi tu bool raha hoon apna kam kud karna chiye ... ab wasay bii exsersize ki zaroorat hai." Heer gave him a killer look. Prem - "Doctor ney bola thaa." Gaytari - "Prem kyun tang kartay hoo meri bahu ko." she said smiling at their arguements.

Gaytari left Premeer alone. Prem - "Bohat parshaan thee." he said in teasing voice. Heer - "Apnay ap ko lucky samjho meiney tumhein kuch kiya nahi abhi tak." she said taking his coat. PRem - "Meiney kaha thaa mein kate hoon ghaa." Heer - "Haan pata hai." Prem - "Tu phir aap parshaan kyun hoo rahi thee." said leaning against the cupboard watching her put his stuff away. Heer - "Meiney bus poocha thaa parshaan nahi thee." Prem smiled taking the towel from her as he stood by the bathroom door. Heer was about to walk away when he grabbed her bare wasit, pulling her in.

Precap

Heer - "Prem." she said walking into his cabin as he turned around shocked. Heer looked angry and confused. Veera rolled her eyes as Prem stood up shocked to see Heer. Prem - "Heer tum?" he said softly as Heer looked at him with tears in his eyes. Heer - "Jhoot bola thaa tumney." She said talking to Prem. Veera - "I'm out of here." she said leaving.

Prem - "Heer meiney...." Heer - "Jhoot ... pehlai baar tumney mujhe jhoot kaha or woh bii asi baath chupany kay liye." she said a bit angry. Prem - "Heer tum samjhnay kii koshish karo ... mein tumhein parshaan nahi karnaa chata thaa." Heer gave a fake smile. Heer - "Isslye meray sey jhoot bola." She said walking in front of him. Prem - "Mein tumhein nahi bata sakta thaa." Heer - "Koshish kartay tu shayad, agar batna chatay shayad liken tumney nahi batya."

Okay peeps thats all for now, hope you liked it .... looking forward to your thoughts. Do press like button and dont forget to comment. Love Ayysha

Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

hmm....so Prem had knowingly arranged the party!

and Raj helped him out! gr8!

now wth has this Veera done this time...that Heer is so mad at Prem!
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG luveedd itt just luv the way prem will doo anything to get heer to admit that she misses him just as much and i just luv the Gmom in this shes such a mom OMG
GREAT JOBB
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update.
Looking forward to the next one.
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Posted: 15 years ago
great



thanx 4 the pm


update soon



Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome
waiting for next update
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update... so prem kept the party for heer... sweet.... wat is this veera upto now????
waiting for the next part...

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