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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

great part ayysha


sooooooooo cute



loved it



update soon


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: heer.maan786

lovely...awesome..................


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Har_is

Awesome part ayysha


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: luvharsh

aww sho shweet ...really nice part keep it up :)



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: srikrithi

YAY!!!!!!!!!! [:D/] 👏 HEER IS PREGNANT 🥳 🥳 🥳 THANKS THANKA THANKS. 😳 great update. 😊


Aww Thankyouu Glad you liked it and wish we get a chota Prem soon 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nuptalie

Awww so sweet ..
Great part.
Update the next part soon


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Posted: 15 years ago

Thanks crystal 😳
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Originally posted by: meeshti.

hiiii ayysha

awesome update
sooo cute
update soon


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Posted: 15 years ago
Thankyouuuuuu So Much Guys =)
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hii Guys Sorry i havee been busy so never got time to update ... plus my wrist hurt really bad so couldnt but finally it feels ALOT better *Thankyou for the prayers* .... so decided to update.

Next Part
Prem - "Preet hum teeak hain ... ma or bauji kasay hain." he siad standing by the balcony as Heer came out of the bathroom throwing her dirty cloths into the laundry basket. Prem turned around as soon as he heard a voice. Preet - "SAb teeak hain ap bhabi ko phone do." Prem smile giving the phone to Heer and pulling her by the waist hugging her from the back. Heer - "Hello." Preet - "Hello shello bhabi jii." Heer - "Preet sugar kam kaya kar."

Preet - "Yaar bhabi aap itni fun ho or PB itnay BORING." Heer laughed slightly. Prem - "Preet mujhe sab sun raha hai." he said into the phone. Preet - "Tu bhabi ko chodo naa ... hamish bahoon mein raka hota hai." He said laughing. Heer tried to push Prem away as he kissed the part below her ear holding her tightly from the waist. Heer - "Preet ma bauji kasay hain." she siad trying to get out of Prem's arms. Heer - "Chodo." she wispered so low so Preet wouldnt here. Prem - "Kyun?" he said wispering his her ear holding her by the waist.

Preet - "Bhabi sab teeak hain ... acha woh Raj bhai ka phone number change ho gaya hai ... aap naya number liik kain." Heer - "Haan PReet doo mintue." Heer - "Prem paper." she said still trying her best to get out. Prem - "Kyun?" Heer - "Preeem." Preet laughing hearing them over the phone. Preet - "Bhabi mein apko text kar doon ghaa ... aap PB ko kush karin." he siad laughing and hanging up. Heer - "Yehlo ... ab woh kya sooch raha hoo ghaa." she siad hanging up. Prem - "Soochnay doo ... jab uski shaadi hoo ghee ... phir deeak lena." He said while his nosed traced along her cheekbone.

Heer - "ACha Preet ney kya kaha?" Prem - "Kiskay baray mein?" Heer - "Preeem." she said as he teased. PRem laughed. Prem - "Meiney batya hii nahi ... surprise naam bii koi cheez hoti hai yaar." Heer - "acha tu surprise app batiyn ghaay ya bagwaan." Prem - "Tum kis liye hoo." Heer - "Deeakney ghaain." she said as his lips touched her cheek.
Prem - "Acha ma'am ab ready hoo jayo ..." Heer - "Kaha jana hai?" Prem - "Kal tu kah ... 'Prem eilfle tower jana'." he said making a girly voice. Heer - "Oh hello .. mein asay baath nahi karti." she said getting out of his arms and going to the cupboard.

Prem smiled as Heer stood in front of the dresse fixing her hair looking into the mirror. Prem got off the bed, and watched Heer apply perfume on her and light makeup. Prem put his hands around her waist placing his chin on her shoulder. Prem - "Kyun ... Perfect Couple." he said looking the mirror, Heer smiled.


Prem - "Chalo." he siad taking her hand as she put the west on. Heer wore skinnes with flat and a collar shirt with a vest and her hair open with a pin holding the bangs together. Prem wore jeans and a Black t-shirt. Both of them left the room as Heer grabbed her purse and locked the door.


The took a cab half way and then decided to walk. Prem - "Yeh lo." he siad giving her a ice cream cone. Heer - "Prem ... Kitna pyara hai na." she said looking at a park filled with showers. Prem - "Heer har 2 minute roko ghee na tu kabhi tower pay nahi pooncho ghee." he siad putting his hand in hers pulling her away. Both of them spent the walk talking. When they reached the tower Heer was exusted.


Heer - "Prem bus ... ab orr nahi chala jata." Prem - "Tu ma'am jab cab mein thaay tab 'Nahi Prem hum chaltay hain'." he said again with a girly voice. Heer - "Preeem." she siad sitting on the bench. Prem - "Ab shure karlo apna emotinol attachar." he siad sitting beside. Heer - "Tum kitnay buray hoo."


PRem - "Shaadi nahi karni thee." Heer - "Tum itnay naraz kyun hotay hoo." Prem - "Tumharay saath rah rah kay habit ban gayi hai." Heer - "Ab mujhe rolna hai kya?" Prem - "Koi nahi baath nahi hai ... tum tu har ek baath pay ronay lag pardti hoo."

Heer looked away from him as he smiled. Prem - "Heer." he said looking at her, but she didnt look at him. Prem - "Heer ... Sorry .." He said sweetly. Heer - "Ab emotinol attachar koon kar raha hain bolo?" she said looking at him. Prem - "Acha meri ma ab chalo." he siad pulling her up. Heer - "Prem mein nahi chal sakti."


Prem - "Teek hai mein ut..." Heer - "Nahi Nahi .... chalo." she siad as Prem smiled. Prem put his arm around her waist kissing the side of her head, Heer out her arm behind his back as both of them went into the eilfe tower.

Both of them went threw the staris since the elavtor was booked and there was such a big line. The stairs took forever, Heer was about to cry but held her self ... since she didnt wana make a big drama. When they reached the top both of them leaned against the bars.


Heer - "I hate you for brining me here." Prem - "I wasnt the one who wanted to come." He said running his hands threw his hair. Heer drank water and handed it to Prem.

About 30mins later both of them enjoyed the view. Heer stood in front of Prem holding the bars as he stood with his arm around her and on her hands that were on the bar. All of couples were standing like Premeer some more closer and some farther apart. Heer - "Kitna pyara hai na." she said looking at view. Prem smiled seeing her happy. Prem - "Heer." Heer - "Hmm." They talked while they went down.

AS they came down stairs, When they were about to leave they saw a little boy laughing and running towards someone. Kid - "Papa .... look." A little boy passed Prem runing to his dad. Dad - "Shutup ..." he siad to his wife in a low voice but Heer and Prem turned. Kid - "Papa look ... i won a bear." he siad showing a bear.

Prem smiled as Heer smiled watching Prem's reaction. Dad - "Look ... i have this piece of crap behind my back and you." he siad to the kid. Girl - "More then that ... PApa Mama ... for god sakes i am only 23 stop insulting me stupid kid." Dad - "Who are his parents ... stupid kid has been around us for 3 days now .. we took him home and now he thinks he is ours." he said as the kid teared up.

Girl - "Who wants him ... such a annoying brat." She said flipping her hair. Prem looked sad as he saw the kid crying. Dad - "Now listen Rohan ... stay here ... me your mom are leaving we'll be back in a few hours ... get that dum brain." Heer looked shocked hearing his name. The parents looked up and PRemer looked away all of sudden. Heer - "How disgusting." she siad in anger. Prem - "Dil karta hai jaan sey mar doon ... Stupid bas***d." he said looking away from Heer.

The elders left as the kid sat on the bench crying. Heer - "Prem." she siad pointing to the kid. Prem smiled and walked upto him sitting beside. He looked about 3-4 years old. He was very cute and adorbale. Rohan - "Do you know where my mummy and daddy are?" he said talking to the bear. Heer sat in front of him.

Rohan looked at Heer crying. Heer - "Hii." she said wiping his tears. Rohan smiled. Rohan - "Hi." Prem - "Whats your name?" Rohan - "Rohan ... and yours?" PRem - "Prem and this is Heer." Heer smiled. Rohan - "Do you know where my mom and dad are?" The smiled faded from Prem's lips. Prem - "Come with me." he said holding his hand and picking him up his arms as Rohan smiled. Heer smiled and walked along.

Prem Heer and Rohan had Lunch together. Prem bought Rohan big teddy bears and candy. All of the had fun. Heer mostly watched Rohan laugh and smile. Prem and Heer waited for his parents to come back, but they didnt. IT was already 10:00pm and they werent back yet. Rohan was lying on the Bench with his head in Heer's lap.


Heer didnt know when he fell asleep. Prem - "Heer mein tumhein or Rohan ko Hotel chord deta hoon .... i'll go to the poilce station and see who's son he is?"

Heer - "Liken Prem ... hum Rohan koo asay todi..." PRem - "Heer mein police station jaa raha hoon naa ... tu agar kisi ney missing report dii hai tu hum Rohan ko wapis deeay dhein ghaay." Heer nodded. Prem picked Rohan up in his arms.


Heer - "Wasay kitna cute hai na." she siad holding Prem's hand that was free. Prem smiled. PRem - "Bohat ... liken becharay kitnay gantay logoon kay haath lag gaya thaa." Heer shook her head.

Prem dropped Them off at the hotel and left. Heer placed him on the bed and put the blanket over him. She placed all of his toys on the sofa. Heer changed into her night gown. She layed on the bed beside ROhan. Heer storked his forhead and cheek.


She didnt know when she fell asleep. Her arm around him and head just beside his. Prem walked in and smiled seeing them sleeping. He got changed and looked around for room to sleep since the bed was taken.

Heer - "Prem." she said sitting up. She got up from the bed walking to him. Prem - "Hmm." Heer - "Kya hua?" Prem - "Heer kisi ney missing child report nahi liki ... or woh jo tower kay pass thay woh uski koi realtive thaay isliye yeh unkay saath thaa ... liken jab unko meiney atay hua deka woh kehnay lagay ka uskay ma baap ko woh nahi chiye isslye kud pata nahi kahaan hain ... or woh kah rahay thaay hamien bii nahi chiye." Heer looked at Prem shocked as he ran his hands threw his hair.


Prem - "Arrey agar bacahy koo sambalna nahi hota tu bith hii kyun detay hain?" he siad going into the balconey in anger. Heer went to him placing her hand on his shoudler. Prem - "Ab kya ... hum issey asay tu nahi chord saktay." Heer walked in front of him. Prem - "Those bloody basterd...." he said hitting the door with his hand clunching it hard.
Prem turned to Heer who looked sad with a tear in her eye.

Prem put his arms around her hugging her from the side. Heer - "Prem hum kya karin ghaay ... i dont want to throw him away ... like his parents". Prem - "Heer dont worry ..." he stopped when his phone rang.

Raj - "Prem kasa hai?" Prem took the phone inside expalning everything to Raj and about Rohan expect that Heer was pregnent. Raj - "Prem Heer ko phone doo." Heer - "Ji bhahia." Raj - "Heer tum dono Rohan ko adopt karlo." Prem turned around shocked to hear what Raj just said. Heer looked at Prem who was looking at Rohan. Raj hung up and so did Heer.

Precap


Heer - "Kabhi nahi." she said when both of them were sitting on the grass. Prem hugging Heer from the back and lips at her bare shoulder. Prem - "Ek baar ... meray liye." Heer smiled playing with Prem's hand while blush appered on her cheeks. Prem watched her smiling because for the first time she blushed in front of him and he saw. Prem kissed her cheek. Prem - "Bas Ek baar." he said smiling as Heer looked down blushing.

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Rohan - "Papaaaa." he said yelling across the street letting go of Heer's hand. Prem - "ROhaan." he said yelled as Rohan crossed the busy street without looking but luckily he made to the other side without getting hurt. Rohan hugged the man while he tried to push him away. Guy - "OMG him again." he siad pushing him away.

PRem - "Is he your son?" Guy - "He was .... and how is he with you." Prem - "I am adopting him ..." Guy hugged Prem pushing Rohan away. Guy - "Thankyou and if you need anything let me know ... i just need him out of my life .... you see i re-married and if my new wife finds out i have a son she'll leave." Prem looked furious but controlled him self. The guy walked away as Rohan tried to go to him but Prem stopped him picking him in his arms.

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Lalit - "Prem bohat acho baath hai ... Rohan hamray parivaar ka naya hissa ban kay rahay ghaa." He siad placing a hand on Rohans cheek. Prem smiled and hugged Lalit.

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Prem span her around by placing a hand under her pallu and on her bare stomach. He slammed Heer into the wall, stamping his self against her. Prem - "Meiney kaha thaa na." he said as his hand went behind her neck bringing her face closer to him. Heer - "Prem." she said pulling back before he kissed her. Prem looked at her shocked. Heer - "Prem ... mujhe bohat dar lag raha hai." she said pushing him away gently.

Prem looked at her confused. Heer turned away from him as tears rolled down her cheek. Prem turned her around. Prem - "Heer tum roo kyun rahi hoo?" He said as his hand was around her bare waist. Heer pushed his hand away from her waist moving away from him crying. Prem looked at her shocked. Prem - "Heer." he said in a low voice as she held the bed side crying.

Hope you guys liked it ... Looking forward to your thoughts .... Press like button ... and dont forget to comment.

I wan LONG comments for this update

Love Ayysha

Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago

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