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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome loved it do continue soon thanks for the pm me 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago

First and foremost thank god that u decided not to end it, bcos I know that ff has a special place in everyone's heart. And to prove me right you wrote such a wonderful update, I loved it just as I liked the way you presented their first suhaag raat. Glad it was natural that they came so close to each other. It was soo good. And I have no words to describe this update, it was awesome, loved the way prem romances with heer, and she cares about him, though u made miss honeymoon scenes but no problem bcos you will make us read about their stay in Paris….their second honeymoon. Loving the way your story is going ahead….thanx ayysha for continuing it

Love you

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Posted: 15 years ago

Next Part

Hii guys I just wana focus on this FF right now because I wana make this FF good as the others ones. I know this FF's isn't great and all but I wana make it good so you guys like It.

Here Is the next part …

Next morning

Heer woke up early since she did pooja with Gaytari everyday. Prem slept late, since he had no work what was the whole point of getting up. Everyone had ate breakfast and left to their works. Gaytari, Heer and Preet were the only ones home today also Prem who still slept in his room.

Gaytari – "Heer Prem ko uthoyo … kitna time hoo gaya hai." She said while Heer and her cooked in the kitchen.

Heer – "Jii ma." She said smiling and washing her hands.

She dried her hands and walked out.

Preet – "Bhabi kabhi tu bhahia sey door rah liya karo hamisha romance hi app dono ko ata hai." He said watching t.v and talking to Heer while she walked upstairs.

Heer – "Jab teri shaadi hoo ghee naa tu phir mujhe batna Mr.Smarty." Preet laughed as he switched channels on t.v.

Premeer's room

Heer walked in looking at Prem sleeping.

He was sleeping side ways, his arm where she was laying, his hair messy and looking cute, most of all he looked like a greek god.

She smiled and went around the bed.

She pulled the blanket off of him.

Heer – "Janu utho." She said folding the blanket.

Prem – "Mein koi 2 saal ka bacha hoon jo meri maa ki taran mujhe Prem utho bool rahi hoo." He said opeing his eyes a bit.

Heer – "Tumhari maa nay hi beja hai mujhe." She said placing the blanket on the bed.

Prem – "Kya hai yaar aj tuu sonay doo … zindagi bar nahi arram sey soya."

Heer – "Tu issmein meri kya galti hai." She said cleaning the side table.

Prem – "Meiney kaha tumhari galti hai."

Heer – "Haan." She said throwing something in the trash bin.

Prem sat up stretching a bit and running his hands threw his hair.

Heer – "Chalo change karlo." She said getting him a new kurta from the closet.

He smiled getting of the bed. Heer handed him the kurta, and cleaned the room while he took a shower.

Prem – "Jaan towel."

Heer – "Janu andar hain na."

Prem – "Nahi hai." He said smiling.

Heer – "ACha 2 minute."

She gradded the towel from the dresser chair and went to the bathroom door.

Heer – "Yeh loo." She said knocking on the door.

Prem opened the door but instead of pulling the towel he pulled her in shutting the door behind.

He was wearing his dress pant but not a shirt.

Heer – "Prem…" she said as Prem smashed her into the wall.

Heer – "ma mera wait kar rahi hain."

Prem – "Arrey yeh koi nayi baath woh tu meri dushman hai jab deko meri patni ko lay jati hain." Heer rolled her eyes giving him a serious look.

Heer – "Prem chodo naa." She said trying to get out of his grip.

PRem – "Nahi chodon ghaa." He said making a kiddesh voice.

Gaytari – "Heeer KAHAN RAH GAYI TU." She said yelling from the kitchen.

Prem – "arrey yaar." He said looking annoying.

Heer – "Ab tu codo." She said in a cute toon. Prem let go looking annoyed as ever. Heer smiled walking out.

When she was about to leave she saw Prem in the bathroom doing the buttons on his shirt. He didn't look happy, he looked annoyed.

Heer knew that they never got to spend time with each other, everyone would call or disturb them. She would get annoyed but she knew that they all needed eachother in this house, but when Prem was sad it made her sad.

Heer also wanted to spend time with him … just him … ALONE and not some where with people or family members around them.

She left the room.

AS she walked down the hall she stopped when she saw the picture wall.

Preet, Prem, Gaytari, Lalit, Heer, Raj, Meher … and Nihaal, Veera.

When she saw a picture of her and Veera eating ice cream in school days a tear rolled down her cheek.

She shouldn't be upset because if her and Veera didn't seprate she would never be able to get her janu. But did he feel that way.

Did he regret losing his lil sis for Heer or was he happy with whatever happened.

More then Veera Heer missed her brother. The brother who always made her happy but when she needed him the most he gave up on her.

Heer didn't know but tears were rolling down her cheek. She also knew that Nihaal and Veera were wrong, it wasn't her fault that she fell in love and nothing could change that but they tried to. Her brother tried to take her love away from her, he tried to take her life away from her.

Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder and wiped them as fast as she could.

She turned around and saw Gaytari smiling.

Heer – "Ma … woh."

G3 – "Beta joo bii hua achay kay liye hua … or jab un dono ko apni galti ka ehsaas hoo jayay ghaa woh kud wapis ayin ghaay tum deeak lena." She said patting her cheek.

Heer gave a weak smiled, and pulled Gaytari into a hug.

Both of them went down stairs and prepared lunch … Prem and PReet had fun together playing video games.

Later Raj came to since He hadn't seen Heer for a long time.

Raj – "Prem acha tu contract paka hoo gaya."

PRem – "Haan raj … yaar woh jo interview walay thay koi pagal hii thay sawal pay sawal or jab mein jawab deta tu hasney lag pardtay." Raj shook his head drinking water.

Raj – "Heer woh Meher kii koi party hai dheli walay ranch mein or usseney kaha thaa tum or Sapna ana."

Heer – "Kasi party?"

Raj – "Pata nahi … yug ki birthday kay baray mein kuch bhool rahi thee."

Heer – "Oh haan sach Sapna ka phone aya thaa."

All of them talking. Heer sitting beside Gaytaari, Prem beside Raj.

Raj – "Acha mein chalta hoon … office jana hai." He said getting up and taking a piece of paper out of his pocket and looking at Heer.

Prem knew this was something private so he asked Gaytari to give him something to eat.

Both of them left and Raj placed a hand on Heer's cheek.

Raj – "Heer kya hua kuch udaas lag rahi hoo … Prem or tumharay …"

Heer – "Nahi bhahia asa kuch nahi hai." She said smiling.

Raj – "Prem bii udaas lag raha kya baat hai?"

Heer – "Bhahia kuch nahi hai." She said as he patted her cheek.

Raj – "Prem bohat acha lardka hai … badi kushnasseb hai jo Prem jasa pati mila hai tujhe." Heer smiled and nodded, because she was lucky, Prem was the best pati ever.

Raj – "Acha yeh teray liye aya hai … pata nahi meiney pada nahi bus yahi lika hai ONLY FOR HEER." He said handing her the envolpe.

Heer smiled and took it.

Raj – "Chalo mein chalta hoon." He said kissing her forhead.

Heer smiled and hugged him.

Soon Raj left and Heer cleaned up.

Prem continued with his video games as Gaytari and Heer sat in G3's room looking at clothing Raj had brught for them from London.

Heer – "Yeh wali ap pay bohat achi lagay ghee maa." She said showing her a pink sari.

Prem – "HEEEEEEEER." He said yelling from down stairs.

Heer – "AYYYII … ma mein ati hoon." Gayatri smiled.

Heer left but dropped the envelope on the ground, with out knowing it was open, a few pictures fell out.

Gaytari picked them up, and got hell shocked.

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Heer – "Kya hai?" she said walking down the stairs.

Prem – "Mera phone nahi mil raha." Heer saw it on the kitchen counter.

Heer – "Woh raha." She said going to the kitchen.

Prem – "Thanks … oh haan mein Preet kay saath koi shopping kay liye jaa raha hoon." He said as Heer gave him he phone.

Heer – "Acha Prem mein sooch rahi thee kay aj hum dono kahin bahar chalin."

Prem – "Kahan?" he said acting as if he didn't care but smiling from inside.

Gaytari – "HEEEEEEER."

Heer – "Mein ayi."
She said running upstairs. Prem clinched his fists.

Prem – "Yeh mera parivaar pata nahi kyun romance sey allergic hai." He said looking angry.

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When Heer walked into Gaytari's room she her looking at cloths.

Heer – "Jii Maa." she said walking upto her.

Heer – "Ma kya hua?"

Gaytari – "yeh kuch ghir gaya thaa." She said handing the paper to her.

Heer smiled and took it.

Heer,

You must be really happy to take over my money and my family.

Bohat maza aa raha hoo ghaa na meray bhai ki biwi ban kar uskay pasoon sey kehlna … but you better stay away from my family or else I will destroy your life and make it hell understand that.

Pyaar … what ever … you made my brother fall into your fake trap but I will make him understand that you like his money and I WILL make your life hell Mrs.Juneja.

Veera

Heer stood their shocked but controlled her tears.

Heer – "Ma ujhe apni dost ko phone karna hai." Gaytari nodded as Heer left.

Heer went to her room and read the letter over and over again.

How could Veera think that, how could she?

Heer locked the door and layed on her bed with tears rolling down her cheek.

*************
Night

Prem and PReet came home after about 5 hours with nothing in their hands. Heer was so shocked she barley spoke and didn't meet Prem's gaze because as soon as she would he would ask her what was wrong and she wouldn't be able to lie.

Heer couldn't tell him the truth either because he would be upset.

Tonight she wasn't gonna think about Veera, she was going to spend the night in Prem's arm and talk about everything they missed out for the last 3 months.

After diner everyone went to their rooms.

Heer was washing dishes when Prem walked in hugging her from the back.

He slid her arm around her stomach and placed his chin on her shoulder.

He lightliy kissed her cheek which made Heer smile.

She washed her hands and turned around.

Heer – "Kuch chiye." Prem shook his head pulling close by her waist.

Prem – "Kaam katam hua kay nahi?"

Heer – "Haan ho gaya." She said placing her hands on his chest.

Prem smiled as both of them went upstairs to their room.

Prem wore a white kurta and Heer a silver night gown.

Prem – "Acha woh neechay kya bola thaa?"

Heer – "Kab?"

Prem – "Luch kay baad?"

Heer – "KyA?"

PRem – "Wohi hum dono kahin bahar chalin." He said kissing her cheek.

Heer – "Acha … haan … tu?"

Prem – "Kya matlab … plan canel ho gaya?"

Heer – "shayad." She said placing around with his hand,

Prem – "Whatever … subha hum dono lunch karnay jayin ghaay." Heer smiled and nodded.

Heer – "janu ek baath poochoon?"

PRem – "Kuch bii?"

Heer – "Tumhein yeh tu nahi lagta kay mein tumsey nahi liken tumhari money sey pyaar karti hoon."

PRem turned her around shocked as hell.

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Okay guys that's all for now.

Hope you guys enjoyed it.

Please comment and let me.

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Love Ayysha

Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part


thanx 4 the pm

update soon

Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey amazing update!!!
Plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
loved it
too good
Veera aise kaise keh sakti hai???
thanks for the pm
pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
now wht's up with this veera
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part ayysha keep it up :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
another awesomeeeeeeee part........wonder what prem's reaction will be......continue soon.....
and thanks for the pm

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