Heer's POV -------- One Shot!!

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Hi friends,
Post leap everyone is discussing about Heer's attitude towards Prem. So just thought about writing about it. This came up in my mind and just thought of posting it. I do not have any experience of writing before so please bear with me. Please do write ur comments,

Heer's POV

Geet asks Heer "kya tum usse abhi bhi pyaar karti hon" Heer is shocked by the answer but replies "No".
After geet leaves, heer is sitting alone in her room facing the mirror, when her reflection in the mirror asks her " kyun heer, kya tum usse abhi bhi pyaar nahi karti". Heer answers "nahi" . reflection says "accha, to kyun tumhara dil abhi bhi uske liye dadhakta hain. Kyun abhi bhi chaand ko dekhti hon, jiska matlab hain tum use yaad kar rahi hon. Heer says" nahi nahi" and she breaks down "haan karti hoon main aaj bhi prem se pyaar. Wahi pyaar jo main barson se karti aa rahi hoon. Kyunki meri nas nas main prem basa hua hain. Main kya karu. Logon se to jhoot bol sakti hoon lekin apni hi parchayin se kaise chupau yeh sach.
kaise nahi karu us insaan se pyaar, jo mera pratik hain. Chahte hue bhi nahi kar sakti usse nafrat main. Kyun Prem kyun kiya tumne aisa. Tum to kehte the ki Heer Prem main basti hain aur prem heer main samaya hua hain, ki heer Prem ko pura karti hain. Phir kyun Prem kyun mujhme samana tumhe gavara nahi hua. Kyun samana pada tumhe kisi aur main.
Bahut pyaar karti hoon main tumse Prem, bahut. Itna ki uska dard bhi saha nahi jata. Pyaar karti hoon tumhare har ek ehsaas se. Jee rahi hoon sirf us pyaar ke ehsaas pe aur apne pyaar ki chahat ke pyaar se. Chahti to bahut hoon ki har ek yaad mita doon apne dil se lekin jitna mitana chahti hoon usse kahi jyada yaadein ghehri ho jati hain. Chahti hoon ki pyaar na karu tumse lekin yen dil hain ke use dhadakna ata hain who bhi sirf Prem ke hi naam se. Chahti hoon ki daudi chali aao tumhare paas, sama jao apne Prem main, pal yahi ruk jaye . Lekin ---- who kaali raat khatam hi nahi hoti. Shayad kismet main yehi likha hain ki Prem aur Heer ka pyaar bas ek afsana ban ke reh jaye!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow its really nice dear
i loved it
thanks for writing
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hmm nice very well written
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi ,
thanks for liking it !!
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hey
really well written one shot...👏

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