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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome :) .. update soon and thnx for the PM :)
U'll do it good in ur exams InshaAllah :) .. All the best :) .. studies come first
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved the part...............cont. soon and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee
loved it
love the surprise which boys gave girls
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 part yaar and i do pray for ur % gud luck and update soon :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey great part song was nicely chosen loved it thyansk for plz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey!!!! awsome update!!! :) pls update soon... :)
and thanks 4 pm!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome yaar
W8ng 4 da next part nd
All da best
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi kavya

Ok sorry kavya, sorry, sorry, I am really. Phir late reply kiya. Par ish baar zyada late nahi kiya mene😉. So sorry yaar, I was a bit busy but again I want to read your posts when I was free so that I could give long and lovely reply. Toh plz maaf kar do😛

Ok delaying it no further, lets first start with promo. Toh prem se phir ladayi ho gaiy heer ki🤣, tum dono kabhi mat sudhar na.😆, vaise I love their cute fight😉. Toh ishita mam is confused about her dress, haan ji kunal ko impress jo karna hai😉, matlab shaadi jaldi hi hone vali hai. Par kavya pehel premeer ki shaadi, baad mein inh dono ki. Liked this promo.

Chapter 40A- truly yaar ladko se jagda karne mein bahut maza aata hia, aur usse bhi zyada tan jab vo manaye, bechara prem god knows abhi kitne papad belane hai🤣. So guys really didn't have to do much, they already had bowled their gals while looking so ddashing😆. So this is boys plans to ignore gals. Awesome, but guys beware, just wait when they give back to you.😉 Achcha kunal ji aap bhi, ishita ko ignore karenge haan?😆 Aur haan tum preet apna kam nikal hi lete ho kyun😉, great even ishita loves kunal. Kunal ji aap piche reh jayenge, she will give a shock of life in few minutes. Kavya loved this update. I am totally falling in love with your writing.

Chapter 40B- ishita se kunal tarap raha hai uski baat sunane😆. Kavya, what a perfect song, and what a perfect setting for it, perfect way for guys make their gals feel their love for them👏. I always love the way you describe the song sequence. I totally get lost in it👍🏼. Kuanl really needs a lesson or two from either prem or angad on how to impress a gal😉, bechari ishita😆kunal tum bhool gaye tum wahan jhoola jhoolane ke liye nahi baithe the ishita ke saath🤣. Too good kuanl bas ab sootey raho, prem plz help him, bechara neend ka maara hia🤣. Yaar ish preet ki aakhein hai ya button, ishne daljeet aur prem ke bich ka scene bhi nahi dekha. He really needs to get to his eye sight's test. Awesome surprise kavya. Loved this update soooooooooo much. Too good.

Do update soon, loved these.

Sia

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello everyone
well i'm missing you alot..
so i'm planning to update a small bit
done with lab internals.. it went good...
thank you all for praying for me

here's a small portion of the next chapter
hoping it isn't bad
i'll try to complete this soon but can't say

CHAPTER 41- TEASER

Ishita joins them. All of them chat on random topics. After few hours the train stops at a station.Preet and prem get down. Preet goes to get water while prem stands on the platform near the window where heer was there.
He silently signals heer to come out of there. She nods understandingly and making an excuse goes to the door. By then prem also comes to the door.

HEER: Kya hua?

PREM: Kuch nahin.

HEER: Phir mujhe kyun bulaya?

PREM: Kunal aur ishita ke chehre dekhe? Bichare ek doosre se baat karne ke liye kitne taras rahe hain, pat tum toh apni bak bak kiye jaa rahi thi.

HEER: Acha toh mein bak bak karti hoon?

PREM: Nahin heer mere kehne ka matlab woh nahin tha..

They were standing near the door. As the engine whistles people start getting in and they move aside a bit. At last preet enters and was walking towards his berth when he feels someone pulling him back. He turns to see prem and heer. Prem leaves his collar.

PREM: Itne mushkil se unhe akela mein baat karne ka mauka diya ab tu kahaan jaa raha hai.. rukh

PREET: Matlab hume yahaan kada hona hoga? Isse acha hota ki aap undono ke liya aur hum logon ke liye alag alag ticket liye hote.

HEER: Preet ab har koi tumhare jitna intelligent nahin ho sakta hain na

PREET: You're right.

PREM: Haan preet bilkul har koi tumhara jitna intelligent nahin hota agar hote na toh har choti baat pe jagda nahin karte..

PREET: Prem Bhai aap kya bol rahe hain.

HEER: Preet intelligent log kuch bhi aise hi nahin bol dete..

PREET: Kya?

PREM: Preet kabhi kabhi intelligent logon se bhi galti ho jaati hain

PREET: Bassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss (covering his ears)
Premeer turn away form each other.

PREET: Koi mujhe batayega yeh kya ho raha hai?

HEER: Apne PB se poocho

PREET: PB

PREM: Mein kyun bataoun jisne ladayi shuru ki hai usse poocho..

HEER: Tumhare kehne ka matlab mein ne

PREM: Mein ne tumhara naam liya?

PREET: Enough mujhe nahin jaana kyun lad rahe ho. Shaanti rako.

Prem turns away again.

HEER: Mujhe bohut bhook lag rahi hai chalo kuch khaane ko laate hain

Heer walks away. Preet was about to follow her when prem stops him.

PREM: Tu kahaan jaa raha hai? Rukh yaheen pe
He goes behind heer.

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After heer makes an excuse and leave kunal and ishita become silent. They were stealing secret glances of each other. After few minutes of silence,

KUNAL: Tum delhi mein rehthi ho yeh baat mujhe bataya kyun nahin?

ISHITA: Mauka hi nahin mila.

KUNAL: Oh.. Mein toh poochna hi bhool gaya tum kal raat mujhse kuch kehna chahthi thi na'

ISHITA: Mein' mein kehna chahthi thi?

KUNAL: Haan

ISHITA: Woh mujhe laga tum mujhse kuch kehna chahthe the wahi poochne aayi thi..

KUNAL: Mein???

ISHITA: Haan agar aisi koi baat nahin hai toh phir teek hai..



i'm not satisfied with this one. may make a few changes but mostly it will remain the same..


Edited by premeer4rever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome

cant wait 2 read the real update

thanx 4 the pm

update soon

Kamal
Edited by Kamal_23 - 15 years ago

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