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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hola! 🤗

People wanted me to write more, so I am. This will be about Dorthy and Meher's love/hate, well mostly hate relationship. By now, I'm sure you all know that Dorthy has been replaced by some ugly blonde straight-haired woman who calls herself Dorthy. Well I'm not buying it, so this is for you Dorthy! And maybe Meera, Ravjot, and Dark Love.


Tera Sar!
"Dorthy! Oye Dorthy! Kithe Kho Gayi? Aao Aao, Mere Nanhi Si Jaan Ke Liye Thanda Thanda Doodh Le Aao." said an aggitated and stressed out woman, who had a heart of gold. Adorned in a traditional salwar kameez, gold earrings, a heavy mangalsutra, and stacksof chuda bangles, seven years after marriage, mind you.
"Coming Meher Madame! Here's your milk." said a tall, curly haired woman. Wearing a grey pencil skirt and a white dress shirt with an apron on top, she looked like a typical Balaji American-turned-Desi maid.
"Oye Kudi, Meine Thanda Doodh Kaha Tha, Yeh Kya Hai? Garam Doodh! Akal ke naam ki cheez tumhare paas hai kya? Hai Ram, lagta hai mujhe sab kuch apne aap karna hai." Meher said, as she quickly ran off to the kitchen to fetch her daughter some cold milk.
Meher turned to the stove and looked at a big saucepan filled with hot milk. She quickly strained it, added some chocolate powder, and let it cool. She cheated a bit in the cooling part by adding a ton of ice. After that, she ran as fast as she could, up the stairs, one by one, off to her daughter's room.
"Gungun, Mein Aa Rahi Hoon!" Meher said huffing puffing.
As the approached the last step, Meher underestimated the amount of steps, causing her to trip.
"Aaaaaah! Dorthy! Come and get me up now you stupid fool." Meher said, writihing in pain and clutching her right leg.
"Coming Madam!" Dorthy said, sprinting as fast as she could to stairwell, to find a hurt Meher cursing her mouth off.
"Jao Batameez, Aur Mere Liye Baraf Lao!" Meher said angrily.
"What Maam? You want me to barf on you?" Dorthy said, obviously very confused.
"Nahin Yaar, go get me some ice please."
"Right!" Dorthy said, running down the long stairwell to the kitchen.
She quickly took a tray of ice cubes and closed the freezer. She sprinted up the steps once again, and gave Meher the ice.
"You know Dorthy, you're not so bad after all..." Meher said, nursing her bruised black and blue leg.
"Thank You, now what were you saying before I came to you... Something in Punjabi..." Dorthy said curiously.
Meher glared at her, and said "Tere Sar!"


-The End-


I hope you all liked this... Please comment/critisize.😊
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rainydays. thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^ That sums up my reaction 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LMFAOO!!!

Nikasha that was awesome...Lol...Luved the idea of making a one shot on the maid haha
OMG the ending was really good..
typical Balaji American-turned-Desi maid.
Lol totally agree wiv that..lol
Tera sar has a big smart brain in there LMAO..sovy..being silly
Great work..
Take Care
indiandoll89 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I have nothing to say to thiat....😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Why?! *Sobs uncontrolably!* I demand a long reply... NOW!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aw man! I am speechless! That was epic! LMAO! loved the come here, you stupid fool! *giggles.
The dialogues were all awesome, the barf one, every one of them! Loved the whole concept too! It was very well done. You SHOULD write more one-shots. Comedy is your thing! *giggles again.
Sorry, told ya no long comments are able to come out me today . :(
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'm sorry Nikasha...not very commenty right now... 😔
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Okay Meera... You okay? *Gives a hug*

Thanks Avi, I'll post more comedy one's soon. Maybe some Prem and Chahat ones! Yeah. I like that.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg Nikasha that was s0 funni hahahaaaa lmao0o
🤣 I LOVED IT !!!!!!!!!
hahaaa Tera Sar lmao0...dat just made my dayy .....awww i love it....
i wish i can press the "like" button more than 1 time ughh lolll it was gr8 Nikashaa ....lmao0.....hahaaaa those dialouges u usedd seriouslly got me crackn upp....it reminded me of ..myself !!! hahaa ...i yelll just like that at my lil bro ....loll......but reallyy that was like THE BEST hahaaa
luv Rumsha <3
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
that was hilarious. meher and dorothy are too cute. 👏

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