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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hii , guys this is my first one shot =) (not the best but not that bad ) Please comment
luv anni
He looked deep into her eyes; he couldn't bare the pain he had given her ….. He watched her tears slowly fall down her cheeks … How could he ……….

He tried to recall what happened that night but couldn't remember anything … all he knew that he wasn't in his senses …. All he knew is that night he had lost heer ...somebody that he loved more then life .

He turned around and started to walk towards her. He slowly took his finger and gently put it on her cheek and started to wipe her tears ….. She pushed him back and started hitting his chest leaving him in shock ….

"How could you prem … I thought you loved me….. I thought you cared about me …. Why did you have to come back in my life … Why did you do this to me to chahat ……

Chahat he whispered back …….

She quickly turned around …..

" Heer why are you not looking at me ?" Who is chahat heer ? HEER TELL ME!!

" Chahat is our daughter prem " leaving him in sudden shock …

His eyes were full of pain …. He couldn't believe what he had just heard ….

He Prem Juenja had a daughter … his and heer's daughter

Just then he realized that 6 years ago he not only lost heer… He had also lost chahat …. Those 6 years when she first learned to walk ….. When she said her first words ……Those 6 years that would never come back ………..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Just then he realized that 6 years ago he not only lost heer' He had also lost chahat '. Those 6 years when she first learned to walk '.. When she said her first words ''Those 6 years that would never come back '''..


Beautiful lines they make me so sad



so nice but short . Could i ask for sequel??😳

Again it was relly good

love lily


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Posted: 16 years ago
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I LOVE it Annie! Please write some more! Its WONDERFUL!

Go Annie! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 (LUV U!)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awehh thnks for commenting guys?
so should i write more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice shot...............poor Prem............bichara got punished for doing nothing
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice one and love ur lines!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnk u guys =) i know its not the best =( and it short but i will try to edit it later on =)
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