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Hello everbody! I'm Sofia. This is my first ever try at something like this. I've been highly inspired by all those people who initially came up with this. So thanks to them! =)

The Right Choice

There once was a young girl and a young man, they fell in love. No one would have ever thought they would of. They were complete opposites in everything. She was petite and pretty while he was tall and strong. She was easily entertained and loved everything in life. She looked at the world like the glass was half full instead of half empty while he looked at it that was completely empty and death was the only answer to a happy life. She would smile at the moon at night for it being the only light. He frowned at the moon for being so bright. She wanted to please the world and make sure everyone was happy. He didn't care what would happen and he never tried to please everyone. Heer and Prem, they were.

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She was sitting on a park bench admiring the beauty around her when she heard a husky voice proclaim. "Do you mind if I have a seat next to you, lady?" it pleaded. Heer was wonderstruck. Her breath caught as she saw the eerily chilling blue eyes staring at her. She retrieved her senses and replied as gracefully as she could. "Sure, I'd be glad." He sat down next to her. Now sitting next to her was his answer. Things were not as bad as he comprehended it were. It was just the way he thought, Prem thought. She was like nothing he had ever seen. Her hair flowed in waves to adorn her glowing, porcelain-like skin. Her eyes, framed by long lashes, were bright and seemed to brighten the world. A straight nose, full lips - she seemed the picture of perfection. Had she smiled, the world would sigh with serenity. Had she laughed, the world would laugh with her. And had she wept, the whole world would want to comfort her.

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Heer was nonetheless awestruck with his beauty. But there was something missing. A smile, on that beautiful face. "Hi! I'm Heer. I haven't seen you around here, ever."

Heer greeted him with a question. Prem was startled for she was the first one to begin the conversation. He replied, "Uh…hmm, yes I've never been here before. I was just passing by and this place caught sight of me. It is a beautiful place, indeed. And if you don't mind me saying you're gorgeous. By the way, I'm Prem. "Her cheeks turned red, deep red. " Thanks! "She giggled in delight. " But you look quite upset. What's wrong? Only if you would wish to speak." They began to talk and he told her what was wrong. She said she felt sorry for him. He told her the thing he cherished the most was now gone. She told him that love was still standing there waiting for him and how she would never stop caring about him. He smiled and he said he needed help. She told him what he needed to do. The words drifted from him carelessly like he had forgotten. "I love you" struck her ears and her mind went crazy. Tears fell from her eyes.

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Neither one had thought that this trip to the park would get them somewhere like this. He kissed her then went on one knee. He proposed to her. She cried yes to him. He caught her in a tight hug. She whispered in his ear that this was the end of the pain and sorrow and from here on out they would never leave each other. He hugged her tighter nodding his head letting tears of his own fall from his eyes. They were together forever. His call was answered. The angels finally heard him and they gave her to him. He didn't want to let go of her for fear she would run away. She stayed in his arms for as long as she could. He thought to himself "Finally the moon and sun are back together.

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I hope all of you liked it! =)

-Sofia

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isomers thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwesome!!
the one shot was superb!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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well all i can say is sooooooo cute
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was such a beautifully written one-shot!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was very sweet ! Good job!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very good.....doesn't look like ur first.😉
You have written very well specially the first part.
gr8 job !👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
that was soo cute soo sweet

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Sofia That was short and sweet
Loved every bit of it!!
xx

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