nami2811 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#1
hie ppl..
well no bak bak.. i'll jus start it off...

Prem is still not able 2 believe dat his heer is gettin married 2 his plane friend!
n dat too in just 2 hrs..

he cam 2 know abt this wen he reached Delhi International n found dat a weddin was takin place n 2 his sheer surprise found dat it was booked by Heer!!🤢

Now lukin at the super happy heer n d excitement she had abt d wedding, Prem thought dat she has forgotten him completely.. he is all shattered..
recollects d dialogues told by her "Mujhe tumhari koi bhi yaad nahin chahiye.."

Prem is virtually torn into parts n pieces😭
cryin n cursin himself "aakhir tumne uss raat aisa kyun kiya?"
as d last move he jus wanted 2 go 2 d chawl n mesmerize those wonderful days he spent with his Heer...

Scene at d chawl:
A lady is being scolded n almost being beaten up by her husband 4 packin his tiffin late..
"Tumse ek bhi kaam theek se nahin hota hain... pata nahin maine tumse kaise shaadi kar li..
ab bhugat rahan hun... ab mera muh kya dekh rahi ho... tumhara boyfriend aane ko hai kya..
ab andar jao aur kaam karo.. bina akal ke..."

the lady was weepin silently n jus turned her head around...
it was Prem.. the prem whom she fooled way back around 6 yrs.. jus 2 take her revenge..
yes ur rite.. it was Ashlesha... d lady being scolded...
Prem is totally shcked 2 c the mistake of his lyf stand in front of him.. dat 2 in a chawl😲
ash's husband leaves n ash call prem 2 her house...
Prem reluctantly goes inside..

Scene at d house:
Ash is all crying...
Prem asks wat was all dat? he thought dat aftr dat incident she wud go back 2 her mom n get married wid sum1 gud n settle in her lyf..
Ash replies "i'm payin 4 ma sins"
Prem:"wat?" 😲
Ash:"ya i'm paying 4 d sins i've committed.. i'm payin 4 d sin of breaking urs n heer's eternal luv"
Prem:(still confused) "tumhari koi galti nahin hain... sab kuch meri galti hain.. twas ma fault"
Ash:"no prem it was not ur fault.. it was me who wantedly broke ur relation 4 d sake of revenge"
n she explains wat happened dat ni8..(in fact nuthin happened)

Prem is all surprised n happy dat he was NOT wrong!!😃
Widout wastin a millisecond he runs 2 d hotel...(ho rabba playin at d background!!)

At d hotel:
Everythin is set.. d pundit asks some ladies 2 bring on d bride..
Prem reaches at dat tym.. n b4 they cud go immediately runs 2 d bride's room..
To his surprise it is not Heer bt sum odr girl in d bride's dress!!!šŸ˜†
heer is sajafying dat girl...
d ladies cum n take away dat girl n prem is hidin behind d door..
Heer says "AAp chaliye main abhi aati hoon"
Soni "Jaldi aa jaana.. Tumhari vajah se hi yeh shaadi ho rahi hai.. aakhir mere dost ke alave tum ek wedding planner bhi ho našŸ˜†" n leaves..
Prem is all d way smiling n thinking hw wrong he was n is in judging heer..

as all of them leave... heer is lukin at herself in d mirror n saying..
"dekho aaj main kisi ki shaadi karva rahi hoon.. tum mere saath ho na.."
prem cums frm behind n says "haan heer"
Heer turns back n finds PREM😲
She is like all shocked n she doesn't know wat 2 tell..
Prem fills up d gap sayin "Kaise ho heer?"
Heer cumin back 2 her senses says "main badal gayi hum prem.. ab mujhe tumhari zaroorat nahin hai" n turns her back 2 him..(SIlently weeping)
Prem says "AAj bhi tum mujhse gussa ho?"
n he spills out all da truth he had heard frm ash..

Heer is all happy n says "Sach?"
PREm:"ha sach!!"
Both hav tears in their eyes...😳

they hav parted 4 six yrs jus bcoz of sumthin which never happened!!

then d Reunion hug....šŸ˜
they hug each odr makin a promise dat watever happens they wud never part again...
At d background jugni is all dancing!!!!
Prem den takes out d payal which heer left long back n puts it on her...


huh!!!!!
this is d first tym i'm posting all on ma own a post...
so ppl plz do leave a compliment or a comment..
anythin is welcum...😊😊😊

Created

Last reply

Replies

8

Views

1.3k

Users

5

Likes

3

Frequent Posters

nami2811 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#2
hey plz reply..
i wanna know hw it was...
resham12345 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#3
it was really gud
keep it up
nami2811 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: resham12345

it was really gud
keep it up


thank uuu😃
MrsCrosby87 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#5
reallli gud
hope it happensšŸ˜›
and they dunt drag this on for forever
nami2811 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#6
thank u..
nyways hw was dat ash's thing??
i cudn't hav got sumthin better dan dat (though i really wished sumthin more worse 2 happen 2 her)
Ishaana thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#7
hey that was really gud!!
miilee05 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#8
hii dat was awesome. everythng solved so quickly.šŸ‘
we'r(hope u guessed whom i meant by 'we') so impatient to watch it going on 4r weeks and weeksšŸ˜‰
wish to see more of your writings.
i'm waiting eagerly for the fan-fiction in the making.
nami2811 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: miilee05

hii dat was awesome. everythng solved so quickly.šŸ‘

we'r(hope u guessed whom i meant by 'we') so impatient to watch it going on 4r weeks and weeksšŸ˜‰
wish to see more of your writings.
i'm waiting eagerly for the fan-fiction in the making.


hieeee..😃
i guess ur mouli's frnd rite??
sry cudn't reply coz i had sum prob wid ma PC..
no net connection u c..😔
n ya our fan-fiction will soon start wen she'll get her lappy..

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".