Meet || The Mixed Tape (a oneshot)

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Yo! So I was contemplating a sequel to my previous oneshot, and this song just seemed to fit perfectly. I do hope you guys enjoy it!

Layi Vi Na Gayi:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1205305#22675839

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This Is Morning.
That's When I Spend The Most Time,
Thinking 'Bout What I've Given Up.
This Is A Warning.
When You Start The Day Just To Close The Curtains,
You're Thinking 'Bout What I've Given Up.


Meher picked her niece, with a small smile. Her smiles never reached her eyes anymore, but still, they were genuine. It was impossible to fake a smile in front of Chahat. Her bubbly nature was too infectious. She cradled the sleeping child, bidding her sister good night. Dropping a small kiss on her sister's cheek, Meher made her way to Chahat's room, and tucked her in. As she smoothed Chahat's dark hair out of her face, her mind travelled to the possibility of a child she may have had with Preet, had they still been together. If she had stayed, or allowed him to come with her, they might have had a little bundle of joy. She willed herself away from the thoughts, feeling the tears prickling at the back of her eyes.

Where Are You Now?
As I'm Swimming Through The Stereo,
I'm Writing You A Symphony Of Sound.
Where Are You Now?
As I Rearrange The Songs Again,
This Mix Could Burn A Hole In Anyone.
But It Was You I Was Thinking Of.


Preet crossed his arms across his chest as he imagined a child running around the playground, Meher chasing the little girl, laughing. A smile crossed his face as he thought of his wife. It may have been almost four years since he had seen her, but he thought of her every day, and each day, he imagined her the way he loved, smiling at him. And each day, his fantasy went unfulfilled. But it would happen, someday.


I Read Your Letter.
The One You Left When You Broke Into My House.
Retracing Every Step You Made,
And You Said You Meant It.
And There's A Piece Of Me In Every Single,
Second Of Every Single Day.
But If It's True Then Tell Me How It Got This Way.


She slowly removed the jewelery she was wearing, allowing herself the luxury of thinking of her husband. It was not that she had not thought of him at all throughout the years, she had, almost all the time. Heer Di had not allowed herself to remember Prem Jiju, and Meher could not blame her. Heer Didi had tried to wipe those memories out of her life, but Meher, Meher remembered the moments she had spent with Preet with fondness. She wondered how he was, if he was happy, if the family was okay. But mostly, she remembered the cheeky smirk he would have on his face when he would back her into a wall, or a door, or whatever was handy. He always enjoyed making her feel uncomfortable, making her squirm.


Where Are You Now?
As I'm Swimming Through The Stereo,
I'm Writing You A Symphony Of Sound.
Where Are You Now?
As I Rearrange The Songs Again,
This Mix Could Burn A Hole In Anyone.
But It Was You I Was Thinking Of.


He loved her blush. The way her eyelids would flutter down, covering the beautiful brown orbs that he could read so clearly. The way her breath would catch when he would invade her personal space. Her scent drove him mad. He had purchased the same perfume she used to wear, and sprayed it, daily, onto the pillow. He would fall asleep; hugging that pillow close to him, imagining it was her.

Looking into his reflection in the window, Preet ran a hand through his hair. There was work to be done, but he could not tear himself away from her thoughts. He wondered where she was, if she was okay, if Heer Bhabhi was okay. He wondered if Heer Bhabhi's child called her Massi or Chachi.

A giggle interrupted his thoughts. In the reflection, he saw her leaning against his table, smiling that same smile at him. An answering grin spread across his face. He knew she was not there, that this was just his imagination, but that did not matter. What mattered was that he could still remember what she looked like, how her eyes lit up when she saw something she loved, how her giggle sounded when she was genuinely happy. She was still there, all the time, in his thoughts.


And I Can't Get To You
I Can't Get To You,
I Can't Get To You.
(You, You)
And Where Are You Now?
And Where Are You Now?


He encompassed her soul. He held her heart, ruled over it. And someday, they would be together. Maybe in a week, maybe another year, maybe more than that. But someday, they would meet again.

And This Is My Mixed Tape For Her.
It's Like I Wrote Every Note,
With My Own Fingers.

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Do let me know what you think! Please, leave a comment or hit the 'like' button!

And thanks to Meera for reading through the shot! 😃

Love,
Radz

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indiandoll89 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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You added the lyrics! 😃 Yay! 😳

I'm glad you did!😛 It does seem to flow really well with the whole shot! 😃😳

I do wish you had ended with them meeting or something, but this was still sweet, although you realize ppl will still ask for a ending part? 😳

Love you,

Meera😳

P.S. NO more thanking me! 😃 I love reading through it! 😳 Makes me feel special! 😉


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh my that was soooo awesome! For some reason I didn't feel sad as I should have with them parting their own ways. I think it was because deep inside both of them were content with the memories that they had made together.
I loved loved loved the ending!!! With him smiling even though he knew it was all just his imagination...but still he smiled, how perfect and totally Preetish is that? *sighs
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aw..this was so sweet..are u gona continue? cause i want to see meher and preet meeting each other again..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow! that was sgreat! haila! wondering what will happen next!...want to read more!...but still know what its still a one shot!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ooh that was so good.
But you know what would make it even better?
Their milan! 😉
Me? Planting ideas in people's heads? Never! 🤔
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww this was so sweet! (I'm going to be diabetic soon, and it's all thanks to you guys!)
I loved how both of them thought of each other, but with happiness and not with the bitter pain that Heer and Prem think of each other with. Although I personally thought the 'Preet bought Meher's perfume and sprayed it on the pillow and hugged it' thing was kinda...creepy...but that's just me!
Love,
Bhav (:
Posted: 16 years ago
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ARGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

I don't like reading such sweet things this early in the morning; but that was soooooooooo SWEET! I know I'm going to love Chahat already! Preet.is.so.effing.too.much. HE BOUGHT THE SAME PERFUME AND IMAGINED THE PILLOW WAS HER? *sigh*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

You added the lyrics! 😃 Yay! 😳Yup! I love the song. 😃 Go hear it!

I'm glad you did!😛 It does seem to flow really well with the whole shot! 😃😳I'm glad! I wasn't so sure about it. But I had to put in the lyrics, because the song is just too awesome. 😉

I do wish you had ended with them meeting or something, but this was still sweet, although you realize ppl will still ask for a ending part? 😳 I am planning a next part, no worries about that! And thank you!

Love you, love you too!

Meera😳

P.S. NO more thanking me! 😃 I love reading through it! 😳 Makes me feel special! 😉 I will thank you if I want. *stubborn muh*



@ amu142: Good thing?


Originally posted by: urworstnitemare


Oh my that was soooo awesome! For some reason I didn't feel sad as I should have with them parting their own ways. I think it was because deep inside both of them were content with the memories that they had made together. AVI! *hug* Thank you! Yup, this was more melancholic (or at least that's what I was aiming for) than sad.

I loved loved loved the ending!!! With him smiling even though he knew it was all just his imagination...but still he smiled, how perfect and totally Preetish is that? *sighs Yup. That is very Preet no? Oh I love your avi! I love that smile. 😳



Originally posted by: lovely_lady


aw..this was so sweet..are u gona continue? cause i want to see meher and preet meeting each other again..



Yup, I will have a part after this too! I still have to write it though. 😉 Glad you enjoyed it!


Originally posted by: ..kashish..


wow! that was sgreat! haila! wondering what will happen next!...want to read more!...but still know what its still a one shot!



Thank you Kashish! I will have something after this also, no worries! 😃


Originally posted by: Rakhie_08


Ooh that was so good. Thank you!

But you know what would make it even better?
Their milan! 😉 *giggles*
Me? Planting ideas in people's heads? Never! 🤔 Relax, I am planning a part with them meeting. So I will make no comment. 😆



Originally posted by: sourpuss


Awww this was so sweet! (I'm going to be diabetic soon, and it's all thanks to you guys!) 😆 No comment.

I loved how both of them thought of each other, but with happiness and not with the bitter pain that Heer and Prem think of each other with. Although I personally thought the 'Preet bought Meher's perfume and sprayed it on the pillow and hugged it' thing was kinda...creepy...but that's just me! I'm glad, and erm, okay! 😆
Love, love you too!
Bhav (:



Originally posted by: shabo24


ARGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

I don't like reading such sweet things this early in the morning; but that was soooooooooo SWEET! I know I'm going to love Chahat already! Preet.is.so.effing.too.much. HE BOUGHT THE SAME PERFUME AND IMAGINED THE PILLOW WAS HER? *sigh* I shall take that as a compliment. 😆



Love,
Radz

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