||Heart's Aflame|| Chapter 20 updated pg 107 23/4

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Scribbler M

@Scribbler184

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Posted: 13 years ago

#831

Read the First Chapter.

I have become your admirer now. Oh Man, the way you described all the pain, suffering, everything was just sooo amazing.

Beautiful.

It was really heart touching. . . . . 😊 😭

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Scribbler M

@Scribbler184

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#832

Chapter 2 - This was such a sad update. 😭

But, the reactions of Dr. Mathur was really funny and when Dr. Kumar said that "You nearly gave one of my best doctors a nervous breakdown," I was like LOLS 😆, 'Bechare Dr. Mathur'. . . . .

Character of Mr Maan is really shady but he is a nice and protective father. . . . umm, good.

And, Prem's short reply nearly gave me a Heart Attack , " A Divorce is the best idea. Get one." 😡

Anyways, I will read the further chapters first before cursing Prem. 😊

But really the last para was very touching. Beautiful. 😭

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Scribbler M

@Scribbler184

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#833

Chapter 3. Loved it.

I really really loved this chapter. I have always adored the relationship b/w Preet and Heer. For me they are the Best Bhabhi-Devar. Love them to the core.

I was literally awwwing at almost everyline, except a few. . . . . 😉

I was also going ROFL while reading the parts.

Preet's song, Heer's teasing. . . . . everything was superb. Too Good.

I really Loved this update. 😃

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Scribbler M

@Scribbler184

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#834

OMG . . . . .Chapter 4 really made me 😆 🤣

I loved the way you portrayed the drunken state of Preet and Heer, Hats off to you for that. And and, Heer's reaction after the conversation. .. . . everything was so Perfect.

Kudos to you for such a light-heart update. This was really great. Just amazing. 😃

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swati

@sweta2005

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Posted: 13 years ago

#835

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Scribbler M

@Scribbler184

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#836

Chapter 5 was a mixture of emotions for me.

Once again, I have to say this that the relationship of Preet and Heer is amazing, beautiful and so pure. Preet is so right, "You are like the sisiter I never had". . . . awww.

And I so hate Mr. Maan for ruining the beautiful moment. Hate him.

The last para was really good. Will come back to you after reading the next chapter. 😃

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S.B.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#837

This is one awesome ff..

read all the chapters..

All the character are awesome.. aspecially heer and preet friendship.. loved them both!!

do add me to ur pm list..

continue soon!!