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Scene: Juneja House..
The whole Juneja khandan has gathered at t living room as if for sme auspicios evnt... but no it wasnt. The family disheartened by its sweetheart Veera's death a week ago has not recovered n here tey had another shock...
Mrs Heer Prem Juneja had booked a hotel room at abt 8:00pm a week n a half ago with her Husband Mr Prem Juneja.... t reciepts lay on t table decorating t room. But among tem was one which revieled tat t expences for t night were paid thru a credit card which belonged to one Mr. Rajveer.....
N this had t whole room in splits... but al knew tat Heer had returned home late tat night and was away to visit a friend Mansi at t same hotel.
But she Heer did not care wht t family tot... except for one lone gentleman Mr Prem Juneja. She looked into his eyes they were confused she cud tell n that fact ended the hopes for her..
All tis while her Mother in law Mrs Gayatri Juneja was accusing her (her who all tis while had listened to This "God of her Love"..... n had lied n lied to her own God)... she was shattered but her hopes hadnt she believed in her belief her love her PREM.... but now nothing was left....
And she made t decision... t one he cudnt make, for him!!!! She walked steadily to t Mandir guarding t house... breaks her Mangalsutra telling her Prem that she wished his eyes could see THE TRUTH N THE LIES...and she leaves... n he stayed were he was letting her go... his eyes stil in confusion n legs unable to move..... not calling her back.
FIVE YEARS LATER...
Scene: Juneja House
A Saturday Morning....Juneja family at t dining table... all in hurry getting healthy for t long day ahead... Prem Juneja walks past t dining table.... Gayatri mom asks him "Prem khaana toh ghake jao" Prem replies in hurry "nahi maa.. flight miss ho jayegi... bahut zaroori hai.." n he leaves... Gayatri Juneja... thinks yeh Prem bhi na... "na kuch khatha hai na kuch peeta hai.... "
Prem at air port "Ha.. ab yahaan se Shimla tak... sirf 2 ghande aur....sigh"
Prem lands at Shimla Airport... He hires a taxi... n there he is... in front of a Farm house..
He enters.... he places his lugage down n there he is at t bedroom door... he says... he moves aead...n there she is by t window... he covers her eyes wit his hands she says "Prem"... he responds "srry mujhe wapas jaana pada... tumhe yahaan chodkar... mujhe pata hai tum narraz ho ki chutti main bhi mera pati kaam karta hai.. lekin kya kare... par ab toh main waapas ayya hoon na..." He finds his hands wet he turns her ard n kisses her forehead n says "Heer.."
Flash of light... Prem at shiv mandir looking for his Heer.... n finaaly he finds her were he always does... in tears... he goes to her n turns her around forcefully.... "tumne kaise soch liya Heer kaise.."
Heer replies in shock but stil in tears... 'Par Prem maine tumhare aankhon main..." Prem "Ankhon main kya Heer dard... woh dard ki mere apne maa ne yeh sab kiya... tum woh nahin pad saki..."
Heer astonished not uttering a word... " yehi isi jagah pe maine tujhe woh vaade diye de heer aur tumne kaise soch liya ki main is jagah ko itni aasani se marne doongi... yahaan har jagah hamari pyaar hai... uski pavitrata ko main tod doongi.... nahi heer kabhi nahin...Balki Aaj main us rishte ko toh tod rahi hoon joh hamaare beech main aaya hai... us insaan se woh rishta jo mere farz dha... use tod rahi hoon.... kyunki mere zimdaari se hi mera har dhadkan har saas judi hai.... aur woh todkar main tumhai tod nahi sakti....kabhi nahiin.." n he hugs her...
Edit added.. guys tis is my first fiction.... n tis is my hope....
hope al of u ill like it.... please do forgive my mistakes... n please do leave ur comments..
The whole Juneja khandan has gathered at t living room as if for sme auspicios evnt... but no it wasnt. The family disheartened by its sweetheart Veera's death a week ago has not recovered n here tey had another shock...
Mrs Heer Prem Juneja had booked a hotel room at abt 8:00pm a week n a half ago with her Husband Mr Prem Juneja.... t reciepts lay on t table decorating t room. But among tem was one which revieled tat t expences for t night were paid thru a credit card which belonged to one Mr. Rajveer.....
N this had t whole room in splits... but al knew tat Heer had returned home late tat night and was away to visit a friend Mansi at t same hotel.
But she Heer did not care wht t family tot... except for one lone gentleman Mr Prem Juneja. She looked into his eyes they were confused she cud tell n that fact ended the hopes for her..
All tis while her Mother in law Mrs Gayatri Juneja was accusing her (her who all tis while had listened to This "God of her Love"..... n had lied n lied to her own God)... she was shattered but her hopes hadnt she believed in her belief her love her PREM.... but now nothing was left....
And she made t decision... t one he cudnt make, for him!!!! She walked steadily to t Mandir guarding t house... breaks her Mangalsutra telling her Prem that she wished his eyes could see THE TRUTH N THE LIES...and she leaves... n he stayed were he was letting her go... his eyes stil in confusion n legs unable to move..... not calling her back.
FIVE YEARS LATER...
Scene: Juneja House
A Saturday Morning....Juneja family at t dining table... all in hurry getting healthy for t long day ahead... Prem Juneja walks past t dining table.... Gayatri mom asks him "Prem khaana toh ghake jao" Prem replies in hurry "nahi maa.. flight miss ho jayegi... bahut zaroori hai.." n he leaves... Gayatri Juneja... thinks yeh Prem bhi na... "na kuch khatha hai na kuch peeta hai.... "
Prem at air port "Ha.. ab yahaan se Shimla tak... sirf 2 ghande aur....sigh"
Prem lands at Shimla Airport... He hires a taxi... n there he is... in front of a Farm house..
He enters.... he places his lugage down n there he is at t bedroom door... he says... he moves aead...n there she is by t window... he covers her eyes wit his hands she says "Prem"... he responds "srry mujhe wapas jaana pada... tumhe yahaan chodkar... mujhe pata hai tum narraz ho ki chutti main bhi mera pati kaam karta hai.. lekin kya kare... par ab toh main waapas ayya hoon na..." He finds his hands wet he turns her ard n kisses her forehead n says "Heer.."
Flash of light... Prem at shiv mandir looking for his Heer.... n finaaly he finds her were he always does... in tears... he goes to her n turns her around forcefully.... "tumne kaise soch liya Heer kaise.."
Heer replies in shock but stil in tears... 'Par Prem maine tumhare aankhon main..." Prem "Ankhon main kya Heer dard... woh dard ki mere apne maa ne yeh sab kiya... tum woh nahin pad saki..."
Heer astonished not uttering a word... " yehi isi jagah pe maine tujhe woh vaade diye de heer aur tumne kaise soch liya ki main is jagah ko itni aasani se marne doongi... yahaan har jagah hamari pyaar hai... uski pavitrata ko main tod doongi.... nahi heer kabhi nahin...Balki Aaj main us rishte ko toh tod rahi hoon joh hamaare beech main aaya hai... us insaan se woh rishta jo mere farz dha... use tod rahi hoon.... kyunki mere zimdaari se hi mera har dhadkan har saas judi hai.... aur woh todkar main tumhai tod nahi sakti....kabhi nahiin.." n he hugs her...
Edit added.. guys tis is my first fiction.... n tis is my hope....
hope al of u ill like it.... please do forgive my mistakes... n please do leave ur comments..
