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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chracters:
Prem
Heer
preet
Arjun
Arohi
Mayung
Nupur
Samrat
Gunjun
Meher



Main Chracters: Heer and Prem

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Background:
Prem, arjun,preet, muyung and gunjun are siblings. WHile Heer, Meher,Arohi, Nupur and Samrat are siblings.


All of them have been friends since childhood..They have studied together, lived together etc.
Two years ago their parents died in a plane crash...So now all of them were orphans and as their parents were very rich, they had a huge mansion where they lived together..So all ten of them lived together....Prem was the eldest in his siblings whilke heer was the eldest in her siblings.....Prem,Muyung, HEER, nUPUR, pREET and Meher had finished college...While arjun, arohi, samrat and gunjun were still in college.....Prem, Heer, Muyung were taking care of their parent's buisness(Both parents had one buisness). Meher and Nupur opened a fashion store while preet started practising photography....


All of them were best friends..They shared everything with each other. Heer loved prem since college...And prem also loved Heer but they never shared their feelings with each other.............Everyone else knew that they loved each other.........

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Muyung and nurpur liked each other and wanted to get married as soon as possible...WHile something was going on betweeen Arjun And Arohi.....



Character Sketches
1) Prem: Sweett, Loving, Caring
He always stayed away from girls and took care off all his friends.....

2)Heer: Popular, swwet loving, sacrificing,Boys were mad after her but she never paid any attention



DO You GUYS THINK I SHOULD START A STORY ?


pLLLLLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSSSS rEPLLLLLYYYYYYY

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jamune thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yeah go for it love the plot and characters
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yeah you should start a story
resham12345 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Prem, muyung and heer work together in their office.......
AS you already know prem and heer secretely like each other..
So here goes... Tell me how should i improve it



Prem: Muyung tum ne filey checkn kar li hai na... Humain meeting kai liye jaana hai
Muyung: Filey to check kar li hai lekin mein nahi aa sakta kyun mai ne nupur ko promise kiya tha ke mein us ko Shopping ke liye le kar jaaooo Ga
Prem: yaar ab kya ho go..... Mujhey help ki zaroorat hai
Muyung: Kya hua! Sorry yaar tum heer ko lai Jao

Prem: ummmmm...Nahi theek hai mein khud chala JAAOON ga ( Because whenever he is with her he cannot control his emotins)

Heer enter the rooom with some files
Muyung: Good tum aagayi......Prem ke saath meeting per jaana hai tumhe
Heerr hesitates but says okay in the end


Prem and heer leave for the meeting
IN the car which prem is driving
Heer puts her hand near the gear by accident and when prem changes the gear he accidently holds her hand...Both of them had this strange yet nice feeling in their bodies..........They had been really good friends since childhood but lately whenever they were together the wouldn;t talk much just look at each other wth a strange expression.....Both of them felt great inside when they were together......

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They were in love..............

Prem was very shy so he didn't know what to do he knew that he loved heer but he did not know how to express his love and he asked for help from arjun and preet to express his love

Heer also sonn realised that she loved Premmmm but what could she do

One day when heer and prem were going back home from work together prem suddenly turned the car in another direction..Heer asked him where they were going but he didn't reply

Prem: Thora wait karlo Pls ab annkhein band karlo

Heer starts thinking what is prem doing she trys to figure it out but ccan;t

Prem stops the car and tells heer not toopen her eyes
As they were best friends he said that aaj mein tumhe apney pyar se milana chata hoon
Heer starts thinking to herself and feels really bad.....She loved him but he loved someone else

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Prem takes her To the beach but heer doe't know that
prem takes heer by his hand to the sea shore and tells her to look down and open her eyes
Heer: Where is she? WHy shld i look down

Prem: Just look down

Heer sees her reflection in the water
Heer: Kya?
Prem: Accha laga mera pyar
Heer: premmmm
Prem: Heeeeer ( BEnds Down)
Prem: will you Marry me and be mine forever.... I love you
Heer didn't know how to react because she was so happy prem was waiting for her answer
Heer bent down and hugged prem
Prem was a bit suprised but hugged her back still holding the ring
She realised what she was doing and came to her senses she backed a bit and prem held her hand and he made her wear the ring and then kissed her hands


They get up as they were on the ground of the beach........\
Prem: Hum abhi shadi kar le pls mai ne itna control kya mai na bahut intezar kiya hai tumhare liye mujhe daar tha ke tum na blo do giii
Heer: Prem i love you very much......Magar pehle saab ke saath discusss kar le phir thore din me shaadi kar le ge,,,,,,Itni jaldi kya hai

Prem hugs her and heeer hugs her intensely....He kissess his forehead and soon they start making out......Heer and pprem were so engrossed in each other that they didn't realie how late it was
Suddenly prem;s phone rang it was arohi....
Arohi: prem bhaiya aap kha hai ar heer didi kha hai>? 2 baj gaye hai
Prem : Hum aarahe hain......Humey tum logo ko kuch bohat important batana hai
Arohi: Kya
Prem: Aa kar bataoo ga
Arohi: Okay....JAldi aaye

Prem: Heer chalo aab SAb ko batade
Prem wraps his arm around heer;s waist and they walk towardds the car
In the car they held hands and were very close and both of them had never been happier........


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jamune thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww that so cute happie for premeer
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Continue soon!!!!!!!!!!! PM me when u update next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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