::Phalentine Week: Scene Contest Voting::

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::Scene Contest Voting::

Hello Kis Deshains...
As you may have remembered, we had Phalentine Week at Kis Desh...remember? And in that, we had a Scene Contest? So today, it is time to vote for your favourite scene!
Okay okay, before you all kill me for being so late, lemme tell you that for the whole time I had personal problems to deal with and then I got sick and had projects...sounds alot right? Well it was alot...😳 So please forgive me for being late and I promise, aage se nahi hoga!
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Rules:
~>Please only vote for TWO entries
~>Participants are NOT allowed to vote for thier own entry
~>DO NOT advertise your entries in any way
~>Please note that the scene has to be an original and that it HAS to revolve around/showcase the theme of Valentine
The last date to vote is June 25th, 2009
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Entries:
# 1

The opening tune of Ishq Hua floats through as Heer walks into her room, where she sees that Prem has left a note for her on top of her pillow while she wasn't there, telling her to meet him at 7:00pm at a special location.

As the time approaches, Heer makes her way to the location and is surprised to see all the lights dimmed except for one on the far side of the hall. But in the faint light she can make out rose petals on the ground indicating a certain path for her to take.

All of a sudden one floor light comes on, directed on Prem, who starts walking towards her, not breaking his gaze once. She is shocked at first, at how romantic this whole setting is, but then she decides to go along with her true feelings and so she makes a step towards him as well.

They both sit on the table, and she puts her hand on the table, and he reaches across and puts his on top, squeezing her hand ever so slightly, as to say, "This isn't a dream..."

After a few seconds she can feel someone behind her, and isn't the least bit startled as Prem slides his hands around her waist, and puts his chin on her shoulder.

"I love you..." He whispered ever so lightly. "Will you do me the honor of dancing this special Valentine's dance with me?"

She turned around and quickly just put her hands around his neck, "I never thought this would happen," burying her head in his neck, while he puts his arms around her waist, seizing her into a passionate hug, and slowly as the music floats towards them, they dance under the moonlight.

# 2

Soft candles gave the ballroom shadows'red roses scattered here and there'the music was soft'conversation even softer. Tonight was the Valentines Day ball'and all the lovers were invited. A legend states that Valentine's Day was named after a priest. A powerful king once thought single men made better soldiers, and banned marriage. St. Valentine found injustice in this law, and he married young lovers in secret. But when the king found out, he sentenced the priest to death. But St. Valentine's legacy lives on. This day is for love'love for family'love for friends' love for lovers.

Preet swayed with Heer on the dance floor. She made small talk with him, but her eyes were searching for a certain man with bedroom eyes and a boyish charm. Heer didn't realize preet look in another direction, and with a grin, he twirled her out of his arms. But before heer could react, another strong pair of arms circled her'and she knew. The arms that ignited her soul'made her belong'reassure her that yes'Heer is made for love'she is made for prem.

yeh naram naram nasha hai...badhtajaaye

koi pyaar se ghungatiya deta udaaye

Their faces where so close that all heer saw where his eyes'and she drowned in them. She didn't even realize that he had swayed her away from the crowed and into the balcony, where it was only them and the soft moonlight.

ab baawra hua mann

jag ho gaya hai roshan

Prem lifted her left hand and slipped a ring on her finger, the finger where a vein leads straight to the heart. Prem gently kissed heer's knuckles and looked deeply into her glistening eyes.

"Be my valentine Heer'for the rest of my life" He softly whispered.

yeh nayee nayee suhaagan

ho gayee hia teri jogan

A tear slipped down heer's face as she nodded. Heer whispered back, "I love you Prem." Prem pulled heer close and captured her lips with his.

koi prem ki pujaarun mandir sajaaye

saiyyan ...

Yes'St. Valentine's legacy lives on'

# 3
It was late night when Prem took me for a long drive it was really beautiful&romantic we r all alone in the dark road&cool breeze,the atmosphere bcom more beautiful as Prem play a soft music,everything was sooooo good!!cant xplain after some while Prem stopped the car by the side of a lake,I looked at him surprisingly he gave me a smile&tell me to get out of the car& I did,now we r standing infront of the lake,it was full moon&it reflecting on the lake,Thn Prem held my hand & we went closer to the lake&the sight make my heart stop I cant believe what im seeing there was a bat house decorated with lights&flower,I cant believe Prem did all of this for me it was soooooooo beautiful tht my eyes felt with tears,Prem wipe them with his thumb&said "I didn't bring u here to see u cry,I want to see your smile",I smile&hugged him by saying "I love you Prem".He hugged me back&took me toward the boat.He helped me to climb the boat now we r seating in the boat listening to the sweet sound of waves&watching the moonlight hand in hand after some time spending in silence Prem looked at him watch&said, Heer main thodi der mein atahu,just wait for me for a while,saying this he went inside the house&after some time he came with a heart shaped chocolate cake which has written "Happy Valentine Day"on it ,I stood up&he said, "Its 12am now Happy Valentine Day my angel" I got surprised totally I also said,"Happy Valentine to You,Thanks for making this night more special for me".thn we cut the cake &feed each other,after tht Prem said, "this Valentine night is incomple with out a dance so May I have the pleasure to dance with u??"&I say "Yes" holding his hand,We danced&I hugged him tightly so tht this time could stop here&we can lost in each other.
# 4
Heer decided to do something special for Prem She went out & brought something for him&then prepared everything which Prem love to eat,then she called Prem, "Hello,Prem
Prem:Ha Heer Bolo(smile on his lips),
Heer:
I want u to meet me on our old farm house" can u make it??
Prem: (confused)Y??whats matter??
Heer: Whn u come u ll get to knw.
Prem had reached the farm house but there was no sign of Heer,He called her name but no reply,Prem got tensed&looked for her here&there whn he saw some lights in the back yard,he follow the light & was surprised tht Heer had decorated the yard&also arranged a table with all his fav dishes& there was she looking gorgeous on her red saree,his eyes was widen&he was lost in her beauty.Heer come close to him&her soft voice bring him back to his sense thn she said "Happy Valentine Day&asked "Prem!!Kaisa Laga mera surprise?" "Beautiful!!,he narrow his eyes to her &added "but not more than u,"saying this he place a kiss on her cheek&wished her the same.Heer smile shyly,after having their dinner Heer gave Prem the present she bought for him,Prem had a big smile whn he opened the wrapper,it was a mandolium,Prem play it& Heer was lost in his rythem of love.Prem then asked "Ab maine to tuhari mang puri ki hai,now u have to fulfill my demend. Heer:" Pehle batao phir sochenge". Prem :No!!No way u have to do whaever I told u to do but dnt worry main jiada kuch nehi manguga.Heer:
Ok,I trust u.
Prem held his hand to Heer & asked for a dance,Heer just smile &took his hand.
Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe
Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe
Khamoshi ko Khamoshi se
Zindagi Ko Zindagi Se Baat Karne To Ho

Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe
Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe
Khamoshi ko Khamoshi se
Zindagi Ko Zindagi Se Baat Karne To Ho

Ankho mein Khojaye ankhe
Ankho mein Khojaye ankhe (they looked at each other eyes&lost in them)
Bole Haat se Haat (
they were playing with each others hand&now it loacked with each other)
Baho mein Chup me chupke saso se jaise dole raag (Now Prew twist Heer&he is facing her back&nuzzling her neck)
Prem twist her &now they r facing each other
Unglio ko unglio se osaho ko shokio se baat karne do ho
Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe
Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe
Khamoshi ko Khamoshi se
Zindagi Ko Zindagi Se Baat Karne To Ho

Hoto Par Hoto Se Likhe
Hoto Par Hoto Se Likhe (
Prem lower his heas to Heer's lips&kissed it passionately)
Dharti Se Amber tak Gunje Jismo Ka Sangeet(Prem realized Heer frm his passion she becom red&cant meet eyes with Prem,Prem Bring Her face to his eyes&Heer hugged him tightly by his neck&Prem also held her tightly with her waist) bekhudi ko bekhudi se Ashqui se ashquie ko baat karne do Ho

Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe
Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe
Khamoshi ko Khamoshi se
Zindagi Ko Zindagi Se Baat Karne To Ho

# 5

Prologue:

Juneja's had left for Village excluding Premeer coz Prem made an excuse of some office work.

13th February, 2009.

23:00 pm.

Prem comes home from office and had a gift in his hand for Heer..He asked Heer to go and change this for him and meet him in the parking at 23:30 pm sharp. Heer changes and do as Prem asked and they both left for a Hotel. Prem had reserved the hotel for the entire night. They reach there at 00.00 and Prem asked Heer to close her eyes. And he took her to the centre of the Hall.

He Sat down on his knees and says: Happy Valentines Day Heer!

Suddenly lights are turned on and Rose Petals start falling on Heer'

Prem: Ever since u entered my heart, it had understands the meaning of Love. U r my only desire, Ur the only passion.. I had waited for this moment through all my life just to say I Love You and will always Love you with same Passion. You Complete Me. Will I have the honor to dance with You?

Heer(Blush): Yes and Prem, I Love You too.

And They both dance to song "So Close"(Enchanted, same Choreography) and Hugged and Kiss on Magic Works (Harry Potter and The Goblet Of Fire)'

The End.

Costumes:

Prem-Black Suit, like he wore on 1st July, 2008 in KDMHMD.

Heer Dress is shown below'

# 6
( Additi gets notes from Harshad on Vday.....she follow those notes..he remind her imp places of their love in the notes, at last she reach in Dubai)
" Good Morning, Sweetheart...h r u? Happy Valentines day"
Additi is like " you too".
Harshad : " meet me on KDMHMD sets, Luv you.
Harshad "Remember this was the first time we met, and the moment I saw, just fell in love with you, and think so u did." " Meet me by the Siciliana".
Harshad : This was the place where I took you for dinner for the first time...we had your favorite Italian food here... and danced on Pheli Nazar Mein.. your favorite song" "Meet me by Love Garden"
Additi: "Jaannu, where are you want to meet you?"
Harshad: This was the place where we first argue about how should we spend our weekends.....was so silly...Promise you today from now on I will never argue with you" "Go home." Additi sees air ticket in her dresser...and leaves for Dubai...A " where are you, my honey".
( In Dubai) Additi yells and her voice echo: "Harshad...Harshad where are you???...come on....want to meet you so badly". (There comes the hero in Sanjay style Gajini) (Red shirt and black pant and chota coat).
Harshad bend down on his knees and says : Will you marry me", and take the diamond ring out.... fireworks saying " Will you marry me, Additi....I Love You
Additi: " I love you too, will marry you" .
Additi : " you did all this for me"
Harshad: " No, did for my makeup girl".
Additi :" yeah rite".
Harshad give Additi a tight hug, and lift her up in the air....( was about to give her a kiss but she pushed him and ran away).
# 7
She walked down the street and saw guys giving girls roses and some giving chocolate.. It was Valentine's day, a day she thought was special as on this day many hearts find each other and new love stories start.
"Kya hua Heer? What are you smiling at?"
She snapped out of her thoughts and looked at the figure standing in front of her. "Kuch nahin Prem. Woh bas aise hi..." she blushed and looked down.
"Ok then...Anyway aaj valentine's day hain. Tum kya kar rahi ho? Any plans?" he winked.
Heer just gave him a look. "You know that I'm going to stay home alone so why ask?"
"Well since me and you are obviously spending V-day alone, why not hang out together and celebrate being single?" he asked.
Heer stood there and deliberated for a while before letting out a sigh. "Fine."
"Good so I'll pick you up at 6?" Prem smiles and walks away before Heer can say anything.
Heer got ready and was waiting for Prem to come. Knowing him, he would probably be half an hour late. But she was shocked when she heard the doorbell ring. Prem was right on time. She followed him to his car and they drove silently.
After a while Heer got restless. "Prem, hum kahan ja rahe hain?"
Prem chose to ignore her and kept on driving. A while later they stopped at the beach. Heer gave Prem a confused look but he gestured her to follow him. She noticed a table set up with candles on it. She looked at Prem with many questions in her eyes but then looked at the sky do to the sounds of fireworks. It said
'Will You Be My Valentine?'.
"So Heer, will you?"
Heer looked down and nodded while Prem embraced her.
~*~
Hope to see you all vote!
Take care,
KDMHMD Dev Team

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kvashishat thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
ok i luved every entry but luved teh 2nd one
luv
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munam_13 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#3
my vote goes to no.2

but others were fab.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#4
#1 and #6 (#6 because it has Harshiti in it) 😛

I love all of them though! they're awesome!
shareen thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#5

All of them are fantastic..It's a tough choice..My vote goes to entry 1 and entry 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#6
Wonderful entries!
I vote for #2 and #4
Anhdara13 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#7
Entries 1 and 7.

Good luck guys!

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
#8
My vote goes to entry 4th and 7th..great work everyone..beautiful entries..it was really hard to pick just two..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#9
#4 and # 5

best of luck to all !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#10
they are all really nice but my vote goes to #1 and #2!!! =D

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