Echoesofpassion thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys i was bored so i made up a poem which is for harshad a.k.a Prem....
i LOVE harshad sooooooooooo much😳
he rocks!😉
so here's how it goes:
Sitting here remembering when
I saw the beauty rush out like a might wind
I never saw it before or bothered to notice
But now I see it and on it I am focused.
The gentleness of your voice
The way you make me feel
when I see your lovely smile.
The way you laugh and care for others
Even go beyond the extra mile.
I am focused on that
whether you believe me or not
My heart aches for you
And my stomach is in knots.
Now I had to declare,
The thoughts of my heart.
In hopes that you'd give me,
A place in your heart
😳😳😳

So guys...how was it? Did you like it?
please reply and comment guys plzz😃
plz share your thoughts on it


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Posted: 16 years ago
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"Now I had to declare,
The thoughts of my heart.
In hopes that you'd give me,
A place in your heart"
Waah ..waah ..waah!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: a_jalpari

"Now I had to declare,
The thoughts of my heart.
In hopes that you'd give me,
A place in your heart"

Waah ..waah ..waah!


thankuu so much😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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speechless poem i love poems n shairs n really luved urs ....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awwwwww thats soooooo cute!!!
it definetly expresses my feelings for Harshad as well!....haiii
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yeah it is awesome!
Edited by cameroon16 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: FRIENDZZZ_123

speechless poem i love poems n shairs n really luved urs ....


thanx a lot jaan😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank you very very much😳
you all made my day
thanx a lot guys for the lovely comments😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx a lot😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx a lot

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