Heer's memorable Birthday....Part II........Pg2...

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HELLO everyone.............Here's my next long one shot on Heer's B'day.........I just loveddddddddddddddd what they showed in the show...and i am sure u all must have enjoyed it all!..............And abb I only Hope u enjoy this one shot in five parts too...............😊
Here's the first long part................😊

It's a scene in the Juneja mansion where u see everyone getting gathered at the dinner table????.Prem and Heer come down too?????as the two reach the dining table where Gaytri was already present with lalit???Kirran (the creatives have forgotten him kya karein?...........)?????.and Harman??????.Prem tells Heer---- Main abhi aaya????😳

He leaves before Heer can even ask him where he was going??????.😕😲

There Kirran who was already starved a lot says--- Kya yaar..pehle eh Meher aur Preet pata nahiin kahaan gaayab hain?..aur abb yeh Prem bhi chalaa gaya?????Bhook ke maarey mere pet mein toh chuhey dance pe chane maar rahey hain?????😆😊

They all laugh as Heer leave for the kitchen to see whether the servants were done with the cooking?????

There Kirran asks Harman---- Waise yeh maya aur Veera bhi nazar nahiin aa rahey hain?????😕

Just then u see Maya and Veera walk in with loads of shopping bags???..as Harman whispers to Kirra jeeju---- Lo aa gayi Maya????apna favourite kaam shopping kar ke!.............Pehle toh yeh akele hii apnaa yeh shauk poora karti thi llekin abb isse apni judwaa behen Veera kaa bhi saath mil gaya hai????..😊

Kirran and Harman laugh as Lalit smiles too????while Maya goes over to gaytri and giving the bags to the servant she bends to touch her feet (Maskaa maarti hai yeh ladkii!)?????..and says---- Sorry maa zyaada time lag gaya????actually itnaa achcha samaan tha kii usse hii kahreedney mein waqt kaise beet gaya pata hii nahiin chala???..😊

Gaytri replies---- koi baat nahiin beta????abb tum donon upar jaakey fresh ho jaao dinner bhi taiyaar hai????.🤢

They both leave after maya tells Gaytri that she and Veera were planning to go to a common friend's house that night????.isliye the two even don't come to know about the surprise the Juneja house people were planning for Heer' B'day?????.Kya karein inn donon koo apney shaitaani iraadon se fursat miley toh aas paas kii duniyaa kii khabar hogi???..anyways I know u all will be glad by these two Witches' absence!....................👏

There Prem had reached Meher and Preet's room where?????u can see Pret standing in front of the mirror buttoning up his Kurta???while Meher is busy on the phone talking to someone???..she was saying--- Jii bilkul????Dekhiye kal shaam kii party kii decorations mein koi kami nahiin honi chahiye???..aur haan?ek baat aur????(Meher looks up to find Prem standing at the doorway and says to the person)???..Main abhi call back kartii hoon????..she keeps the phone down and says standing )???.Arre Prem jeeju aap?............aap kab aaye?!..............😊

Preet turns around and sees his bro standing in the doorway???.and he walks upto him???.while Prem????walks in?????..closing the door behind him he says---- Bas abhi aaya tha jab tum phone pe baat kar rahi thi????😊

Preet notices the tensed expressions on his bro's face and says--- Yeh kya kar rahey ho Prem bhaiya?..............😲

Prem asks him confused--- Abb kya kar diya mainne Preet?..............Aur wais etujhe decorations kaa kaam diya tha naa????abhi raat kii decorations kaa kaam tera hai?.aur vo Meher???..jisski responsibility kal shaam kii party kii hai vo kaam kar rahi hai?..aur aap relax hokey???..iss sheeshey ke saamney khadey hokey apne aap ko nihaar rahey hain?!!!!!!!!!!!!!...................😆😃

Preet replies trying to cool down his bro---- Meri taiyaari toh poori hai bhai?lekin aapkey chehre ke expressions toh dekhiye?!...............Bhabhi do minute mein samajh jaayeingii???..infact do minute bhi bahot zyaada hai?..vo aapko dekhtey hii samajh jaayeingii kii daal mein kuch kaala hai!.......................😆😉

Prem stares at Preet nodding his head in agreement---- Tu sahi keh raha hai Preet????.abb main kya karoon yaar!.................😕

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No replies...............😕
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is part 2 on the way????nice part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.
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Thanx prempadmasujal ...Glad u enjoyed it dear.next part asap...........😊
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Thanx Intellienough...glad u enjoyed it dear.next part coming soon.............😊
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waitingggggggggg for the next part asap.
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Thanx sweta.glad u liked this one too.next part asap.............😊
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Thanx dear.Glad u enjoyed this one too..............Next part asap...........😊
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Sorry to keep u all waiting.Lekin here's the next part.Hope u enjoy this one too.................

Preet replies trying to cool down his bro---- Meri taiyaari toh poori hai bhai…lekin aapkey chehre ke expressions toh dekhiye?!...............Bhabhi do minute mein samajh jaayeingii………..infact do minute bhi bahot zyaada hai…..vo aapko dekhtey hii samajh jaayeingii kii daal mein kuch kaala hai!.......................Aur yahaan toh poori kii poori daal hii kaali hai………..aur Bhai kaheen yeh naa ho……kii humaari kaali daal pakney se pehle hii hum sab kaa bhaanda phhot jaaye!................

Prem was in no mood to listen to Preet's such innovative analogies…isliye he tells him irritated---- Dekh Preet mere paas teri iss daal……….nahiin…kaali daal waali philosophy ke liye bilkul waqt nahiin hai isliye u better be quiet!................

Preet smile when he looks at Meher and finds he giggling…………

He tells Prem trying to reassure him---- Arre bhai aap kyun chintaa kar rahey ho?............Sab kuch sahi jaa raha hai………aur sab taiyaariyaan bhi ho gayi hain……….bas aapko………..dinner ke baaad bhabhi ko baahar ley jaana hai…aur sharp twelve o clock ghar mein entry karnii hai…..baaki sab hum manage kar leinge!................

Prem manages a smile as he replies--- Tu sahi keh raha hai Preet……….bas aaj kaa yeh chotaa saa surprise aur kal kii party achchey se nipat jaaye……..sab kuch Heer ko pasand aaye…that's it!............

Preet smiles and sasy naughtily---- Pasand kaise nahiin aayega?............Aapne bhabhi kii har cjoti badi pasanad naa pasand kaa khayaal rakhaa hai…………

Preet then says further asking Prem seriously---- Wais eek baat batao Prem bhaiya………….kal shaam ko jab bhabhi baahar gayi thi….aur humsab baith ke iss surprise kaa plan bana rahey the…………..aur baujii ne raat ko dinner party rakhney idea diya tha………..jisspe aam sehmati bhi ban gayi thi…………AAP kyun itna terribly desperate the party ko shaam ko hii wrap off karney ke liye?.................Kya koi aur bhi surprise plan kar rakhaa hai bhabhi ke liye?..............Bataa do………..aise shramaa kyun rahey ho bhai?!............

Prem glares at Preet trying hard to hide his surprise that howcome Preet came to know and hisexcitement of spending the evning alone with Heer!..............Prem says sounding angry--- Bahot baatey banaaney lagaa hai tuu Preet!.............Meher isski lagaam kheech ke rakhaa karo!............

Prem turns around to leave and as he makes his way outside the stern expression he had on his face just moment ago when he was instructing Meher vanished………..and Prem smile and blushes hard as he made his way back to the dining hall……………..😳

There Meher takes a step closer to Preet and says all smiles---- Preet…Heer didi kitnii lucky hai naa?..............Prem jeeju unsey kitnaa pyaar kartey hain…………..

Preet replies siling and putting his hand around Meher shoulder and bringing her closer to himself………..Haan Meher.aur Heer bhabhi ke liye bhi toh Prem bhaiya ke pyaar…………unkey saath se badhkar kuch nahiin hai……Waise yahaan iss kamrey mein……….aur koi bhi hai jo apni pyaari sii votti ko bahot pyaar kartaa hai…………

Meher looks up at Preet blushing hard and smiling ………..the two hug each other as Preet says--- I luv u Meher!.............

Meher replies--- I luv u too Preet!...............

The two of them make way for the dining hall together hand in hand and with broad smiles on their faces………………..😊

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