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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi guys
i know im getting all enthusiastic right?? two post in a single day verses zero in a couple of month😆
anyways this is my first oneshot for kis desh.
those on kitani mohabbat hai forum have probably read this. anyways ive just recycled it to suit prem heer

so here goes.



JUST ANOTHER DAY!!



As the clock struck seven, heer started to wind up work. It had been a long, tiring day.

Client after client, meeting after meeting had completely exhausted her. Being incharge of the company was no easy task. she wanted to do everything in her power to prove to the world that she could manage such responsibilities. Things were now finally shaping up. And with prems support and help she knew there was no looking back.


Falling in love with Prem had been most natural. they truly were a match made in heaven. She knew their relationship could with stand any storm. It amazed her that in hardly a few months they had dealt with every possible storm. Sure there were some rocky patches but that only strenghthen their relationship.

She had realised a long time ago that to make things work she would have to constantly fight and face all odds. Be it her mistaken identity thanks to her Daljeet chachi, the manmeet drama, sanjana, veera, maya or more recently sameer. It made no difference, absolutly none, 'cause she knew that one way or the other her destiny was prem. And his was her.



Merely thinking about him brought a smile to her face. Never in her wildest dream had she thought that she'd fall so madly in love with the person whom she barely knew, with whom her rishta had been made since she was a child, who lived on the other end of the world but the only one who understood the Heer Maan within, who accepted her without a word, who faught for her and most importantly who unconditionally loved her. Life, she thought, it does weird things, love does weird thing to people. And this was one of them.

Even though Heer and Prem were as different as oil and vineger. But when put together they were just as great as the salad dressing. They completed each other and needless to say they belonged to each other - mind, body and soul.


Lost in thought, she blindly tossed some files in her bag and turned around to leave.

'HEER!i', came in a stern, angry voice. Startled she dropped the files.

'gotchya', he added cheekily



'Prem!' exclaimed Heer with her hands on her hips, rolling her eyes. 'tum bhi naa'



While putting the files back on the table she felt two warm arms encircle her waist gently and felt him nuzzle at her neck.

Leaning against him she asked, ' abhi tak ghar nahi gaye?'



'I was waiting for you silly!!', he said resting his chi on her shoulder.



' oho! Aaj bohat pyaar aa raha hai! Kuch baat hai kya??



It was then suddenly that the lights went out. Gasping, Heer turned around and flung her arms around his neck, her head buried in his chest.



'kya baat hai! Aaj bohat pyaar aa raha hai', he copied her.



Scared and disoriented, Heer asked , ' yeh lights ko kya hua ?'



"chali gayee", Prem retorted smugly



Rolling her eyes Heer asked , 'kis liye?



'issliye" Prem responded by pulling her closer and stealing a kiss





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Hope u guys like it. Looking forward to your comments

Love

~Amana




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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
loved it...i was jus wating for this....i loved it.....and on the third last line u wrote arohi instead of heer....😳just thought id tell u..but other than that loved it....especially the light bit and prems response..u should definately write some more...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi ...it'S cute ,sweet and romantic.........keep the good work..

Edited by Deizy - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woow!! this was damn good yaar!!
well i wuld be elated if u wuld continue with this ff
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow!that was awesome!👏
gr8 work👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg! amana....its beautiful☺️ and amazing...😍.shot..aftr 2dy's crappy epi i got releif bcoz of ur shot..thank u😛 sooo much...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wonderful . ..do keep writing more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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VERY cute i loved it
specially the end
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aweeesome!!..i think everyone needed that after today's episode!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was a nice one shot, would love to read more...

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