DIL NE JISE APNA KAHA(FF)updtd Pt 17 pg51 28/10 - Page 21

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kptl

preet and heer🤣🤣
and poor meher....
y dont they jst confess...and im liking gay3's caring side...

Hey thanks...... But lemme tel u d confession is not happenin so soon dear........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Wonderful part

Preet and Heer 😆
Thanx for the PM

Cant wait for the next part

Thanks 4 likin it!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: monaghosh

SIMPLY WONDERFULL⭐️⭐️⭐️PLZ NEXT TIME PUT A VERY LONG ROMANTIC😉 MEET SCENE & DONT BRING ANY CONFUSION BETWEEN MEET😛UPDATE SOON.
Hi! DEAR,UR LINK OF UR FF,SS & OS IS NOT VISIBLE IN MY INBOX,SO CUD U PLZ SEND UR LINK IN THIS FF PAGE OR GIVE ME THE NAME OF ALL UR FF,OS & SS PLZZZZZZZZZZ,THANKS A LOT.

I GOT THEM
PLZ CONTINUE UR FF 1.SOCHA NA THA & 2.JUST LOVE ALSO ALONGWITH 3.DIL NE JISE APNA KAHA AND CONTINUE UR ONE SHOTS 1.TV AND MEET(ITS REALLY INTERESTING) & 2.TU JAHA MAIN WAHAN.
THANKS 4 WRITING SUCH EXRAVAGANT AND FABULOUS FF & ONESHOTS SPECIALLY MEET ONES,KEEP WRITING LIKE THIS.

Heyya,
Thank u for commentin and appreciatin my fic!!!!!!!!!!............N ya dear Tv n Meet n Tu jahaan main Wahaan are short stories and are not fanfictions.........
Luv,
Rhea
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: foxi

great update.....thank u dear!!!.......preet and heer part was really funny......hmmm did meher forget about the kiss?......and what is gayatri up to......

well lets jst say u are to figure it out by readin d fic!!😉😉
pls give us some cute meet scene

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: meetun66

really an awsome update

continue as soon as u can
remmembr tht evry1 is waiting
love MEET, miss MEET

Hey thanks dear.........Wel ya i'l keep dat in mind!!!..............I miss Meet too!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: alviraz

wuttt is thisss yaar???!! first u keeppp us waitingg for soooo loongg n all we get is only shorttt updateee?!?! not done rheaa!! 😡 😛 😳

Shorry dear!!!....D next update wil b long pakka!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnime

Oye Rhea .. I knw m extremely late ! *hold ears* .. bt main kya kar sakhti hoon, I've not been around ths forum evr since Preet's death in the show .. isliye I read all the FFs secretly .. 😳.U better be!!!.......But this time ur forgiven!!😊

ok bout the previous part :
Preet romancing Heer was 🤣 nd Heer telling it to Kuldi leaving an embarrassed Preet 🤣 .. my poor Preet .. but ek doubt, Preet hasn't yet realized his love nor did he confess his love to Mehr, besides he was already in love ( or dating ) someone else and this marriage was only a compromise .. so how can he romance her ? But aftr the kiss, I think this was more flirting than romancing loll .. clear my doubt 😉....Well well wel sum 1 seems confused......its upto u to figure out!!!

And Mehr, apparently she forgot about the kiss but remembered about everything else ( drunk, party, fight .. ) and now G3 wanna tell her about Ash .. hmm wrong timing ! But Mehr already knows about Ash, so not a big deal .. hmm rught knw, I can see two possibilities .. either Mehr will get close to Preet as per G3's instructions in order to win Preet's heart ( u knw, insecurities et al ) .. or Mehr will try to keep distance from Preet, nd Preet will try to come closer to Mehr, hence really fall in love with her in the process .. and at the same time both Mehr and Preet will realize each other's value and importance in their own lives ..hmmmm nyc ya u knw u can go in for writin ur own fanfics!!.... but I'm sure you'll bring another twist instead 😆......U know me so wel wat can i se!!😆

But I enjoyed reading this part despite its shortness ! 😉 Now you update !! 😡 And I want a long one !!.....
See, my comment is longer than your update !! 😆 .. LOLzzzz....is dats so??...update asap !! and best of luck to your exams 😳,......hmmm im in desp need of dat!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part- 13

"Kya tum Preet aur Ash ke baare mein jaanti ho", she asked

"Preet aur Ash??", her head was throbbing and she couldn't understand why Gayatri was bringing up this''

"Beta v-voh main'.Lonavala mein'"..She told Meher how she heard Ash talking to Preet's photo'.Accusing him of betrayal and ruining her life''.

"Beta main toh soch bhi nahi sakti thi ke Preet kisi aur se''''Beta main jaanti hun ke tum par kya beet rahi hogi''.Preet ne sirf tumhe hi nahi hum sab ko dhoka diya hai'''.Par beta tum chinta mat karo voh mera beta zaroor hai lekin main tumhare har kadam par tumhare saath hun "

"M-Ma Preet ne mujhe koi dhoka nahi diya'''.Infact unhone khud hi mujhe apne aur Ash ke bare mein bataya tha'''..Ma Preet aur Ash ek dusre se bahut pyar karte the'''Magar Preet ne mujhe aur is ghar ko bachane ke liya apna pyar kurbaan kardiya''Unhone mujhse shaadi hone ke baad usse saare naatey tod diye''Ma Preet ne aaj tak sirf apna farz nibhaya hai magar kabhi bhi apne pati hone ka adhikar tak nahi jataya''.

Gayatri was shocked and broken after hearing this'.She couldn't believe that her son had gone through so much''''Without thinking of the emotional turmoil he had been going through she'd blamed him''''She cursed herself for not trusting her son's intentions'

At the breakfast table:

Heer and Kulraj were laughing recollecting the events of the previous night while Preet sat in of the corners quietly''Meher was in the kitchen''''..

"Tum dono itne has kyun rahe ho??", asked Kiran

"Vo bhaiya kal raat Preet ne'..", said Heer

"Bhabhi please ab bas bhi kijiye!!", Preet exclaimed'

"Ab aaya na unth pahad ke neeche'''..", said Kulraj

"Arey aisi kaun si baat hai humein bhi toh pata chale"

"Bauji voh kal raat na'"..She narrated the entire incident leaving everyone in peels of laughter.

Meher was surprised to see everyone laughing their hearts out apart from Preet who seemed visibly embarrassed...She wondered what made The Great Preet Juneja go red''Looking at Meher's expression Kulraj said:

"Arey Meher pata hai kal raat Preet ne kya kiya"

"Meher voh mujhe meri tie nahi mil rahi please aake dhund so", Preet interrupted and took her into the room''.. He couldn't allow them to tell her'''I mean what would she think??''..He had had enough of it''.He couldn't let them ruin his image in front of his wife!!!

Meet's room:

"Preet bahar sab is tarah kyun has rahe the??"

"Vo-voh kuchh nahi Meher ''..Please voh meri black tie dhund do", he said trying to change the topic''

"Baat mat badlo Preet'''.Main jaanti hun sab kal raat ki wajah se hans rahe the'.I'm sorry Preet tumhe meri vajah se itna kuchh sehna pada'..Pehle bauji ki daant ohir yeh sab"'''.She was as it feeling ashamed of herself but the incident at the breakfast table added to her guilt''

Preet was perplexed as to what Meher was saying but once he understood he felt somewhat relieved that she did not know the truth''

"T-tumhe sorry kehne ki kya zaroorat hai'''..Jo bhi hua achha hua"'saying so he sighed deeply remembering their passionate kiss'''.Meher looked up at him and gave him a look which said Are-u-insane??...Realizing what crap was he saying he said'

"V-voh mera matlab hai ki achha hi hua ki tum behosh thi varna pata nahi kaise react karti'."

"Hmmm'Par sab kya soch rahe honge mere baare mein''.Kash kal raat hum vahaan na gaye hote"

"Agar nahi gaye hote toh tum mere kareeb kaise aati", He said mostly to himself..

"Kya??",asked Meher

"Kuchh nahi ab jo hua usse bhool jao'..Sab ek do din baatein karenge phir bhool jayenge''.Tum bas meri tie dhund do"'..He made her turn towards his cupboard holding her shoulders'''The mere touch of his hands made Meher shiver''..Steadying herself she concentrated on the task put before her''.Accomplishing it she turned to collide into him''.

"Y-yeh lo tumhari tie", she said not looking at him'..Preet snaked his hands through her waist to bring her closer and said as huskily as possible

"Tum pehna do na"

His touch was driving her insane'..She could feel his breath on her neck, making her stomach twirl''.

Her hands were shaking but she managed to tie a decent knot inspite of the proximity between them'..

"Ho gaya",she said meekly...

"Hmmm", he said without really comprehending what she was saying''.He loved the discomfort she was facing and the way her cheeks went red when he pulled her close to him''.

"Preet ho gaya", she repeated'

"Oh", he said coming out of his reverie, releasing her he went to the mirror to get ready'..

He saw her leave the room hurriedly''..Her innocence made him wanna laugh and cry at the same time''.Inspite of the fact he loved what transpired between them the previous night he decided to take things slowly with her''..

In the evening:

Gayatri was sitting like a statue on the bed lost in her own thoughts when Meher entered her room''Meher cleared her throat to make her presence known'''

Gayatri looked at her for moment and then continued

"Tu-tum dono ne aaj tak apne rishtey ki sachai hum se chhupai'''..Mere bete ne apne pyar ko kho diya aur humein laga ke voh apni nayi zindagi mein khush hai''.Ek ma hokar main apne bete ke dil ki baat nahi samajh pai'.."

"Mere bete ne bahut kuchh saha hai Meher magar ab main usse uski khushiya lautana chahti hun'''Akhir kab tak tum dono yeh samjhote ki zindagi jeete rahoge??''

Meher couldn't understand where this conversation was heading but one thing she knew that something bad was about to come and her thoughts confirmed when Gayatri asked her:

"Meher mere bete ne tumhare liye bahut kuchh kiya hai kya tum mere bete ka pyar usse vapis lautane mein meri madad karogi??"

P.S.:I know after reading this part you guys wanna kill me rite now for bringing about this twist but believe me its gonna be worth it!!!...All i'd say at this point of time is that i believe in happy endings😉😉.....I guess this'l put off your tension a li'l!!!..Do leave by your comments!!!

Edited by Rhea_401 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part
but please, i really hope that u stick with the "happy ending" motto, and ah, meher and preet confess their love for each other
lol cant wait for more
xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice twist. waiting for more.

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