|| From Darkness To Light || A Surprise One Shot!

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This one's been in the works since forever, long before this "special person" disappeared, but now that she's somewhat back--I decided to write it for her! 😃 I hope she enjoys it! 😃

Rink groaned as she made her way into the house, completely drenched in the rain. "Why does it ALWAYS have to rain here in Mumbai?" She muttered as she closed her umbrella and set it down by the entrance of her friend's house.


"Oye Nupur ki baachi!" She shouted as she walked through the lobby. "Kahan ho?" She shook her head as she sat down peacefully in the living room. "Ek to khud mujhe bulati ho aur phir gayab hojati ho," Rinki looked back towards the door and got a confused look on her face. I wonder how the door was open. Where IS that girl? While still waiting for Nupur to come back Rinki survey's the whole apartment and then hears some noise coming from upstairs. "Is somewhere there?" she mutters to herself. "Oh maybe it's just Nupur."


Rinki quickly got up and made her way up the stairs, hoping to see her friend Nupur somewhere around. Being in her friend's house without her made her feel anxious; this wasn't normal AT ALL. She knew Nupur was kind of out of it occasionally, but this was different. Rinki felt a bit scared as she got closer to the noise.


"Excuse me?" she whispered into the darkness, afraid of switching the light in case something went wrong*


"Whose there?" She heard a voice ask but what surprised her the most was that it wasn't a girl's voice. There was something about this voice. It made her spine tingle, and even left her toes feeling a bit tingly.


"I came here first," she spoke into the darkness and heard laughter in response. "Something funny?"


"Well I've been here long before you, and to me it seems YOU'RE the intruder!" The voice accused.


"Well excuse me!" Rinki felt a bit offended now. She was in her own friend's house. "This is my friend's house. What are you doing here?"


"This is getting old," the voice muttered, and then suddenly there was a flash and the person who the voice belonged to was holding a cell phone close to her face.


Rinki was stunned. He was much taller than her, and his mouth was curled up into an alluring smile. She wasn't quite sure why but she wanted to smile back, just to see what would happen next—but then what he said startled her.


"Not bad—"


"S'cuse me?" Rinki retorted pushing him away. "What do you mean?"


"I—uhh..." He stuttered, and stepped away from her, flicking the light in the process.


"What happened?" Rinki asked crossing her arms. "No answer now?"


"That's not true," He smiled stepping closer to her again. "I'm gonna ask you again—what are you doing here?"


"You know you could answer that as well because as far as I know—" Rinki casts him a look from top to bottom. "You're definitely not Nupur."


He laughed again, making her smile. "You have an observant eye,"


"I do indeed," She grinned back at him.


Suddenly they both heard a loud bang coming from downstairs and they both went to the banister to go check.


"Nupur!" Rinki exclaimed. "Where the heck have you been? Tum bhool gayi kya? Ke tumne mujhe aaj bulaya hain?"


Nupur held both her ears, looking up at both of them. "Sorry yaar. I had to go run an errand. So I see you two have met?"


Rinki and the guy both quickly glanced at each other and then he answered. "In a way," he tilted his head to the side.


"In a way?" Nupur asked. "Matlab?


"Mile bhi hain—aur nahi bhi." He winked down at Nupur.


"Bhaiyya! Aap bhi na!" Nupur shook her head and went into the kitchen.


"Bhaiyya?" Rinki turned to him and asked.


He backed up and leaned against the wall in a 'sexy' manner while nodding. "I'm Preet."


Preet...That was a really nice name and it really seemed to suit him. "Nice to meet you,"


She just about turns around to go when a hand grabbed her and pulled her back. "You never said your name," He whispered in her ear, leaving her feeling breathless.


"Oye Rinkz! Get down here," Nupur called up.


Rinki pulled away from him, blushing at that thought of her being so close to him.


"Rinkz? Short for something?" He smiled.


"Rinki," she answered.


"That's pretty. It seems to suit you," He grinned, making her tingle again.


She shook her head, while about to walk down again to join Nupur.


"Wait," he called out.


"Kya?" she turned back and asked.


"Can we go out sometime?" He winked at her.


"What?" She asked, completely confused that he could be so blatant.


"Can....we....go...out...sometime?" Preet enunciated for her.


Rinki narrowed her eyes and slapped his shoulder. "I understood it the first time! I was just making sure I heard it right."


"Well?" Preet asked.


Rinki goes down the stairs and then looked up at him from the bottom of the stairs and nodded.


"For what?" He leaned on the banister and raises his eyebrow.


"To go out..." She winked at him and walked away.


Preet grinned as he saw her disappear in the kitchen. There was something about this girl—she was different than all the other girls he met and that made him realize maybe that old saying was true. 'Somewhere someone is made for you...'


*cringes* So how was that? 😳 I really hope Rinki likes it! 😃 *hugs for her*

Love you,

Meera😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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MINE!!
-edited-
Yesh i know, this is long overdue 😆
Srry, me and my running arnd, *mutters to self*
anyhoo...me ish here to comment!
Yayyy! A one shot for me, i love these, they're so fun to read. *twirls* 😆 Oooh...rain! ☺️☺️ i love rain, did u know? =] Aha, just reading Nupur made me laugh, cuz i know something crazy is bound to happen with me and her together, can u imagine the chaos we'd cause? 😆 But srsly, she left the door open? 😲 was it for me or was she expecting some lover of hers? 🤔🤣
Okay noise from upstairs usually means don't go there when u dont know who it is! 😳 but seeing as it is ME! 😆 I'll go and check it out...hoping its someone i know, and not some crazy looking dude come to kill me 🤔 anyhoo..going up the stairs...into darkness...
and btw, nupur out of it occasionally, ur jking rite? she's alwys out of it 😆
Now, back to the into darkness part...😆 Ayi-ya, i whisper. U know in real life i prolly wudn't go there without a bat in my hands, and i wud so turn on the light and start hitting the person...😎 ahem, anyway, back to fic me. Oooh-lala, who is it speaking back to me? *wiggles brows* let it be one of the hotties! 🤪 muahaha!
"i came her first"...rlly? I thought the dinosaur came first, but oh well, if thts wht i think, who am i to say anything abt it? And a laugh..ooh lala, feeling all tingly, SMEXY! 😆 Ooh! Celly! Gimme! *holds out hands*...no? Fine then sheesh, attitude Mr. *rolls eyes* 😆
Ah, he prolly is REALLY taller than me...hell kimz is taller than me and she's younger than me 😵 So sad. But yikes, smexyy man! Forget the celly, how abt u come with me Mr? *cute muh* ☺️
Ah..wht a typical boy, "Not bad.." *shakes head* how rude, u shud be telling me something sweet not saying things to make me feel like some item on sale at the market nite! But then again, its a guy! Only Prem and the other romantic lovers wud be romantic on first meetings, 😆
Ayi haye, nakhre wali Rinki is here! i wud've smacked him 😆 but yes, asking questions in an angry voice with arms crossed sounds good too 😉 Hah he stuttured...how cute! *pinches cheeks* can i cuddle him? 😆 Its been a while since i made some guy stutter not including the times i say smart alek stuff at school..🤔😆
Ooh, me looking him up and down, did i rate him in my mind? 😆 Yayy nupur is there! ⭐️ but dude, wht a bad time! i was jst getting cozy wit mr. stranger here! 😆 Bhaiya? I had to fall for the bro of the best friend! 😆 Oye hoye! Sexy manner, Preet...now thts wht im talking abt! *greedy muh* 😆
Okay i will admit, i did giggle at the prt of him pulling me bak and all 😍 and him whispering in my ear... hayyye main marjawan! *faints* 🤪🤪 😆
Yayy he likes my name! *twirls arnd* 😆 aye, calling me back again? Tauba, wht does he want this time? My phone number! 😆 but i so wud give it! 🤣
I am not stupid! I understood the question...was just thinking it over, *roflmao*
Ooh! me walking away and then jst nodding at him...i loved tht!
Aww..."Somewhere someone is made for you" so cute, i love tht quote! ☺️
Omygosh! MEERUU! I loved it! *hugs* it was smexyy...😍
Now only if this wud happen in real life...i wud die happily 😆
I love you! 🤗
- Rinks


Edited by ~Rinki~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Well, I think her enthusiastic reserving of the spot said something no? Anyways, this is my spot!

*edited*

Rinki and Preet, what a first meeting! 😆 The Vixen and her Prat, eh Rinkz?😉😆 And Nupur and Preet are siblings?

I just love their first meeting, in the dark, both thinking the other is an intruder! I'm surprised they didn't start randomly throwing things at one another. They both are the type. 😆

And Nupur, forgetting Rinki was coming, so like her. 😆 I loved it, as usual.

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Can't wait to see what all of you think! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ooh a one shot for Rinki? I'm sure she'll love it =)
Reserved =)
Posted: 16 years ago
#6
*pouts* Because it's Rinki I'll share Preet.....

Loved it - AHAHA NUPUR ROCKS! 🤣 I just see her name and start laughing - Nupur and Rinki together?!?! Love it!

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you Shabo! 😳 It was going to be you....but I guess you'd kill me for making Preet your brother! 😆
Posted: 16 years ago
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^^^ Underestimate of the year. *preens*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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So I've decided...I want this one shot...unreserved please! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Well, I think her enthusiastic reserving of the spot said something no? Anyways, this is my spot!

*edited*

Rinki and Preet, what a first meeting! 😆 The Vixen and her Prat, eh Rinkz?😉😆 And Nupur and Preet are siblings? Teehee...I was going to add that in at the end, but I didnt wanna ruin the effect it had!😆😆😆 Yup they are in this one!😛

I just love their first meeting, in the dark, both thinking the other is an intruder! I'm surprised they didn't start randomly throwing things at one another. They both are the type. 😆Thanks! 😳 Yeah... tried a mature version here!😉😆😆

And Nupur, forgetting Rinki was coming, so like her. 😆 I loved it, as usual. Thanks for liking! 😃

Love,
Radz

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