||GUNS N ROSES|| - PART 13 - PG 35 - 1 april UPDT! - Page 2

Ohh cool.....love the conceptt.......interestingg......please add me to the PM list as well........do continue soon. :)

its very good n unique....
i really like Prem being a good don.....
plz update soon..
i l b eagerly waiting..

hey. this is a great start to the story. its unique and interesting. cant wait to read about good don prem. please continue soon.

hey bhai
that was awesome. I really like the concept...prem as Don....seems very interesting. I love the story so far. cant wait to read more and see scenes of premeer, meet, and arjuhi...I like all three of them. plz add me to the PM list and continue soon. 😊

Originally posted by: Casssp

very nice bro i was waiting for it plz continue soon and plz add me in ur pm list too😳<br>

aww sis thanks alot for d comment... 😳 😳 😳

Originally posted by: luv4bb

amazing start.love to read further.continue soon.also add me to the pm list.<br><br>fatima<br>

hey fatima thanks dear....

Originally posted by: princess8

hello parth

I like James bond type of stories with luv.. yu presented yur FF amazingly & 3 jodis ar perfectly fit to roles..back story was impressively narated..gud job dude...keep it up...add me in yur pm list

Sree

hey sree thanks alot...i got inspired by james bond only but this ll be lil different....next part is cuming soon...hehe

Originally posted by: Intellienough

wow..i loved the concept of prem being The good Don.lovely begining.Add me in your PM list too.I am also waiting for your Hidden cinderalla ff.

hey sis thanks dear....THC ll b updated soon too...

Originally posted by: bd670816

amazing start.love to read further.continue soon.

thanks dear....hope u like it again

Originally posted by: jamune

cant wait plz pm me for next update

ok dear i ll....n thanks for d reply...